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25 Total Reviews Given
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Review by no
Rated: 18+ | (1.0)
you never even tried
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Review of Pool side fun  
Review by no
Rated: 13+ | (1.5)
you need to put more work into your intratives if you want them to take off
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Review by no
Rated: 18+ | (1.0)
why do you even keep this story up just delete it
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Review by no
Rated: 13+ | (1.0)
you don't really put any effort into your intactives do you
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Review by no
Rated: 18+ | (1.0)
there are to many of this all ready and they never go anywhere ether pick a better seneryo or really try and a lot more you self but this just seems lazy
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Review of shrinking  
Review by no
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
don't give up on this add a little more yourself and I'm sure others will follow.
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Review by no
Rated: 13+ | (2.0)
this was not realy ever going to be easy for to get running and you gave up on it
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Review by no
Rated: ASR | (1.0)
you have made nothing here ever add or remove this story from this site because otherwise you're just wasting people's time
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Review of the fog  
Review by no
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
it not my thing but you seem to enjoy it
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Review by no
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
this is a quality story that is going to only get better a more is added
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Review of The Shrunken Life  
Review by no
Rated: 13+ | (2.5)
you can't expect others to add to something you don't
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Review by no
Rated: 18+ | (1.5)
you don't even try to get the story started wich is kind of sad. if you want people to add you have to put some effort on your end as well.
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Review by no
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
decent story but your going to need to add a lot more before it's really something
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Review by no
Rated: E | (5.0)
you really have a talent for this and should keep writing this story you really know how to right it right
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Review of Disposable  
Review by no
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
someone should really add more to this
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Review of Shrink and Vore  
Review by no
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
A good start you may what to pump out more chapters your self if you whant this to be successful thow.
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Review of The Sex Game  
Review by no
Rated: 18+ | (2.5)
your being too broad with your transfermations in your next story you my what to narrow the focus a bit no whents something that only may get the kenk thay what their going to read a story that is already about that thing.
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Review of Portal Problems  
Review by no
Rated: E | (5.0)
good fun
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Review by no
Rated: 18+ | (2.0)
their are all ready like a hundred anime shrinks try doing an original character shrunk around girls you made yourself you can make them however you what and will probably get more useful additions.
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Review of The Micro Spies  
Review by no
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
ferly bold to go with the non-erotic approach on a site that has so much of that stuff. I can only wish you good luck
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Review of New Oh-No!  
Review by no
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
grate story would read thow privetly
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Review of The Shrinker  
Review by no
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
lots of fun wink wink
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Review by no
Rated: E | (4.0)
this story has some potential but it is to soon make a defence statement I recommend more people add
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Review by no
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
good fun
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