Hello there I stumbled upon this story not sure what to expect cause I'm not a huge horror fan, but I was surprisingly delighted this prologue
Plot: From the prologue I gathered a little bit about the plot, and where the story is going, it leaves you with questions as to where its going next. Where is she getting dragged to? Whats the importance of the clock? It's always good to leave the reader asking questions at the end of a chapter, it makes them want to read more.
Characters: You've done a good job at describing what the girl is going through and the raw emotion of it all is really good.
Spelling/Grammar: I didn't see any mistakes while reading this.
Overall Impression: It's a good start with lot of room to be expanded from, it'll be interesting to see where this short story goes.
Wow, you have an amazing talent for writing poems,
I absolutely love the way you wrote this, I love how it has a moral to it.
I love how it flows so genuine and perfectly well.
I really just enjoyed this poem as a whole,
I'm glad a stumbled upon it, you really have a true knack for this from what I've read.
I didn't find anything wrong with this poem, the whole thing was just so well-rounded and great.
I love the idea of this writing piece.
A lot of people have felt like this after lacking sleep,
you do such a good job at describing how a sleep deprived person sees the world.
How they feel a sense of darkness, like they have no life just walking zombies.
I enjoyed how you wrapped it showing the person as sane once morning arrives.
I really enjoyed reading this little piece of work.
My family and I have always had dogs since I can remember, they really do change people's lives
whether or not we even realize it at the time.
I love lesson to your post, and how you gained so much from a dog that just happened to fall into your lap.
You've done a lovely job at expressing how you felt in the beginning to how your feelings changed in the end.
Again just an overall great story with a great lesson to it.
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