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Review of Foggy Morning  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I was confused through out and I even read it twice and still did not get it. It was well written though.
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Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Great job this was well written and very descriptive. I could see a very elderly couple as they walked down the street. Great job and keep writing
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Review of Sicily  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (4.0)
This was great and at first I thought you was talking about a woman but then it turned out that you was talking about the country good job it was well written
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Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (5.0)
I could feel you wrote this with heart and out of love for your son. Keep writing this was great
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Review of Film  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (1.0)
Sorry to say but this poem seemed rushed I felt as if it could have used more detail. When you right you gotta slow down and take your time
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Review of Lovebird  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (5.0)
Funny and well written good job
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Review of Ache  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (5.0)
I could feel his pain that he felt when loosing that lover Great job and keep writing
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Review of Choice  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (2.0)
This was confusing and not very well written. I was lost through the beginning
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Review of Life - Draft  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (4.0)
Good introduction and it is up to you how you choose to go with it.
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Review of Time  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was great well written good job
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Review of A Broken Promise  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (4.0)
This was good and it was well written it could have been a little longer and have more details but other wise it is good
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Review of Big Red Bus  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (3.5)
It was good but had a few typos in it.
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Review of I Miss You So  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow great poem it was well written and full of description I loved it and I could feel your pain when you wrote this. Great job keep it up
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Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great poem it was well written and I could feel it keep writing
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Review of Nothing Serious  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Great poem and I have been there where I just wanna mope all day but I can't so I stop moping and be happy again. Great job
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Review of Hungry for it all  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good job it was well written and very descripitive as well keep writing
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Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow Great story. I loved how you started it as rather confusing story at first but then you could understand it by reading it more you had me interested in it.
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Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (3.0)
Good Poem but I was confused at what you was trying to say in it. So I guess I did not understand this
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Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow great story it was well written too loved it good job. I was shocked when the little girl was the elderly woman though I loved this story
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Review of Young Hearts  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (3.5)
great job but I felt as though you could have had an opening leading up to the conversation because i was confused through out. It was well written though but it could have been longer
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Review of Splash  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good job this was well written and very descriptive too. I felt as though it can be a little longer though.
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Review of me or them  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good job I understood this perfectly. You loved someone and they let someone come between you two. I could feel your pain of betrayal and hurt that they chose them over your love. I also could sense that you loved that person and still do. Great job
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Review of ONLY IF ICOULD  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great job. This was well written and I felt it was well put too. Yes having a cat's life would be easy lol. Keep writing.
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Review of Cold and Empty  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (4.0)
Great poem but I felt like it could have more though like how you feel and use words to discribe how you felt. Good poem though and I can tell that you loved thisperson that you lost
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Review of Alone  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (4.0)
Good poem it was well written too and I could tell that you wrote it with heart. Yes sometimes we are feel that way but we are never alone. Could have been more descriptive though. Like you feel like you wanna rip your heart out of stuff like that. Good job
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