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Review of Hold me  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a romantic poem And the funny thing is, it is just that I don't like romantic things of that sort.Well, I found this on a random review and wanted to say that every word was worth reading. My favorite line was: I didn't meant to belittle you like that, That made it romantic forgiveness.


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Review of Kapitola 9  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
okay so I looked up your story on google and Here is the English version:
Back in the room on the third floor , I really noticed that not everything was as I seemed to prvypohlad . But it was still Tommy , who waited Boss ? I'm going to pretend as if nothing had happened , and feel free to sit down beside the corpse Pending as they appear to me so finally say that we are f***ing assholes for it that we split up ? I just decided to do , it is in my opinion always better than sitting on your butt and chase a bird. He should have it boast that I am of Tony , whether as an ox AT ALL caught , it is nevertheless an important one way or another . No, he has it zbuzeruje as their bitch , but wait a Cat Sciences and the pride you once . " Henry you moron naspat need you down here, " he shouted Cat . " Yes , clearly the boss , now I'm there ." Back I came into the room but it was empty . " Here I am , help me transfer it to the basement ." Came from the hallway . Cat trying to move the body through the entire floor but his thin arms he 's obviously not allowed . Although he 'd laugh if it were not too irritation all the time. " Not a word ! " said the Cat . "Please ? Did not say anything . " " But I have ! " Kat replied . Shiver me from the back, what the hell has this mean ? ! " Do not stare and grab his legs , and guess what, the head, the harder it is ." Of course . What are you even so I pull into the basement , beside there we have all our accessories with maps and plans . But again, it finally Kat will have to kill , he would not let anyone untrained run around outside with information about us , so me and so did not mind . In the basement , I tied him on the hydrant , so that had to happen . He was still unconscious and bandage his already heavily soaked . "I wake him up ? " I asked . "If it makes you happy ... " . At the moment I drove his right fist on the cheek . From his nose began shockingly sprayed blood , I had him about to break . " We accept the " . " Give it time " said the Cat. I gave him another one , this time a left . To my surprise he now blood from the nose ceased to flow , I gave it to him again about the place . Cat will notice and hoarse laugh for a second . " Still nothing " I said . "I think he's dead or what ." " I'm alive . Motherf***er " said suddenly . " I'll give you motherf***er mangy dog" . I just gave him one for solar . Cat suddenly change the tone of the nervous quiet and incredibly uchylne said . " Henry , Henry tranquility. Nas guest deserves warm welcome so do not behave like a caveman and there are characters in schism ." I stood in a corner so that I still had a good view of what is happening . Cat began to tell .
" I would welcome if we are first introduced , what do you say ? Called me Kat , that you will have to do . And as they call you ? "
"I am an A - Anthony . "
"I am delighted Anthony , surely interest you , where you now , however, Anthony ? "
" Where am I ? "
" Oo good question Anthony , already our shared four floors of the two corpses , you know something about Anthony ? "
" No. "
" Anthony , Anthony , You got one shot to give me the correct answer or are afraid of losing and I let you go Herryho " he pointed at me . " Herryho will recognize , this time beside you you must already be a mate" " It is not true Henry ? "
" I can see this motherf***er finally killed ? " I replied .
" Anthony , Anthony , I see that you are kamaratov nevies right, it is very wrong, very, very . Especially here when there run around and kill people , you have no one to help you then . Anthony , let me be your friend , let me help you. And I really want to help , just need to to be honest with me . " Ended melancholy . "So what do dame Just one last attempt ? " After a while he said enthusiastically .
" I'm sorry . Cat . Did not like to be impolite . Yeah, I know about them . "
" COMMITTEE, Anthony finally gets somewhere . "
well, most of it.....*Facepalm*


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I am guessing that this was part of a contest dew to the bolder letters and such,I found this on a awesome random review and wanted to say that I agree with this poem and everything written in it. I also wanted to say that This story is so cool, that I can t wait to post it bye


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I would understand I love this poem and I love the way you wrote it and i love your spelling and grammar.but I like the way I found this on a random review and I love it, well I guess that is all I have to say fro right now review you later.and keep on writing.


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Review of Gods tool  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I have to agree that we are all gods tools and he uses us too.I found this on a random review and wanted to thank you for writing this poem you have really made my day shine well thank you and your poem is great Well, bye
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, I wanted to review this a couple of days ago and wanted to say that this story is a great story one that I would want to read over and over but I can't review once so I read once, well this was a great random review and I hope you enjoy every word I say and bye.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Okay I found this on a random review page and want to first than writting.com for making a random review page and two the writer for writing this wonderful story. The spelling and grammar are correct and I think that this story is ready to roll, bye
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this I love this and I love this I can't believe someone would have thought about this and actually wrote it.Well, your poem is great and everything in it too.well, gotta go have a nice week
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~From: Pheonix123465
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Review of Time  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well, I can see this is a personal piece an I like that I haven't really read a personal piece in a while and found myself really enjoying this.I found this on a random review and wanted to say that I couldn't wait to read this and find out what it was well, i gotta go bye
~from: Pheonix123465


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Review of Where art Thou  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I found this on a random review and had one thing I would like to tell you about in your poem. Well here is my suggestion please don't block me when I say this but I think that you shouldn't use question marks at almost the end of every line it kinda gets repetitive bye.


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Review of Kapitola 9  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, I would like to ask you a question. Can you please write a version of this in English I would love to read it and i hope you understand, but um mm since I can't read it I can't give an accurate review Thank you for reading this and i hope you have a good week.
~From: Pheonix123465


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Review of Lost and found  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I would like to say a few words about this poem.I found this on a random review and wanted to say that this is the kind of poems that would make people want to read these poems over and over again. I also wanted to say that my favorite line in the poem would have to be:Thank you Lord for I am found.


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Review of Lessons learned  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Okay I found this poem on a random review and wanted to say that this poem made my day. I liked the part where you wrote "You should never sin Lesson learned." because it is so true and i love the rest of the poem keep on writing bye,
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This story was enchanting, amazing, and correctly defying awesomeness I would read this story all the live long day if i could but i gotta do stuff and work so yeah i can't well i love your story thank you for writting it bye.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I found this on a random review and I thought that this poem was to die for*Sick*(not really just because it was so poisonously good it makes me want to write so much.)Well, thank you for reading this review and not blocking me. Thank-you and bye. ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **


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Review of Kapitola 8  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Um mm, can you write this in an English version so me and many others can read and review it. I appreciate you reading and maybe taking concern about what I have written please don't block and think of this as an helpful opinion and I wish you the best of luck good-bye.


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Review of In your arms  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hey I just wanted to say what stuck out to me was mostly the very first line of the poem and how it went like
"The night turns to morning and we are lying entwined
Two bodies, two souls becoming combined
Merging together no beginning or end
Wishing that time would somehow suspend
Neither of us moving for it may break the spell
Feeling emotions as they begin to swell" and i also think that the rest of your poem is awesome bye.


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Review of Sweetly Haunted  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
(just a reminder, do not be offended by anything that I say because it is just a review, okay here we go.)Hi I found this on a random review because i thought i needed to review More and more each day I also think that this poem is a romantic piece and that it doesn't need any work done to it.Well, ta,ta
~From: Pheonix123465


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Review of Being Bean  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
You know what I see a story coming on caution(please do not be offensive in any way when i write these reviews i am only giving my opinion about them and would love if you didn't block me, thanks)I like how you uniquely put your chapter summeries and not just writing the whole it is like a table of content, Well, Bye
~From: Pheonix123465


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Review of The Bench  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This story was encouraging me to write more and more, I have to say that this random review was worth it. You have a great story and i hope everyone that reads this knows it,because they should.And I also like that you have good writing skills that you show in this piece of writing.Well, Bye
~From: Pheonix123465


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I like everything about it the drama the action and of course the reason of the story was about a substance in a prism who doesn't like that I have one question though: Can you send me the rest of the book?Well, bye
~this review was because this story was awesome do not block or ban this user for anything he or she says, it was either a typo or just an opinion.


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Review of Bang  
Rated: E | (5.0)
WOW I LOVE THAT FORMAT, no wonder why you won you are such a good poet you can write a poem a day no sweat*Waterdrop* Well, I found this on a page and wanted to read it so much that right when I saw it I read it (which was just now)Well, bye
~From: Pheonix123465


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Rated: E | (5.0)
You know what I think that this poem should get a shout out and I think that you deserve it to this poem is unique and original at the same time
the formate: original
the theme : unique
well, bye.
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Review of In Sepia  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love the picture you put as the example it looks just like the description in the poem, and i love how you made it so descriptive with" a huge Shirley temple bow" or"she sits, legs crossed,on a damask ottoman,the genetic duplicate of her mother;"Well, Bye
~From: Pheonix123465


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Review of Love and Wolves  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, I found this on a random review and wanted to read and review it for you. You know what I love about this story, it is just the kinds of stories i love to read, write, review, and cherish. You will be the story review of the day for me because I think everything is perfect in this story well, bye
~From:Pheonix123465


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