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Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well written and I could feel the pain as your worried about thanksgiving Dinner. Keep writing
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Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (4.0)
Well written and I could tell you was in pain when you wrote it. I could also tell that you felt like no one would care either. Great job and keep writing
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Review of Urgent Care  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well said and nicely put alot of us feels this way about the health care system in our country. It sucks especially when their are us who needs it but cant get it. I love America but the health care system sucks. Rock on and keep writing
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Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (4.5)
Well said.
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Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good poem well written and I could feel your pain. I could tell you wrote this with your heart. I hope that you will finally be with the one you was talking about in your poem. Keep writing
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Review of I Wish  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great job and well written. I could feel your pain and could tell you was depressed. Keep writing
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Review of I'm Moving On  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow I could fill your pain as you are going through loosing someone. It is well written and well put. Keep writing
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Review of little bird  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (3.0)
Awwwwwwwwww this was cute and well written. A perfect poem of describing how a bird feels and acts when they are depressed. I felt as though the lines could have been seperated and put into stanzas. Keep writing
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Review of I Am  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Great job and well written. However I felt as though the words I am was used too much and it sounded more run off than a poem. Keep writing my friend
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Review of Summer  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow well said and I could sense your feelings as I read this. Keep writing my friend
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Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (4.5)
Great poem and well said. It was straight forward and to the point Keep writing
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Review of NUMB  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (3.5)
This was well said although I feel as if putting puncuation in the right places would make it better. I also feel as if capitilizing the words that need it would too. Just some suggestions. Keep writing
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Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great job I could feel the love for your sons when you wrote this. Keep writing
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Review of The Lost  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
That was heart breaking and it takes alot to write about something so powerful. Great job keep writing
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Review of Visitor  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Great job and I could tell you wrote it for admiroration of your friend that you met unexpetedly that day as you drunk your coffee out on your porch. Keep writing
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Review of The Unhappy Bride  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (4.0)
Good job even though I don't think a bride would be unhappy but I can see everything through your eyes
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Review by pearl palmer
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Wow great job. I could tell you was in pain when you wrote it. I can also tell that you felt used by an older woman. Good job.
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Review of Webs  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great poem it was well written. Loved it
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Review of SIREN  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow great poem and i could feel the pain as you wrote. Domestic abuse is hard to write about and is very difficult to write about as well. Great job. Keep writing.
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Review of Feel the Wonder  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (4.5)
Great job this poem was well written and very descriptive I could see everything and after reading it twice I could understand it. You was saying to be aware of your surrondings and people do things differently. Keep writing.
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Review of True Friends  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (5.0)
Loved this it was well written and it fits me too I have many friends like that. Keep writing and good luck
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Review by pearl palmer
Rated: 13+ | (2.0)
This is confusing who is it they were running from. Why are they running? I feel as if this could use more details. Good luck
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Review of AND-MOSES-WEPT!  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Good poem great job well written too
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Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (3.0)
Good job but I felt as though you did not put your heart into this. It seemed rushed and hurriedly typed so that you would have something to submit. Keep writing
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Review of Pretty Kitty  
Review by pearl palmer
Rated: E | (5.0)
Loved this it was well written and I loved how you wrote it. I loved how you used the cats running away as an adventure. Good job and keep writing.
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