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Review of Love Old andNew  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello,

I thought this was written perfectly. There was a beauty about this poem from you. The love was deep and I felt the romance growing and dying at the same time. I also felt the pain of a love that has lost its way. Lovely expressions, lovely tone to your work here. Nice flowing poem. Good work.

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Review of My First Poem  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello again,

I thought this poem from you was excellent. I loved how well you expressed yourself. I also related very well to what you had written. Fact or fiction this was a lovely read. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. I hope you find peace soon. Good writing.

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Review of Dishes  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello....

I thought your little poem was very funny. I dont know if you meant to be funny, its just how I percieved you. I would like to know what you have to surrender to? The art of writing poetry and expressing oneself was very evident here. I enjoyed reading your poem through. Good work.

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Review of The Unsaid  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Nicely written and nicely executed. Good word flow and good rhythm and rhyme. I liked the depth of this piece from you. I took comfort in knowing that I am not the only one who holds back words and feelings, although different circumstances. A great piece written from honesty and with power. Good work and write on!!!

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Review of Innocence  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I read this piece through and related to the philosophy used here. I liked the depth of the subject. This is a poem for people who think deeply and understand what lay ahead for youngsters. You made me think of my own life and how it has passed me by so quickly. Looking back to the school days, playing in the playground, maybe some of us are not ready for adulthood. A very thought provoking piece. Good work.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I thought this was quite well written, better than you gave yourself credit for. The title drew me in and the words to the poem were quite rewarding. It goes to show that not everyone is living a blissful life, now, then or tomorrow. I think you expressed yourself very clearly and I enjoyed reading this through. Keep writing, posting and expressing yourself.

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Review of The Letter M  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, I found your poem on the random read page.

I thought this was written perfectly, lovely poetic sway and power. You have a good sense for mystic poetry and have good word crafting skills. I really enjoyed reading this poem through. I found no way of improving your item, it was great the way it is. Good writing and good work.

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Review of blooming dreams  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wisteria

I thought this was a lovely little poem from you. Great flowing rhymes, great rhythm too. There was a poetic power to your poem here. The title matched the poems words and lines so very well. I really enjoyed reading this through. I liked the philosophy used in this poem. Good work and write on!!!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
JCosmos

I thought your little piece of writing here was interesting. The originality of what you decided to write about was great. A believer will welcome this poem from you, as do I. The philosophy that time repeats itself. A nice spiritual feeling came across me as I read this through. Good work and write on!!!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Prosperous Snow celebrating

See, this poem from you is why I come to writing.com. When I review, I hope to find a beauitful piece of writing. I did just that, I found this poem from you to be swift, lavish, pretty and special. The rainfall does have a scent and it brings life to the world. A beauitful poem from you. I loved the poetic power.

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Review of Musical Frisson  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
LeJenD'

I thought your poem here was nice, I enjoyed the flowing rhythm. The poem had good structure and was well ballanced. I think you described the love of music quite well here, I particually liked the knee slapping line. Music can heal and roll along side our pains very well. I enjoyed reading this through, good work.

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Review of Flexibility  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Sumojo

I related so very well to your writing here. At 51 I feel I am decaying too. A good, original theme for a poem. I liked your honesty here. A nice length for a poem, keeping my attention levels up high. I enjoyed reading this through. Good work and write on!!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
bob county

I thought the first stanza, the introduction, was beauitfully written and displayed. I loved the inspiration you gave me here. The twilight, the shadows and night was lovely. A sweet little piece of writing and I enjoyed reading this through. For a brief moment in time I was taken away from daily life. Good work and write on!!!

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Review of Long Distance  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Soup

I liked your expressions here in this piece from you. The love was real and it seems like your partner is committed to you. As long as you are both nice to each other you both will be fine. Nice rhythm to your writing here. I related to what you had written out. Nice work and write on!!

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Review of SON  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
BUSYBEE

I thought there were some honest lines in your writing. Addmitting that mother-hood can be a test. The love for your son here was evident and rewarding. I liked the simplicity of this poem from you. The title was fitting for your words and lines. I enjoyed reading this through. Good expressions.

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Review of Forest Sunset  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Beholden

I thought your writing here was rather good. I thought the picture with the words and lines was lovely. Nice desriptive words. I liked the length of the poem, it kept my attention levels up high. I enjoyed reading and reviewing your poem and wouldn't change a thing. Good writing, nice work.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Detective

I liked the original theme of this piece from you. I liked the way you wrote this out too. The spooky feeling was real and vivid. Good inspiration came from this piece. A simple and easy poem to follow and understand. I liked the overall effect. Good work and write on !!

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Review of Alone In The Dark  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
GERVIC 🐉 WDC Dragon Vale

I liked the scene you set here in this piece. The imagery was great. The length of the poem was good because it kept my attention levels up high. There was a sweet, poetic pull about this piece. The words and lines could easily be a prompt for a story. Nice work and write on !!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
AmyJo- only 2 steps behind -

I thought you expressed yourself very well here. Summing up and describing a low day. Nice flowing lines and words. Good rhythm. Your poetic grammar was clear and easy to follow and understand. I enjoyed reading this poem through. Good work and write on !!!

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Review of WINTER WALK  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Maria Mize

I enjoyed reading this poem through. You set the scene so very well. You reminded me of the magic that comes along with soft snow. The imagery was great. Nice form and good presentation. I loved the poetic power this piece gave me. Good writing.

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Review of Gym Split  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Than Pence

I thought your comical poem here was great, I loved it all. Nice clear story telling in poetic form. The flow was good and the rhythm was good too. I salute you for being able to write a comical piece, I take life too seriously to even try. Good work and write on !!!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
💙 Carly

I thought this was a nice poem, summing the road of life up very well. Nice presentation center of the page. Good rhymes and rhythm. The poem was well rounded off with the mentioning of time moving on. I liked the philisophical feeling of this poem. Good work and write on !!

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Review of Forbidden Love  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
KimE

I felt the anguish and suffering of a bruised heart and soul. Nice length of a poem, it kept my attention levels up high. As "Phill Collins" said, "You can't hurry love". Your writing has good ballance and good structure. There seemed to be a lot of reality in your poems. Good work and write on !!!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
KimE

I related so very well to this poem from you. Funny enough, I live by the sea too and visit the water and shore when I can. The refreshing feeling and spiritual pull of the waves and scents is sublime. The ocean always makes great poetry, I think every poet has written about the ocean. I did spot something in the poem that could use some attention. The 3rd line from the end seems to have a higher syllable count to the rest of the poem. I thought this distracted the beauty from this poem. It is just my preference and you dont have to take my advice. But I would take a look at shortening the line. I hope you are not offended. Other than that, this is a lovely poem.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
KimE

I decided to visit your portfolio and read some of your expressive poetry.

I liked the title. I liked how you expressed yourself here. To me there were no signs of a Bi-sexual writer. I think your words were straight from the heart and feelings. Your writing held good emotions and you have a heart worth gold. Love works best when we don't push it. I step back and let the real feelings shine through.

Spiritual Dawning

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