WOW awsome piece of work beautifuly placed work of art i can see it took along time to get all the little pieces to fit togeather i can see it took hard work and dedication to make this one me being a wrighter and poet myself know how much hard work dedication and commitment it takes to make something like this
WOW awsome story beautifuly placed i can see it took lots of late nights hard work and dedication to pull somthing like this off but you did it and me being a wrighter and poet i know how much hard work dedication and comitment gose into wrighting somthing like this good work
AWSOME piece of work I can tell it took along time to make this work of art and lots of hard work and dedication to pull it off and mebeing a wrighter and poet i know how much hard work dedication and commitment it takes to make something as good as what you have here
WOW awsome sory i can see the hard work dedication feelings and pain with in the story it;s beautifuly done i can see the late nights you stayed up to do this and the commitment you show and me being a wrighter and poet myself i know how much hard work dedication to your work and commitment it takes to make something like this come to life but you did it all good work
wow awsome story I can see the hard work and dedication you put into this work of art it was well planned and well thaughtout beautifuly done and me being a wrighter and poet myself knows the hard work dedication and commitment put into a work of art like this and you did it all
WOW awsome work I love the way you brought it all togeather I can see the hard work and dedication it took for you to make this all happen and me being a wrighter myself and poet i know how much hard work dedication and commitment it takes to make somthing like this come to life on page
WOW awsome work of art beautifuly placed i love how you make it come to life on the page i can see the hard work and dedication it took for you to bring this work of art to life and me being a wrighter and poet i know how much hard work dedication and commitment it takes to make somthing like this to come to life
WOW awsome work of art it was beautifuly placed I can see the hard work and dedication it took to get this work into play and me being a wrighter and a poet knows how much hard work dedication and commitment that it takes to make somthing like this come to life
WOW awsome i loved the way you brought this work of art togeather I can see the hard work and dedication it took to make it come togeather and me being a wrighter and poet myself I know how much hard work and dedication and commitment it takes to make something like this come to life on the papper
WOW awsome job i loved the way you made this work of art come togeather with your hard work and dedication and me being a wrighter and poet myself I know what kind of hard work dedication and commitment it takes to bring something like this togeather
WOW this was awsome work of art best I have read so far I can see it took alot of hard work and dedication to put this work of art togeather and me being a wrighter and poet myself knows how much hard work dedication and commitment gose into putting a work of art like this togeather
AWSOMELY done well p0laced work i loved it i can tell it lots of hard work dedication and commitment to put a work of art like this togeather it;s beautiful me being a wrighter as well knows the hard work and dedication and commitment that gose into a work of art like this job well done
WOW awsome story..I loved it so much,it was the best story I have ever read ever..I have never seen a story as good as yours..You keep up the good work,and maybe you can help me right an amazing story as yours...Tell me when you wright another amazing story,it was a really touching story!I think that you deffintley good do good as a writter.It really was a touching story..Keep up the awesome work..
this is an awsome poem i love it and the emotion you pour into it nothing beats a poet who taks about truth and there feelings into there poems the hardest thing i think being a poet like you is wrighting about myself and my emotions well i hope to read more of your work soon this was an awsome poem and i enjoyed reading it
WOW beautiful poem took my breath away i loved how it flowded right out from you and all the emotion you pourd into it awsome job this poem takes hard work and dedication to fit all the little pieces togeather like one that was awsome i hope to read more of your poems soon good work
AWSOME poem I cant waite to read more of them I can feel your feelings and emotion in this poem thats why i love it i love all poems that are true and full of feeling like yours dose and mine do i can also tell it took alot of hard work and dedication to get it done as well if all your poems are like this one them too took hard work and dedication
it sounds like it took a lot of hard work to get this poem to fit into place cause of the old and broken english your using and it also took lots of dedication you have a good wrighting style and on your way to being a awsome poet good job and keep up the hard work
i absoultly loved this poem you speak from your heart and truth and i loved how the words just flowed out and ryhmned I can tell it took you along time and lots of thaught and emotion put into this wonderful poem keep up the good work im giving you a 5 best poem i read yet
beautiful poem loved it although it is sad at some parts the whole poem touched me your a great poet and we can all learn from you and this poem you have a wonderful wrighting style keep up the good work and wrighting and tell us more about you through your wrighting thaughts and emotion im looking forward to reading more of your work
Hey my name is ron looks like your going through a rough time i have been there you should read some of my poems to maybe they will help you out i dont know i know if you need to talk im here but good job on the poem we would all like to get to know you better so this poem is a good start add to it and tell us about you through your words thaughts and emotions thanks
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