i love this poem it has sort of a similarity to life and that is only one of the any thing that I like about this poem
1.you used the grammar and punuctuation perfectly
2.you spelled fantastically
3.those are all perfect reasons that you should keep on writing and send me the writing once you are done so i can review more of your work thanks bye.
Hey I like this story i think i am going to shar it (once i find out how) but i have a couple of tips for you and things to brigten your day
1.keep on writing because you can do it (just never stop and then you will get better)
well bye.just tell me when you write more so i can review it.
I have like only one consern but i dont really know if it is important or not so here it is
when you are using quotes at the end you should put a comma and then write the rest of your sentence and i think that is it
Man like everyone is writing poems but i think that this is one of my favorite poems the contrast
happy but sad
angry but calm
and so on well i think i have to go now bye
~keep on writing my fellow writer because you are doing such a great job at i don't want you to stop.
yeah i like it because it just basically the truth in itself you can find peace by doing things.
I also love your spelling and grammar in this, well bye.
~keep on writing, peace out my friend
if you keep on writing then i can sure enough review them.
man, this story is so cool i love it
i love this spelling and the grammar, I also love the way you wrote this short story i think i will let everyone know about this one well bye
~I love this one so write more for me please.
I love it, I think that it relates to me in a sort of ways, like in school part of me loves school but the other side hates it, but the sad thing in school is after you take the exam and have to leave all of your friends behind that is what i dont get well bye
~keep up the good work
OK, here are some things that i like about your poem is:
1. you put you poem in a beautiful body and i Love how you spelled each word
2. that your poem is so well writing that it runs off of your tongue like smooth silk
3. you have writing it about it seams like you have an idea about your topics and keep to them and not stray off
well bye for now
well i like it i thought that this piece of writing was very well writ-in and that you should write some more of these because they are encouraging in every way possible
-well that's all i had to say good bye and keep on writing because writing rocks i should know.
Well i personally like the format and the spelling i also think that your poem is read great and everything in it is perfect if you need me to review anything else for you just e mail me i am always here for you
-keep on writing my friend.
There are many books i would just sit down and read all day long, and this book is totally one of them, if you are going to make chapters that would be great cause i think that the chapters are going to be just as awesome well bye
-keep on writing my friend
that poem is so sad i cant believe someone would do that i cant belive that when you trusted him when he said that you would be with him forever he just left you and probably didn't really care about how he left you either but i feel bad for you so here take these for my sorrow for you.
well that saying is so true but i don't think you have anything in this folder so yeah i guess i am just reviewing the brief reference words that lead me here in the first place trying to get gift points to give to WDC angels for there kindness to me being a first time registered user so see you later hope to review more of your writing bye
I like that story thank you for writing this particular story it really brightened my day and i really appreciated it so thank you if i haven't already said so but this story was so good it had a good body a good use of words and a good attention catching story line , it was so good i think i am going to cry
Well i thought that this story was very well written and constructed in every way from the spelling to the format to the poem in itself, it was just so beautiful that i want to cry
i hope to read and review more of your poems and if you have any stories then those too
well bye
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that poem is so sad i cant believe someone would do that i cant belive that when you trusted him when he said that you would be with him forever he just left you and probably didn't really care about how he left you either but i feel bad for you so here take these for my sorrow for you.