THE QUESTIONS THAT THE POET RAISES HERE HAVE MUCH PRACTICAL RELEVANCE IN OUR LIFE.WE CANNOT BUT AGREE WHEN THE POET COMES AT LAST WITH THE AWARENESS THAT LOVE CAN'T BE UNDONE,BUT UNDONE.IT MAY BE BECAUSE,ONCE LOVE RECORDED IN THE ENERGY WORLD OF EMOTIONS IN OUR HEART CAN NOT BE OBLITERATED.THE MORAL BROUGHT OUT BY THE POET IS INTERESTING.REALLY A GOOD POEM TO READ AND RE-READ.
IT SEEMS THAT THE POET HAS VERY HIGH APPRECIATION FOR HIS GRANDSONS.BUT AS A SERIOUS GRANDFATHER HE IS CAREFULLY MINCING HIS WORDS ABOUT THEM.IT MAY BE BECAUSE HIS FEAR THAT OSTENTATION OF LOVE WOULD SPOIL THE CHILDREN.HOWEVER,THESE SHORT WORDS CAME OUT WHEN HIS HEART IS BRIMMING WITH LOVE FOR THEM.
THE SHIVER OF LOVE LIT IN THE LOVER IS NOW DUE FOR RETURNING TO HIS BELOVED.SHE IS NOW RIGHTFULLY EXPECTING IT IN RETURN.IN THE SHORT POEM THE POET IS STRESSING THE IMPORTANCE AND NECESSITY OF GIVE AND TAKE POLICY.THOUGH SHORT.THE POEM HAS MANY THINGS TO SAY IN BETWEEN THE LINES LANGUAGE OF AS THE GIRL READ THE NON-VERBAL LANGUAGE FROM THE EYES,SMILE AND BREATH OF HER LOVER.HEARD MELODIES ARE SWEET,THOSE UNHEARD ARE SWEETER.THEREFORE I AM SURE THAT I AM CORRECT,IF I EXPECT MORE ROMANTIC CREATIONS FROM THE POET.CONGRATS.
I THINK THE POEM IS ABOUT A HELPLESS CHILD WHO FELL IN TO THE MERCILESS LAP OF MISFORTUNE.THE CHILD LOST ALL THE CLOSE RELATIVES IN AN AIR CRASH.NOW HE IS IN THE CUSTODY OF A VERY ROUGH OLD MAN WHO HAS BECOME SO BECAUSE OF HIS OWN EXPERIENCES .BUT THE CHILD HAS GOT SUFFICIENT ADAPTABILITY WITH THE SITUATION AS SUSTENANCE IS THE PRIME MOST NEED,.IT IS A GOOD POEM, HUMAN BEINGS ARE MERE PLAY THINGS IN THE HAND OF DESTINY YET THE INNERMOST URGE IN US FOR SUSTENANCE IMPELS US TO ADAPT WITH THE PLIGHT.
TH E HEART BLEEDING LAMENTATION OF THE POET ON THE SEPARATION OF THE BELOVED VERSIFIED IN THE COLOR OF BLOOD IS REALLY TOUCHING THE FATHOMS OF THE READERS' HEARTS.BY USING THE WORD SARCOPHAGUS WE UNDERSTAND THAT THE BELOVED IS NO MORE.AS SUCH THE SYMPATHY ENGENDERED THE POEM TURNS IN TO EMPATHY
FLOWERS ARE NATURE'S EXPRESSIONS OF LOVE AND HAPPINESS.THEY NOT ONLY EXPRESS LOVE AND HAPPINESS,BUT ALSO ENGENDER LOVE AND HAPPINESS IN THE MIND OF THOSE WHO ARE FORTUNATE TO SEE THEM.THE SOFTNESS,THE BEAUTY AND THE SWEET SMELL AND HONEY THEY CARRY AND GIVE IN PROFUSE ARE THE UNPARALLELED GIFT AND WONDER OF NATURE.I BELIEVE THAT GOD IS SMILING AT US THROUGH THEM.IT MAY BE THE REASON WHY FLOWERS ARE THE INTEGRAL PART OF WORSHIP IN TEMPLES.THE VARIETY OF COLLECTIONS OF NATURAL BEAUTY DONE BY THE STORY MISTRESS REALLY DESERVE MY HEARTFELT THANKS AND CONGRATULATIONS.I REALLY LIKE THE COLLECTIONS
THE COMPARISON DONE BY THE POET ABOUT HUMAN LIFE AND DISINTEGRATION WITH THAT OF THE TREE LEAF IS APT AND INDISPUTABLE.THE VARIOUS STAGES OF SPRING,SUMMER,AUTUMN AND WINTER GIVE THEIR OWN CHANGES AND THE EFFECTS IN THE LIFE AND SHAPE OF THE LEAF.SAME IS THE FATE OF WE,THE HUMAN BEINGS.THOUGH DISINTEGRATION HAS A SAD AND PESSIMISTIC NOTE IN THE LETTER SENSE,THE POET CLEVERLY TAKES A U- TURN IN HIS POETIC DRIVE AND TAKES US TO THE WORLD OF OPTIMISM WITH THE SINGLE AND FINAL LINE "ONLY TO BEGIN AGAIN" THOUGH THE POEM IS SIMPLE IN STYLE,THE CONTENT AND THEME ARE CAPABLE OF DIVING DEEP IN TO OUR HEARTS.THE PHILOSOPHY OF LIFE THAT THE POET BROUGHT OUT THROUGH HIS SONNET HAS A SOOTHING EFFECT IN OUR THOUGHT AND EMOTIONAL PROCESS. I LIKE THE SONNET VERY MUCH.THANK YOU MY DEAR POET FOR THE POEM
THE FINDING OF THE POET IS BEAUTIFULLY BROUGHT TO THE MENTAL LIBRARY OF THE READERS TO READ,THINK AND AGREE ,IF POSSIBLE.THE POET VERY DEFIANTLY DECLARES AT OUTSET THAT LOVE CAN BE DEADLY UNKIND.LOVE IS NOTHING BUT A WASTE OF TIME,ENERGY ,AND EVEN OUR PRECIOUS LIFE SPAN. EVERYTHING CHANGES IN THE WORLD,DESTROYING WHAT EVER WE CREATED.ALL THE ACTS OF LOVE ALSO WOULD VANISH LIKE ANY THING.THE POET SAYS THAT IT IS FATE OF YOU AND ALL YOUS IN THE WORLD.THE POEM IN VERY INTERESTING.THOUGH IT STANDS AS AN ODD MAN IN THE WORLD OF POETRY,ITS APPEAL IS INDELIBLE IN THE MIND IF THE READERS
FEAR OF FATE IS A COMMON FEAR IN THE MIND OF ALL HUMAN BEINGS.WE CANNOT PREDICT WHAT WOULD HAPPEN IN THE NEXT MOMENT.THIS BEING THE FACT,WE CANNOT FIND FAULT WITH THE FEAR OF THE POET'S.LOVER.BUT THE PHILOSOPHICAL POET INSTILLS OPTIMISTIC THOUGHT AND ADVISES THAT OUR DESTINES ARE OUR OWN DESIGN.THE OPTIMISTIC APPROACH OF THE POET ABOUT LIFE AND DESTINY IS PRAISEWORTHY AS IT DOES NOT PUSH US TO THE DARK CAVES OF DESPAIR AND DESPONDENCY.THE POEM IS BEAUTIFUL TO READ AND TO PONDER OVER IN OUR HOURS OF HOPELESSNESS
IN" LIFE'S LIE" NIKOLA~GO-RANGERS TELLS THAT LIFE IS A LIE..THE FOGGED MINDS IN THE HOPE OF GAINING ECSTASY SUCCUMB TO THE FALSE CLAIM OF NARCOTIC VENDORS.BUT THE BLISSFUL ECSTASY THEY GIVE DOES NOT LAST LONG IN THEIR BODY AND MIND.IT DISAPPEARS BY DRAINING OUT ALL THE ENERGIES ,LEAVING OUT THE POOR VICTIM WITH HUNGER AND CRAVING.I LIKE THE POEM
THE POET Marilyn Mackenzie IN HER Acts of Love TAKES A STERN STAND AGAINST HYPOCRITICAL AND SYMBOLIC EXPRESSION OF LOVE.SHE DOES NOT WANT FLOWERS,DINNER OR CANDY AS TOKEN OF LOVE.AS SMILE IS MORE EXPRESSIVE THAN FLOWERS,IT IS ACCEPTABLE FOR HER.THE SOUP SERVED FROM THE HOMELY KITCHEN IS MORE DELICIOUS THAN THE MEALS SERVED IN THE DINNER.SHOWING REAL LOVE IN PERSON IS SWEETER THAN CANDY.THE POET,S URGE FOR EXPRESSING REAL LOVE IS BEAUTIFULLY ECHOED THROUGHOUT THE POEM.I LIKE THE POEM REALLY VERY MUCH
THE REASONS PRESENTED BY POET FOR STAYING WITH THE BELOVED IS CATCHY AND ATTRACTIVE.THOUGH SIMPLE IN STYLE ,IT CATCHES OUR ATTENTION AND WE CANNOT BUT AGREE WITH THE ARGUMENT,BECAUSE THE THEME OF THE POEM DEALS WITH THE CORE OF AMOROUS RELATIONSHIP
THE LAMENTATION OF THE POET IN HER SIXTEEN LINES IS REALLY TOUCHING AND BASED ON A COMMON FACT AND EXPERIENCE WHICH WE ALL FACE AND ENDURE. BUT LET ME ASK WHY SHE IS AFRAID OF HER THOUGHTS AND MEMORIES ALWAYS? IS THERE NOT ANYTHING GOOD AND SWEET FOR HER? TRY TO CULTURE AND NURTURE AS MANY OF THEM IN YOUR MIND AND LIFE.LIFE IS LIKE DRIVING AND IT IS OUR MORAL RESPONSIBILITY TO END OUR LIFE-JOURNEY WITH OUT HITTING AGAINST ANY VEHICLE ON THE ROAD .DON,T FEAR THAT YOUR SOUL WILL PERISH DUE THE TERRIFYING MEMORIES AND THOUGHTS THAT YOU ARE CHERISHING,PAST IS PAST ALWAYS,AND IT CANNOT COME BACK AGAIN.MANKIND AS A WHOLE HAS TO REALIZE THE FACT TO ESCAPE FROM SUCH HAUNTING PAST
THE POET THROUGH SIX LINES UNVEILS THE SECRET OF LIFE.LIFE NOTHING BUT LOVE.WHAT EVER WE SEE AND EXPERIENCE IS NOTHING ,BUT THE VEREGERATED FACETS OF LOVE.I APPRECIATE THE POEM VERY MUCH
THE POET'S MISERLINESS IN DEALING WITH A THEME HAVING SCOPE FOR A EPIC POEM IS REFLECTED IN THE POEM.HE COULD HAVE WRITTEN AT LEAST A SONNET ON THE THEME.MAY BE THE POET IS SOMEWHAT SHY OR TONGUE TIED BY THE HORRIFYING COMPANIONSHIP OF DEATH.THE POET IS DEALING WITH AN ETERNAL FACT.BUT ARTISTS SHOULD NOT BE SO MUCH FRANK IN TELLING SUCH TRUTHS.HE HAS TO PRESENT IN A DECORATIVE MANNER
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