For a short story I can tell you put out a lot work on it keep it up and you can make more work like this I really enjoy this and I see a bright future for you in making short story books for people to read and enjoy as I did so keep it up and push forward.
I love this poetry keep it up your work is helping me learn how to make one for myself in the future and maybe share it with the world one day when I feel comfortable to do so but it was inspiring and I hope this inspiration help you in as well to make more.
It was a good read I love the dedication you have put into this keep it up hope every enjoy your work as much as I did I can tell you put much heart into it and made a good story that other could enjoy keep it up don’t stop making more and get even better you might make actual book in the future.
For a short story it was dark I didn’t expect that but you did a really good job on this maybe even try to make longer story if they come out as good as this I’ve had my fair share of short story but this was good keep up the great work and hope to see more to give you my honest on them in the future.
Wow you did real good with this I’m being honest here great work you inspired me to try and work on my story to see if I could finish it and finally be able to share with the world keep it up who know you might inspire more people around and they would share their thoughts on your work it’s very good I love it.
This hit me in the feeling bro I see why friend are supper important and this poetry just show if your there and have their back they are there for you and would always be happy for you and not envy you for anything great job on this and keep doing more
Wow great job my friend keep it up don’t let anyone stop you from doing more of this work I believe in you don’t let your dreams be dreams my friend keep moving forward can’t wait to see more of your work now be safe and keep the good work I enjoy this a lot i was so inverse in the story and love every tiny detail you put in to it
Not bad need a little more tweaking but it’s good keep it up I enjoy it very much I can’t wait to see more works like this from you I had a great laugh with this I wasn’t expecting it and I enjoy it very much stay safe and improve your work even more.
This make me feel to kiss someone one so badly but it’s cute and romantic to know how a poetry can change someone feeling and change their mood keep it up it’s nice to see people try to make new poetry and it’s really nice to see them being done right most don’t know what they doing you seem to know so keep it up
Seem like it’s not a bad idea maybe add a few more character and you a small story right there unless you want to make it bigger then go ahead but it’s not a bad idea it’s really good incentive I want to see more and how it turns out keep it up friend and be safe
Okay it needs more work on if I’m being honest and it’s not bad if your work on it a little bit more it’s should be good in the start and around the middle the end part is fine how it is so no worry on that but that my opinion I don’t know what other would think be safe and keep it up.
I enjoy reading this short story of yours it was nice how the husband and wife embark on there vacation and how the cat was driving them crazy but I love it if you have more work like this I’d like to read and enjoy it give more detail on your next work and it would be more enjoyable than ever.
I’m not much of a poetry person but this is not half bad I want to learn to do some poetry and see how you wrote this had me curios but now that I saw it seem not that hard to write my own if you have more of this I’ll gladly look in to your work to learn more.
I think you can make this to a even better fantasy story and have more detail and longer but it’s not bad I do hope you make more of this and keep it up my friend don’t give up I believe that you can get even better and make a even more awesome work keep it up hope to see more of your work in the future
Wow great job my friend keep it up don’t let anyone stop you from doing more of this work I believe in you don’t let your dreams be dreams my friend keep moving forward can’t wait to see more of your work now be safe and don’t let other push you around.
Wow great job my friend keep it up don’t let anyone stop you from doing more of this work I believe in you don’t let your dreams be dreams my friend keep moving forward can’t wait to see more of your work now be safe and don’t let other push you around.
Keep it up my friend I believe in you don’t let your dreams be dreams and and don’t let anyone tell you you did a bad work I believe you can keep it up and I hope to more work from you y friend I enjoy this very much and looking forward for more of it.
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