The poet envisages a gloious day of his with a clear sky sharing ice creams with strawberry-rubharb pie. Further
to add charm to the celebration balloons of all shapes are to be hung in the streets. Most important of all, the participants are all frownless. Thus goes the description. The descriptions are all in simple words, but it is strong enough to catch the attention of the readers. A good poem. Keep writing on. Best wishes. 🌹🌹🌹
Though so short, the poem is a beautiful one and the poet succeeded in coveying the spirit of the ecstatic dance which everybody does in rain. The storm in the heart is a beautiful image which conveys more than the letters used the poem.Dear poet, I like your poem very much.
The conversation between the worm and the apple is a quite strange one. I think that nobody has ever thought of subject like this for writing a poem. That itself is a speciality of this poem which attracts the attention of the readers. I like your poem very much. May such attractive poems flow out in profuse from mind and pen. 🌹🌹🌹
Confusion sustained through out the little poem .The poet has wonderfully succeeded in it.Animals locked away in the barn and meat coming soon tells a lot.It maybe the animals died of starvation and after their death their corpses were made meat.A strange presentation.I LIKE IT VERY MUCH.
The experience of becomming a writer is flawlessly depicted by the writer through his lines.The realization that nature,the sky, the air,passion, love and dream are quintessentials is very very true.keep writing on.You will really come out with flying coulours.
The flying experience depicted by the poet in his poem'TO LEARN TO FLY ' is really interesting.By going through the lines in the poem,we also feel the experiece of flying.The leap,circling,soaring,ups and downs are not mere words.They are experiences versified .I like the poem very much.Keep writing on.Best wishes.
The poem is simple
in style and language, yet inspiring in spirit. The experience of the poet flying high in to the sky among the clouds is a rare imagination subjected for poetising ever tried by poets as far as l know. The poem has an attractive element in it. I like the poem.
A beautiful love poem,simple in style and diction,yet the poet has succeeded in pouring out his amorous sentiments inundating in his heart. The poet is a typical lover very straightforward and innocent his love for the lady love.A soft and readable poem which passes the corridors of our mind like sweet breeze.
THE poem "I feel a sense of history"bears a torch to the worlds of mystery that the dreams of days or nights carry us to.Really it is highly interesting to think about them.Each dream is a peculiar experience to us.There must be other worlds than our earth.Thank you my dear poet for igniting such a thought in me.A good poem.
The ardent wish for reserving the sweet memory of the love meet ever afresh in the romantic chamber of of the heart is the subject matter of the poem.Love never dies and same is the nature of the memories of love.Really a good poem to read.
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The bold tirade against the hypocritical ostentation cunningly coloured as love by the world is really an eye opener.It is an unhappy fact that love is in air only.It is not practised in real life.The red letters that the poet/poetess opted to vociferate the sordid reality is symbolic,as red is the colour of love.A good poem.
True are the true things that you put in true spirit in true letters about the true picture of the truly untrue world in which we ,the contemporaries, are truly destined to live.To be true,we all have a true responsibility to drive our generation to true destination.Truly your poem is a true reminder for that.
A good poem worthy of careful reading as it can engender much more connected thoughts in the mind of the readers.The poet confesses in the beginning that he and his thoughts are contained in the wooden barrel.But when he comes out of the barrel,he he sees them reverberated in the nature outside also.In short,the poet has to come out of himself to the Nature for better imagination.
Yellow is pale.Here yellow indicates lifelessness, that is death.But here we see the picture of a flower in yellow colour ,that too in the background of the setting sun strewing golden colour in the horizon.A beautiful poetic match.The dead grandmother is lying like a divine flower offered at the altar of setting sun.Actually she in not dead.Her love would continue to live on earth making her children's life beautiful and strong.A good poem.
Two types of imparting knowledge are presented here in this poem left open for the readers to contrast and consider.The first is based and built on long years of endurance and dedication,whereas the latter is polished and having lesser trial.The first one is practical and the second one is theoretical.Unfortunately the second one is give more attention.The idea conveyed through the lines are really catchy.A good poem
The concept of human beauty is confined to the attributes of the youthful physique.But for the flora world,beauty is more a quality of ripeness.Here the poet is trying to see the beauty of age. It is interestingly welcome that the poet is taking a road less traveled by others.I really appreciate the poem.The style and diction are simple,yet appealing to our thoughts.
The lover is head over heels in love with his lady love.He drags in even God to vouchsafe his brimming love for her.His ardent love for her is basked in enthusiasm and sincere emotions emerging from his heart.But my dear lover poet,can we keep justice to all our promises that we do when we are blind with love.However.the poem is beautiful and has all the traits of a love poem.I appreciate it very much.
First of all let me express my heart felt appreciation and respect for the author for such a piece of inimitably comprehensive presentation of God-awareness in simple,yet beautiful terms and style.It seems that the author has stolen unaware what I have in my my mind about God,Life and Life after death.The solace it gifts to the readers and the divine knowledge it imparts are extremely valuable .Thank you very much for it.
The symbol of flower has an immortal place in literary domain when describing love and lady love.But a trap is there that flowers are transient beauty in nature.Today's flowers are to fall and fade away for tomorrow's flowers to bloom and flourish.This being the inevitable natural law,how can we expect otherwise? The style and diction are simple,yet the poem has succeeded in giving an indelible in the mind of the reader.Though the poem is written in free verse, it has a free entrance in to our minds.May your quill be blessed with more poetic fervor to pen for us to read.
The beautiful recounting of how light houses began in the world is a valuable contribution to the wonderful world of knowledge.We cannot but read the write up with all the feelings that we are going through a classical story.The description throws light in to the lives of the light house keepers,how keen they were in performing their duties accurately and with unfailing punctuality despite all their difficulties imposed upon them because of the period they lived in.In the present high tech world,when people are becoming more and more lazy due to our conveniences and luxuries,we can remember their services with utmost respect .Thanks a lot to the writer for the write up.
TRUE,there is an equation for everything in our world and life.As the poet unveiled through the poem, contradictory elements contribute in keeping the life business well balanced.Love and hate,war and peace,night and light,good and bad are such unavoidable components.A good poem.I like it very much.
You have rightly put it plainly,but effectively.Unhappiness and miseries are contagious like anger.Misery tries to hold our hand to lead us to further miseries and disappointments.The poet advises us to realize this and reject the hand that sorrow offers lead.Really an inspirational poem.I like it very much.
It is really interesting to participate in the three word mayhem activity.Every body joins in the word drive and brings an idea at nowhere.Some times it would bring out a valuable idea or a most ludicrous .Whatever it be I like it very much.
The effect of prayer is miraculous .Incidents are many to prove this.There is a divine energy pervading everywhere in the universe.By praying ,we are connecting ourselves to that energy.This energy is omnipotent,omniscient and omnipresent. The writer is really fortunate and blessed to receive that energy for curing his back pain'.Everything changes when you pray' is a true devotee's realization.The write up is truly inspirational and would definitely strengthen our faith in Jesus Christ.
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