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Review of Empty Chair  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (4.0)
This was well written but I felt it could be more descriptive on it
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Review of Crimson Jewels  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (1.0)
This poem was confusing and I could not understand what you was trying to say.because of the way you wrote it
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Review of Wasted years  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Great poem it was clearly that your uncle had pain in his eyes and knew he had a problem but could not stop drinking no matter how hard he tried. Alcoholism is very tough to write about and many people fail to realize that alcohol is a disease and not an addiction. Once you get sober the recovery process takes years to do and sometimes the rest of your life.
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Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (4.0)
It was well written but not sure who you are talking to. Who is it your talking about? Otherwise good job
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Review by pearl palmer
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Awwwwwwwwwwww how sweet. I could see the cat in each word I could feel the pain that you had loosing the cat. It was great. Keep up the good work.
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Review of Who am I?  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (4.0)
Great job. It was confusing at first but i loved how you kept people in suspense
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Review of Thank you  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (5.0)
That was great I loved how you wrote a thank you into a poem
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Review of Strawberries  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (3.0)
This was good but i was not sure if you was talking about an allergy to strawberries or what.
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Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (4.0)
Good job and well written. I feel as though this poem is lacking more description though.
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Review of That Girl  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (4.0)
Good poem but I felt as though it could have been better. More description and more detail
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Review of Friends  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: ASR | (1.0)
This was more like a single paragraph then a poem there fore I did not understand what you was trying to say. A poem needs to be written in stanzas so that it is easier to under stand
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Review of lovers  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (1.0)
This is more like a run on sentence then a poem. I was not even feeling anything. When writing poems write in stanzas
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Review of Winter  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (5.0)
You described winter to a tee. Great job it was a best description of it. I could see and feel the cold. Great job
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Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
great job it was well written and the description was great you get a five point 0 for the great job. The military dies not get enough credit they deserve nor do the soldiers so thanks for writing this
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Review of Dream  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (3.0)
It was well written but could have a bit more detail in it. I could see the details in it but not really feel anything. good job.
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Review of Poor Kid  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
I felt the kids pain at every punch i could see the kid in agony as he cries. I can see the blood as it pours from his nose. I can hear the kid screaming stop. I feel that this could use a little more detail though. I also feel sorry for the kid. Great job
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Review of Bleeding  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow that was great I could feel your pain of loosing someone. I could feel the pain you was feeling inside as well. The descrption was great too. Great job
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Review by pearl palmer
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
hahahaah great story she set them all up to meet casue she is a player
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Review of Words  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (5.0)
Perfect description for words. Words are powerful indeed and can hurt so your descrpetion on it was perfect good job
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Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | N/A (Unratable.)
Great job and well written a lot of descriptive words too and i could fill however I felt as though it could have been a bit longer
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Review by pearl palmer
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
That was great and I am waiting for more to come you kept me going on that one good job
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Review by pearl palmer
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
This had me so confused until the last of it then I realized that the little girl was dead too. I could not really get into this story either because I was confused. Who was the little girl and how did Adam die? I fill as if this story could use a little more detail
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Review of Betrayal  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
This was a good poem and it talks about the ugliness of being betrayed. It could have used a bit more detail though because I did not feel your pain. It could also have used a bit more words to describe the pain. for example I felt the knife being shoved deeper in my heart each day. Your grammar was good and your punchution was good too. Great job and a great poem
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Review of Stones of Red  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow this was greatly done. I could see myself looking down at the grave as a young child. Great job
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Review of MY PERFECT MAN  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (2.0)
Ok this poem was good but I felt that the lack of space made it hard to understand it. It looked like the words were just tossed around. You had detail but I gig not feel anything when I read it. and I could not sense your pain so therefore I can't give you high marks.
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