As I understand, the poem"Love beyond the lust" by the poet rl is a love poem of the sun and the earth. The poet says that this world suffers naught of pride or greed, lust or love. But how can it be? This is only my doubt. The poet must have the reason. A little more elaboration is needed. But the writing is good and thought provoking. Go ahead. Best wishes🌹🌹🌹🌹
The poem"Diet Dying Days"by the poet Amy Jo is interesting to read. Food selection is a major problem which we contemporaries face. Which is the apt food to take? We are at a loss to decide before the modern foods. The subject matter of the poem attracts the attention of the teaders. 🌹🙏🌹🌹
The story engenders much laughter and thought in the mind of the readers."Housewife become Fatwife" attracts our attention due to the speciality and peculiarity of the subject matter dealt with in it. I like your story very much. Keep writing on and become a great writer. 🌹🌹🌹🌹
The poem"Mother Nature" by the poet Thewriterwitch is an enchanting poem written on "nature". The style is simple, the language also goes the way. But the charm it envisages is far far high.The mother nature is described as a girl to add a romantic outlook. Excellent poem. Best wishes, dear poet. 🌹🌹🌹🌹
The poem"She walks with Angels"by the poet Redtowrite is a really touching one. The loss of the child is extremely unbearable, but the poet does not fill the lines with lamentations. Instead, the poet consoles that the child is now with angels. A very good poem. 🌹🌹🌹🌹🙏🙏🙏🙏
The poem "Homecoming"by the poet Joto kai is brimming with the pleasure the poet experinces on getting back his lost cat. The style the poem is simple. The vocabulary used is also simple. Dear poet, your poem has a special charm to attract the attention of the readers. Good luck. Keep writing on. 🌹🌹🌹
The poem"Stardust"by the poet Poppy C seems to be a prayer to the Almighty, the all mysterous and the all wonderful God, who has created all the surpirses that we see and feel with our senses. We, the mortals can only stretch our hands above and cry and surrender the wonder. We are mere stardusts. A good poem. I like it. 🌹🌹🌹
A very courageous declaration of essential truths that everybody likes to hear.Not a single point in it can be pointed out as wrong or irrelevant. Man is born free, but he is in chains everywhere in the world. Freedom of speech is power, freedom of justice is power. The poem is an exhortation to realize it. A very good poem. I like it very much. 🌹🌹🌹🌹
Really interesting to read. How minutely you have observed the turtle. No mistake can be detected in your observation. You have a future as a poet. Write on. Best wishes. 🌹🌹🌹
The poem"A prayful balance-power and pride"by the poet Tim Chiu is a highly philosophical poem which well explains his vision of life. It is really true that we are mere shaky mortals making brilliant plans reviving through portals and liking cool scans. A very good poem. 🌹🌹🌹
In the poem"The dream catcher", the poet Inkwell says that he has woven 100 dreams into its strings with the intention of protecting them. A very good idea. We all see many dreams, but many of them vanish from our memory in no time. Now I also wish to weave them in a string to protect them. A good poem. 🌹🌹🌹🌹
" The angel in my dream" by Sean M H Delaplace is a beautiful fantacy poem which is capable of attracting the attention of the readers. Though it is written long ago, it retains the gleam and freshness of a just blown flower. Dear poet, reading your poem is a cozy experience. 👍👍🌹🌹
Beautiful poem, so short, so simple yet conveys a clear picture of winter and its effects. The snow flakes turn to glittering drops on heated skin air is a very beautiful and attractive imagery. Dear poet, I like your poem very much. Keep writing on. Best wishes. 🌹🌹🌹
" Im pensive not depressed " is really noteworthy poem expressing the observation of life by the poet. The poet is pensive due to the various changes in life. But the positive thing is that he is not depressed because the changes. The poem is written in
simple style, yet the effect is great. Dear poet, I like your poem very much. 🌹🌹🌹
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