The extremely romantic mind of the poet is inundating with with his ardent love for his beloved.No tinge of artificiality or insincerity can be detected anywhere in the lines.It really seems that the poet wrote these lines right with the palpitations of his heart. As such the readers cannot but sincerely wish him for the colorful materialization of his dreams.
As a true devotee and ardent believer in God,the poet expresses his wish to serve Him for all the love that God has showered upon him.The poet's prayer is pure and hence divine as it has no selfish demands before God.A good spiritual poem.
It seems that the poet was in love with a girl,whom the poet's friend has an eye.To his fortune,his friend could won her heart.But the poet is resigned to the reality and considers it as a blessing in disguise.A good poem with a philosophical inclination.
The sincere confessions of the poet of the mistakes and aberrations that he happened to commit in the course his life journey is the theme of the poem.The poet is now repenting for all that,He says that his walking away from the true path has made him weak and so weeps ,He says that he has to weep lot ,ie.till all his wrongs are washed .away by the tears.Really a true religious poem.I likeit much.
Success is like beauty, unattainable even for those who claim to have them.People try to capture these elusive phenomenons with their own theories of relativity.Some say success is money,for some others it is power,yet for some others it is self-respect or dignity.But we should realize that failures also follow success close behind as its complementary shadows.For me the real success is our success over our thirst for success.Let successes come and go in their own way as clouds travel through the sky.The sincere effort of the poet to see through the phenomenon of success is praise worthy.Really a thought provoking poem.The style is simple.but the matter treated is is dignified one.
A prisoner's sorrowful and helpless sentiments are effectively depicted in the free verse 'My Chains' by the poet.It is interesting to note that the "free verse" of the poet is for depicting "freedomlessness".Happy to see that the poet is free in his verse.A GOOD POEM.
The preparations for celebrating Happy Christmas is the theme of the poem.In twelve lines compact with all fervor and enthusiasm,the poet is ready to receive Christmas.It is a season of love,sweet kindness,happiness and warmth.The gorgeous lights and arrangements add further charm to the divine season.A good poem.Iappreciate it very much
The tactful and dangerous nature of man as described by the poet Tim Chiu in his poem is true in letter and spirit.The unethical and shady means to gratify his comforts and luxuries are there in the history of human race ever since it's origin.Really a good poem to read.I appreciate it.
Shan's poetic presentation about books are true to the very relevance of books in the varied walks of life.Since the invention of paper and printing.books began to rule the world.It is not possible to find single house any where in the world with out even a single book.But we should not shut our eyes to the gradually growing fact of electric media trying to wipe out books.However deserves special appreciation in reminding the world about the relevance of books in our life.i really enjoy the poem very much.
In line with all the lovers of the world throughout,the lover in the poem proclaims his ever lasting love with the girl with whom he is tied up by the magical string of amorous love.His heart is having many sweet dreams. Though written in prose,the matter dealt with in it adds romantic sweetness through out.Really an enjoyable poem.
Like all the lovers,the hero boy in the story has very high appreciation for his girl with whom he is in love in head over heels.I am not to dispute with him over all the tall claims of her beauty and sweet qualities of her.Instead I appreciate him and earnestly wish for materializing his ardent desires .A good short story.
In the comical ' My New Business',John Nation realizes that India is not a good place for business.Instead he finds that US of A is a better place for business.He strongly believes that his business would flourish there.Leaving aside the comedy aspect of the writing,may I ask one doubt that is it true of India? India had been and has been a business center from time immemorial. How ever, your presentation has its literary value and I appreciate it.
Romantic love is only an attribute of the juvenile immaturity.It makes the partners to see the things in an unreal manner.Fallen top sy turvy in romantic hurricane they proclaim many things and attempt to materialize them in life.Unfortunately all their glass mansions break to pieces in short time giving them mutual hatred and thirst for revenge.This is the common history of most of the love affairs anywhere in the world.Agree that many exceptions are there,but for that they have God's blessings.The poem here is about the former case.It is a good poem written strictly based on the harsh reality.
The transient nature nature of body is there always.Body succumbs to change .Ugly becomes beautiful,beautiful becomes ugly.The drama goes on in the highway of life like this giving pride and disappointment .It is quite natural.but there are deformities created by accidents.Such deformities are not to be blamed and cursed because they carry god's divine stamps of His help.So be not disappointed,instead find pride that God is your protector.
The romantic lover in the poet is yearning for having the bygone experience repeated on the amorous path of his life.since every thing is indelibly imprinted in his heart,He assures that no one can take away them from his mind's slate.A good poem giving a cozy feeling in the romantic minds of the readers.
THE UNIVERSE IS FORMED BY RECITING "AUM BY GOD.THAT RECITATION MUST HAVE BEEN SO THUNDEROUS TO DESTROY MANY THINGS AND TO CREATE MANY THINGS.MODERN GOD LESS SCIENTISTS ALSO REACH AT THE CONCLUSION OF BIG BANG IN TELLING THE ORIGIN OF THE UNIVERSE.ONE THING IS SURE THAT OUR UNIVERSE IS A SOUND ORIGINATED ONE.THIS SOUND IS ECHOED IN ALL LIVING AND NON-LIVING THINGS IN THE UNIVERSE.HUMAN VOICES ARE ALSO PART OF THAT SOUND.DUALITY OF QUALITY IS THERE IN THE CASE OF VOICES IS ALSO THERE .THERE ARE HAPPY VOICES AND UNHAPPY VOICES.IT IS DIFFICULT FOR US TO ESCAPE FROM IT AND FIND PEACE IN THE HIGH SKY.SO IT IS FUTILE TO ESCAPE FROM HERE AND FIND PEACE ELSEWHERE.I STRONGLY OBJECT TO TO THE THEME OF THE POEM.BUT AT SAME TIME I REALLY ENJOY YOUR POEM VERY MUCH AND THANK YOU FOR ENGENDERING SO MUCH THOUGHT ABOUT SOUND AND VOICES IN ME ALSO
Night and day are entirely different faces of a 24 hour day .Though they are quite different in their color and quality,they join together to materialize god's concept of full day.Like that people of different types are to unite on the earth.They meet together,work together and part when time comes.A good poem.I really appreciate.
Inspirational and self helping in letter and spirit.Sorrows and miseries are abounding in greater speed and number in the modern technologically so -called developed world.Restlessness,irrationally maddening speed,cruelty,lack of conscience,illogical mixing of language and mathematics all these have made inner world of man a torturing hell.In to such a world your writing is very helpful. I think that the divine compassion of God is reverberating through your words.Really good ,really helpful,really God blessed are you.
BETRAYAL IS THE THEME OF THE POEM.THE ONE WHO LOVED WITH ALL HEART AND DEDICATION IS CRUELLY NEGLECTED .IT IS NOT BECAUSE THAT SHE IS NOT BEAUTIFUL,BUT SHE FEELS THAT THE LOVER IS UNWORTHY OF OWNING SUCH A PRECIOUS DIAMOND LIKE HER.VERY NICE POEM.
A GOOD LITERARY PIECE,INSPIRATIONAL FROM BEGINNING TO THE END.IN FAILURE,PAIN,DARKNESS AND IN ENEMIES,THE WRITER SEES THE POSITIVE ROAD TO LIFE.HE IS CONFIDENT TO CONVERT THE DARKER ASPECTS OF LIFE TO SUNNY THINGS TO COME OUT SUCCESSFUL.I APPRECIATE IT.
YET ANOTHER VERY INFORMATIVE ARTICLE FROM M/S KAVITA KRISHNAMOORTHY.GOD HAS CREATED MANY FLORAS FOR THE NATURAL TREATMENT OF FAUNAS.IN OUR BLIND BELIEF THAT TREATMENTS CAN BE EFFECTED ONLY THROUGH CHEMICALS, WE FAIL PAY PROPER ATTENTION TO IT. THE AUTHOR'S SINCERITY IS PRAISEWORTHY.
THE ARTICLE OF M/S KAVITA KRISHNAMOORTI IS REALLY INFORMATIVE.LIKE A MEDICAL ACADEMICIAN,SHE HAS ELABORATED
THE MEDICINAL IMPORTANCE OF NEEM AND TULASI IN AN EASY- TO- UNDERSTAND STYLE.HER PRESENTATION IS A VALUABLE GIFT TO THE GENERAL PUBLIC.HOPING TO HEAR MORE SUCH INFORMATION FROM HER,I APPRECIATE HER SOCIAL COMMITMENT.
I REALLY SO SURPRISED TO READ SUCH A BEAUTIFUL POEM. IT HAS A CLASSICAL QUALITY.I AM SURE THAT THIS POEM WOULD DEFINITELY PASS ON TO GENERATIONS AMONG THE BEST POETICAL CREATIONS.THOUGH THE STYLE AND LANGUAGE IS SIMPLE,IT MAINTAINS A COMMENDABLE HIGH QUALITY LIKE THE STARS IN THE SKY .
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