Wow I could feel this. I loved how you started out with you having the baby but had to put it up for adoption. because you are so young. Great job Keep it up.
It was well written but I felt like it needed more description it also needed to be written where the reader feels and picture it in his mind . More description please. V=For example describe the clouds. Great poem other wise
This was a great story I felt the father's pain of loosing his daughter. He shut out the rest of the world including his wife which happens a lot when someone that you love dies. Great job and I give you five out of five.
Wow speaking from a soldiers mind that is so real and to the point people does not understand the price the soldiers go through to fight for this great country and i salute you for writing it. Well said
Wow that was great it had me interested. It was well written too so i take it these guys were vampires or cannibals and that the chicks they saw earlier was an snack. They fuck them than eat them nice. Great job and your creativity was great as well. It could have used a little more description though
That was great it had description and was well written it was said in there how your friend helped you that is great. One thing however was that you said you never saw her explain that part please.
Wow that was intense from the very start it was a well written story as well I thought for sure the wife had died but no it was him that was in the car wreck and on life support. Great story a very enjoyable read but I could not give you a five though because there were a few typos in it
This was a good story and it was heart warming to sat the least. I feel it could use a little more detail though but not too much more and I also feel that this could be a comtiuing story.
This was a great poem it tell show a person with this disease feels and acts. They have voices constantly talking to them that no one can see but them. Great job
This was a great story and at first I did not understand it. I liked how it kept you in suspense until the very end. I take it that he raped Jenny and killed her and was going to eat her body until the monster came and started attacking him. I guess he turned into the monster at the very end and died.. Great story
I found this too be good but it needs work who is the two people in the story friends or what also who was that woman in the story more detail please I need more detail
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