Oh no i hate standing in the cold hard rain it would just suck having to do that. well, I found this on a random review and wanted to say that this poem made my day, well gotta run I am out looking for the sun(it is raining here too)
~From: Pheonix123465.
Okay, first thing is first
Hi, I found this story on a random review and i have to say that this is one of the most amazing stories i have ever read.I love the drama and the intensity it was so cool. well, I have to go bye
~From: Pheonix123465
You know what I can't wait to post this poem on the news feed ok I found this on a random review and I just wanted to say that this is a good poem and wanted to tell you to write more and review more. Well, by
~From: Pheonix123465
Cool your bio is rocking, I always wanted to be a professional writer, to me you have the coolest jobs ever well, bye
~From: Pheonix123465
whenever you need me just email and I will give a response as soon as possible.
You know you poem and poems are so unique because there is more than one poem on the page so i will have to speak for all of them when I saw...YOU DID GREAT!
the spelling and the grammar are to die for and you poems are all so well writing, everything is perfect well, bye
~from: Pheonix123465
You know what this is actually a great resemblance to real life, i can't believe it someone who has captured time and wrote exactly what it is like(amazing work, but you probably already know that right?)Well, bye for now and i will keep on reviewing you
~from: Pheonix123465
I like how you wrote this in this format.Okay, I found this on a random review and just wanted to say who much i liked this piece of writing and i also wanted to complement you on your spelling and your grammar, well gotta go, bye,
~from: Pheonix123465
Ohh lala i like this poem so much, oh back to the beginning OK, hi, i found this on random review and wanted to just tell you how awesome this poem is to me and wanted to say that i think that your spelling and grammar are good well, bye
~from: Pheonix123465
wow i love the description, I think that if you are going to write it as a book then go for it! I found this on a random review and i love it
thank you for writing it, because this has just made my day reading ideas for different stories is a great habit well, bye.
I found this on a random review and I love this thank you for posting a video i really enjoyed it and i liked the pictures and the music in this video, well i think that this is a unique way of doing this and i think that you should keep on doing it well, bye
~From: Pheonix123465
yeah i know that because i don't really care how i dress as long as i can be comfortable, well i found this on a random review and wanted to say that this is an interesting poem that you wrote about clothes and i also wanted to congratulate you on writing such a good piece well bye
i love it I think that you brightened my day just by writing this piece, thank you.I love the attention to spelling and grammar and i also wanted to say something encouraging keep writing and if you need anything just call
by from: Pheonix123465
OK, only a few things i have to say, 1. this is a great piece and 2 i would like to encourage you today
keep writing this book is good so write more stuff like this
and if you have any questions tell me
bye from: Pheonix123465
wow at the begining of the story i was think why would someone want to live next to a person like that? I think that this is a good short story and i also think that you should keep on writing and reviewing but for now bye
~from: Pheonix123465
if i were your friend i would totally feel encouraged and i just wanted to say that this poem did really brighten my day and i also wanted to thank you for the time you put in this poem with the spelling and grammar ang bye an peace
~from : Pheonix123465
this is an amazing piece, well of art writing is basically and art and the writer is a painter and all that i have to say is that you are like a faomous painter in my book for this wonderful writer well byeand i also just wanted to say to keep writing and have a great day!
i think that, this poem really touched my heart today and i just want to say thank you and that i think that your poem is spot on the ball i loved you poem and i also loved reviewing it well bye
~from: pheonix123465
by and keep writing those poems.
this is just so beautiful take like it and write more its too good i could never write a poem that good well you know what i always say well you don't but keep moving forward and write on for me and everyone else bye from pheonix123465
I found this story off of random review and i have to say that this really made it worth while to read because i loved the story, the spelling, and the grammar put in this story.
well bye practice makes perfect so write write and write while i review everything
i have like one thing wrong with this poem and that is what do mean when you say"way" and nothing else in the sentence
well keep on writing and do not be offended by anything i have written and please dont kick me off the website for this reason.
bye pheonix123465.
you know what this poem reminds me of...a famous poem it is that good ( i know when i see a good poem)
here are some thing i would change:nothing not one little thing unless i missed something
~write write write is the way to successes
bye pheonix123465
this poem is so sad i only have a couple of questions for you.OK here they go
1.did that really happen to you if that did then i am so sorry
here are some things i would like to say about this peice:
you have great spelling and the body of the poems mood is sad so people would kinda want to read it and i think that is all bye for now.
You are a stupendous writer and have great abilities i really appreciate this peice of writing and here are just a few of the things that i have to say
1. OK your writing awesome and your spelling is just as good
2.I also want to know when you are going to write again because practice makes perfect
WOW i cant believe how much this relates to life and everything in life and it relates to everyone in the world well i don't know about every one but a lot of people.
1.things to change-nothing just perfect
and i think that this is it because your poem is just fine the way it is tell me when you write more bye.
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i love it I think that you brightened my day just by writing this piece, thank you.I love the attention to spelling and grammar and i also wanted to say something encouraging keep writing and if you need anything just call 
this is just so beautiful take like it and write more its too good i could never write a poem that good well you know what i always say well you don't but keep moving forward and write on for me and everyone else bye