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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
elizjohn

I thought I would visit your portfolio and noted this had no reviews. I loved it, you wrote this out perfectly. The syllable count was perfect for each rhyme. The flow was great and was easy to read through the poem. I could sense the humor here. Superb writing. Keep going.....

Spiritual Dawning

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Zane

Hi, I came across your writing in the random read page, here is what I thought...

I thought this was a lovely piece of writing. I felt the calling for the one you want. The combination of dreams and reality are great here. Nice descriptive lines of a beautiful scene. I really enjoyed this poem. Good work.

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of A Gift  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
TheBusmanPoet

Hi, I came across your writing in the random read page, here is what I thought...

I thought this was an accolade to women. You and I both know of the complexity of women. I liked how you said it was Gods gift. I liked the overall effect of this writing from you. This writing from you is a conversation provoker. I loved it, superb work.

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of Stumbled Over  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Anna Marie Carlson

Hi, I came across your writing in the random read page, here is what I thought...

I liked your writing style here, this was written clearly and easy to follow. I feel you expressed yourself very very well. Fact or fiction this was a good insight into someones mind and times. No errors found. Good work.

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of Trapped  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Sumojo

Hi, I came across your writing in the random read page, here is what I thought...

I thought this was a great little story from you. Short, sweet and very cute. I really liked the subtle ending, this made me smile. Your grammar was fun and made the reading so easy. I thought this was a very uplifting little piece of writing. Great work and write on !!!

Spiritual Dawning

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
elizjohn

I came across your writing in the random read page, here is what I thought...

I liked the combination of two meanings here. I liked the romantic power in each line. The rhythm was good and it flowed along perfectly. I also liked the length of this piece, it kept my attention levels high. A clever piece of writing, good work and write on!!!

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Review of Age  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
TheBusmanPoet

Hi, I came across your writing in the random read page, here is what I thought...

I enjoyed reading this through. I liked the theme. Nice flowing rhythm and good presentation. I felt this was written in a light-hearted way, it was not too serious and depressing. I think you are a great writer and I have read many of your writings. Keep writing and posting. Good work.

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of I Wanna  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
LeJenD'

Hi, I came across your writing in the random read page, here is what I thought..

I thought this was enjoyable to read through. I really liked the last two lines, to me they summed the imagination of a child very well. They all dislike school. Nice presentation, easy to follow and understand. Good work.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wandering Thoughts

Hi, I came across your writing in the random read page, here is what I thought ....

I really liked the raw cutting edge to this piece. I liked the depth and darkness. Not all poems have to be rosey and flowery. Nice rhythm in the lines and good flow. I enjoyed reading this through. I feel the title was indicating a rebelion and I loved it. Good work.

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Review of Daddy Dear  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Roari ∞

I came across your writing in the random read page, here is what I thought ...

I thought this was well expressed, written and displayed. This poem did make me feel sad but I took the positives from this. I am shocked this writing has not been given 5 stars, I found it very, very emotional. I just have to to give this an awardicom. Thank you.

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Review of Daydream  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Beholden

I came across your writing in the random read page, here is what I thought...

I liked the complex way you wrote this out and posted. The title drew me in. I liked the length of this piece, it kept my attention levels up high. I liked the poetic power this work gave me, I was lightly insired. Nice work.

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of Letting Go  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
ElizabethHayes-DaughterofIAM

I came across your writing in the random read page, here is what I thought...

I liked the descriptive emotions here, lovely expressions. A nice depth to the poem. I felt inspired by the first two lines. This is why I like reviewing poetry, it gives the writer hope and the reader inspiration. Good work.

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of Moon Over July  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
JCosmos

I came across your writing in the random read page, here is what I thought ...

I really enjoyed reading this piece through. I loved the imagery coming from what you wrote down and posted. You wrote this out very well. I hope it did well in the contest. I found this little poem to be quite inspiring. Good writing...

Spiritual Dawning

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Rated: E | (5.0)
lexos02

I came across your writing in the random read page, here is what I thought...

I liked the title, it drew me in. I liked your philosophy used in this piece. A simple yet effective piece of writing. Good writing style, nice and easy to follow and understand. Good work and write on!!!

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
very thankful

I came across your writing in the random read page, here is what I thought ...

I thought this was a lovely little piece of writing. I liked the length of the poem, it managed to say more than a 15 line poem. A simple question you asked here, it held much sentiment to me. Good work and write on!!!

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Review of Truth and Lies  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
TheBusmanPoet

I came across your poem in the random read page, here is what I thought...

I agreed totally with you here. We are all just cattle, prodded into position. Nice length for a poem, keeping your readers attention up. I enjoy all your writings. Keep going. Good work.

Spiritual Dawning

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
intuey

I noticed your item here in the newsfeed and decided to give it a read and review.

Very good story telling, great punctuation. The grammar flowed very well. I found no technicle faults. The large, comic font made it easy to read through, follow and understand. "The Voice On The Back Of The wind" is a very inviting title, very spiritual to me. The story and plot was good, I wasn't expecting Daddy to rise the way he did. I also wasn't expecting Momma to make her own plans for Daddy. The evil that Daddy had become was kept clean and not too dark, to me this kept the focus on the angelical side of Momma and the lovely surroundings of where she lived. I enjoyed reading this story through. Nice, interesting work.

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Review of Heart?  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Elby Wordsmith

I decided to visit your portfolio here on WDC.

I really liked the structure of this poem. The rhymes were very good. Love makes great writing but can also leave a person too tired for life. I liked your positive attitude to love here. Great flow. Nice presentation too. I couldn't see any faults with this poem, it was great and I liked your honesty here. Good work and write on!!

Spiritual Dawning

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Elby Wordsmith

I came across your writing in the random read page, here is what I thought...

I liked the philosophy here. I do look in the mirror and see me, smiling. I thought the theme of this writing was very original and positive. I liked the length of the writing, it kept my attention levels up high. I also liked the effect this work gave me. You reminded me that we all can be in control of destiny. Good work.

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of Yuba  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
AmyJo- only 2 steps behind -

I came across your writing in the random read page, here is what I thought...

Yuba is a very rare name and kind of catchy. I couldn't help but feel sad as I read this poem through. I have lost two dogs in my life time and it does not get any easier. They do as you say become part of the family. Nice presentation and easy to follow. I found no way of improving your wriiting. Good work.

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of The Search  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Mr.Y

I came across your writing in the random read page.

I enjoyed this little poem from you. I thought you told a little story so very well. The imagery coming from your words and lines was great. You managed to say plenty in just a few lines, the simplicity was fantastic. Good writing.

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of Greatest Gift  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
TheBusmanPoet

I came across your writing in the random read apge.

I really loved the simplicity of this poem from you. It was a clear, positive message here. I was taken back by the inspiring feel you gave me. This is the best piece I have read today. Great writing, so inspiring. Thank you.

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Review of Done.  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
fyn

I came across your writing in the random read page.

Great descriptions of a fed up person, expressing their feelings. The title was a good match for the writing. I liked the last line very much, "They won't; we will" this line inspired me to think more positive. I liked the originality of this piece. Good work.

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Review of Passing Time  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Envi

I came across your writing in the random read page.

I really liked the poetic swagger to this piece, the title was fitting for the words. I also liked the very last line mostly, it held a special feeling for me. I liked the length of the poem too, it held my attention levels up high. Good writing.

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Review of Ruts  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
AJblurryface

I came across your writing in the random read page.

I think you raised some very good questions here in this piece from you. I liked the emotion coming from this piece, I didn't feel so alone as I read this through. Good expressions here, nice work.

Spiritual Dawning

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