The story 'The Short term loan' by Ironworker is a mystery story. It dazzles the readers' brain through out. It seems that the writer has a praiseworthy dexterity in it.But I am at loss to understand as to why he has been sanctioned a loan of twentyseven dollars by his bank from an annonemous source. Hope that he would bring out its clarity when he develops the story further. Good writing. Best wishes. 🌹🌹🌹
The brain is a wonferful gift which our Creator fitted inside our skull. How meticulosly it functions in all the business and affairs our life. But alas! When its power is scattered due to alzhemics how horrible is the condition for us. I think that the poet is bringing out that through the lines in poem. Good poem.
The poem "a child's bond"by the poet is a strange as such it is attractive also. Avoiding the capital letters is a peculiar experiment in poetizing which the poet has done with praisable dexterity that too with very few simple words! Lucifer is drawing out how
a child is bonded to cry, play, sorrow, mighty and through them to almighty! A child's aspirations are simple and limited. Playing is the world of child. Its cry and sorrows are related to it. Its innocent mind thinks only of it. It may be because it is getting connected to the almighty through the might of the play.
Licifer, I enjoy your poem. Coming out of it after reading it is like an experience that I have come out of a magic world.
Best of luck my dear poet.
A good and apt simile. Life is like a bottle. When it is filled, it is a wanted one, when it is empty, it is unwanted and so a wanton one. Throwing away is it's fate. The meaning and meaninglessness are effectively depicted simply in very few lines. Good poem. Best luck. Write again.
" Plan for the future "by Thankful Sonali is a beautiful piece of writing. The language and style is very simple, but the effect in the readers'mind great. The theme dealt with in it is thought provoking. He is very correct in planning for the present as we are living only in the present. Good writing.
The horrifying devastation is effectively portrayed by the poet Tim Chiu in his poem " A Gorgeous Paradise:Sad Devastation ". War destroys all the paradise we built on earth. It mecilessly makes the life of the people filled with sorrow and irreparable sense of loss. I like the poem. Best wishes for the poet in his ongoing writing.
YOUR thoughts and plans of love are strange,but attractive.Your dexterity in presenting your concepts effectively through simple,but lucid in style is praiseworthy.Love is the major concern of literature;especially of poetry.A good poem.I like your writing.Good luck.
The poem"Grief and Solace:Tomorrow resists" by the poet Tim Chiu is a thought generating one.Love is for outward expression and no for inward expression. True, self would ever in sorrow. Every thing in nature exists only because other things in nature allow them to exist. That is love. Such a love is expected from every thing. A good poem. I like it.
Really heart touching lines.The loss of our dear ones through death is really unbearable.Though we know that they are gone for ever with no hope of return to us,we cherish our hope to have their reunion with us in this life. Halloween day is bringing such a relief to our aching soul.I like your poem very much.
Good to read. I like it. 🌹🌹🌹🌹Listening to the same old song. It is boring, if the song is a boring one. But if it is an excellent one, can it be so? It would be an added pleasure to our mind.Similarly, if it is a most sacred prayer song, how can we turn it aside as boring? Think.
'Courting-old fashioned' by Dyana AKA Ironworker is really an educating essay. The essayist in it details the old and modern approaches to courting. Sure, courting plays an important role in marriage. But in modern life it is very difficult and dangerous to believe another person. Cheating is everywhere. So the modern thoughts regarding courting also should not neglected. An effective writer. I like your writing very much. Good luck. 🌹🌹🌹🌹
In "Insomnia wins again", the poet BB very effectively explains and depicts the state when one is disturbed by insomnia. Very good writing. I think that the poet has very well observed insomnia. Go ahead. Keep writing on and comeout as good poet. God bless you.
Mother's gift is not a material one. It is a spiritual one with its protecting vibrations shielding her child against all the dangers.The poet Dee is bringing forth is idea to the mind of the readers. A very good piece of poetry. I like it very much. Keep writing on. Good luck.🌹🌹🌹
" Iceberg " is really interesting to read. It is highly informative and equally beneficial to the readers. It has two parts. The first part gives an intersting desciption of Iceberg and the Titanic ship. The latter part is about meditation and the effect of it in our lives. A very good contribution to the world of literature. 🌹🌹🌹👍👍👍🙏🙏🙏
Pure Imagination is true, but it is wild. As it is wild, it with thoughtful whims and desires kindling for thr fire. The poet imagines the Lady Majesty of the Prince shall kiss her spellbound frog. Though the language used is simple, it is capable of creating a hurricane in our imagination. A good poem. Best wishes. 🌹🌹🌹🌹
The poem"Brushstrokes of Humanity" by the poet RadioShea depicts clearly in simple language, but very effectively how different human beings are engaged in quite different acts in different places. Some acts are cruel, come are pitiful, some are antisocial. Good poem. 🌹🌹👍👍🙏🙏
The poem"I am Sam"by the poe=≠t Fredmom is a really heart touching poem. The pain of the loss of sight and the inner quench to regain the sight is heart rending. Further, the last line"I want to see my mother, just at one glance" shakes the very soul of the reader. An excellent poem🌹🌹🌹👍👍👍🙏🙏🙏
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