Wow I am so sorry for the baby. Your poem was vivid and you could really express the different parts of this piece. I might be wrong but I don't think that you can spell baby with an e instead of an y. But everything else was really good You should keep on writing and don't stop believing!
You should write more! i was so capture in this book, the details were so cool I could imagine Death. It was tragic how that girl dies but it was cool on where she goes to! This is a really good book and really should have more it was so suspenseful lol thanks for writing it!
You did a great job writing this poem when I read it I can picture everything that you are describing and it is wonderful. Your choice of words are superb and your descriptions are to die for! I enjoyed reading his poem, thanks!
Wow, the way you described the place she was in, the way she looked like, the sounds that were in the air, it was like I was actually there! This was a really cool contest entry and I really enjoyed reading it, It was interesting how you added these characters to fit in with the story.
I love it, and I also like that you added a little thing at the bottom of the poem describing what meant what. Well, your format, spelling, grammar, and background research is on the top of my cool list. I also appreciate that you wrote this poem to be sad, which is not to much in most poems I read. Thank you for letting me review this piece and good bye
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Hello, I am here to review chapters byGiggles the Poet I think that this poem has really stuck out to me and my life. I love what the poem is all about and how the poem is written, even the spelling and grammar.thank you for the time to read my review thank you and bye.
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Hello, I am here to review this very great piece of poetry. I have no problems with it and would like to say that this is one of the best poems I have ever read. I appreciate the time you spent on writing this poem and getting all of the spelling and grammar right on it.thank you and bye.
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Hello, I am here to review this amazing piece of poetry. I think that your format was perfect for the thing you choose, i also like how you paid attention to the spelling and grammar.Thank you for your inspiring poem, which has inspired me to be a better writer, thank you and bye.
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Hello, i am reviewing this wonderful, fantastic, amazing poem! I loved this poem, I loved the poem format, spelling, and grammar.The part of the poem I loved most was:"Love will take the place of fear." Because it just touches my heart and that is why I love it
I appreciate the time and the effort that you put into this poem, and how much it must have meant for you to write.thank you for letting me review this and have a nice day
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Hello, I have really no suggestions to add to this story, But I also hate how his father abused him, that's good (for the story not the boy), I think you have a great begging to a story and hope the ending is a good as the begging turned out to be. I think that all of your spelling and grammar look to be okay, as with your format. thanks bye.
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Hello, I found the short story on a random review and I just wanted to say that i liked many things about this story but what stuck out to me was the comparison of her to the flower it was amazing at how much detail and everything else to make it so real like she was the smae thing as the flower. It was a sad story and I think that people are going to read it well, bye have a nice week. Keep writing ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
Hello, this story has everything a person would want to read, it even has suspense in the end of it all. Who knows what will happen to emma as she starts her adventure to change the fate that was given to her. You did a good job with the spelling and everything else in this story. I am, glad to have reviewed this, bye
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Hello I am going to review this wonderful contest. I have entered, and so far i love it. It has how to and the total gift points for each group. It is like organizational heaven. I think that this is going to be a huge success. thank you for letting me review this and have a nice day.
Hey I wanted to say that this is one of the most romantic poems I have read( that is in a statistic item like this) And wanted to say that this is like a master poet wrote it, yes it is that good.I found this on a random review and wanted to say bye.
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You know what I think that you met your best goal with this one( if you had a goal that is)
I found this on a random review and wanted to like praise you for it(not really praise but thank you)
I loved it and hope your other readers do to thank you bye
hi I found this on a random review and wanted to say that this story is awesome i could not stop reading it. The part I liked most was:" “Um no; of course not.” I forced a nervous smile and was afraid he might kill me and put my own body with the other. I was not sure if such a thing was plausible but I was still in a great deal of shock." ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
Hi I found this on a random review and wanted to say that I simply loved it, thanks for the wonderful story and i wish you the best of luck
I like the details, the spelling, and the grammar.Thank you for reading this and possible responding to it well, bye
Greetings, I have found this wonderful poem and wanted to review it. I liked the poem, spelling, grammar, and formate of the poem. I also like the first few lines in the poem, they made me hungry especially this part:" I can smell the coffee in the shiny stainless urns. and oatmeal, grits, sausage patties and eggs, yummy well, bye.
Aw w I found this on a random review and i thought this poem was super stupendous and more. I liked everything about this poem but what stuck out to me was:"Out on spring break, she was riding in a show, where she felt more at home than anywhere she could go." It just made me happy and sad at the same time, well, bye
Hi I found this on random review and wanted to read and review this wonderful story for you. I have a few things that I liked about this and here it is:I have to be careful about what I say, too. I must guard my mouth for suspicious words. Two five-year-old girls told me they were going to tell their mothers that I had said a bad word. I had to play reruns in my mind to try to figure how I'd offended, but I still didn't catch on ... until they said I'd yelled out the "a" word.
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No offence but this would make like a great children s story.Hi, I found this on a randome review and wanted to say that this is a great poem and i enjoyed reading it, I like how you boled words and everything.Well, Bye
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Hi, I found this on a random review and would just like to say, Thank you for writing this piece I think that it was genus for you to because that is a question that most people have and it takes them time to know the answer.keep on writing
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Greetings, I found this on a random review and wanted to comment on what you have written. I like the format, spelling, grammar, and everything else in your poem i liked the part where you said:An endless horizon ahead, I do feel.
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