A preatty great article that sells the reader on the subject and uses a fine selection of words to describe everything in artful detail. It keeps the reader engaged and is clear about what it's selling. Only slight issue might be that it is to vague with the descriptions but that could be more a result of the subject matter.
A very short interactive. But it has some fairly long focused paths. It is straightforward and great. It a simple goal of just watching one woman grow and it does that effortlessly. With such a simple plotline it succeeds. With very little variety it is still a great macro interactive.
Saddened by how short this interactive is. I find it's ideas to be interesting and fun to explore in different ways. The only detriment being that it is so short. I might be a side effect of the story being kind of one note in the grand scheme of things as each path is based on the same concept.
The story is short and has many different expansions in it. This makes it so the story is quite hard to find what you like reading it. But as I found a part of the story that was enjoyable I still find the interactive to be quite good. Even if it has a slight identity crisis with it's different expansion forms.
Really nice growth interactive. It's straightforward and features detailed growth stories that make the story rich. The only critique I could find would be that I don't find many story paths that have extremely interesting ideas. That's more of a nitpick though and isn't the fault of the owner.
A great macro philia interactive with some great story paths. I especially enjoy more focus on growth and the choice between girl and boy perspective. It's just a bit sad that a few chapter paths have basically become duds because of some poor writing cutting the story short.
A pretty great story with good word usage to keep the text interesting. For a story about bleakness and murder, sentence variety is key and you nailed that. The only actual critique I have of the text might be more of a formatting issue of the site, but I would recommend that you divide the stories different paragraphs more frequently. It makes it easier to read.
A straightforward and effective interactive about the size and macro philia. It has extensive opening choices that result in a large and extensive interactive with many different varying growth stories. Though the hard rule of not ending the story I find excessive as it limits story potential and is largely unnecessary.
A great fan-fiction fusion between my hero and the expansion fetish. I especially like the creative freedom you give the users of the site, even to allow deaths. It all makes the interactive very welcoming to write in, even if I don't plan on using that freedom.
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