What I liked
*This piece had a lot of imagery to it - I think that everyone has had a crossroad in their life where they have wondered whether or not they have made the correct decision. You have retold your crossroads in a very emotional poem - great job!
What I liked
*Wow - this is not only a great poem, but I'm sure that this one took a lot of time to write! Very nicely done - this is a wonderful poem!
What I liked
*The rhyme scheme in this one is excellent - sometimes when a writer tries to stick to a rhyme scheme, the poetry sounds forced. Not true with this piece - very well written!
What I liked
*Beautiful - I love triolets and this one is outstanding. I like that fact that when you read the poem, the fact that it is written in a specific form doesn't overtake the meaning and theme of the poem.
What I liked
*This is a great idea! I teach English at the high school level and may have to try this activity with my students - I will definitely try it for myself!
What I liked
*Being from the south, I especially liked this one. I think that you have done an excellent job with this one! Very humorous and touching -
Grammar and Technical Issues
*Nothing noted - great work!
What I liked
*This is a beautiful love poem. The imagery and description is beautifully done and very emotional - I think that you have done a great job!
Grammar and Technical Issues
*Nothing noted - great work!
What I liked
*I took this poem as an analogy for life - all to often, we fail to see the beauty around us and only see the ugliness - the ending is very positive and promising.
What I liked
*I took this poem as an analogy for life - all to often, we fail to see the beauty around us and only see the ugliness - the ending is very positive and promising.
What I liked
*This is another well crafted poem with a great deal of emotion in it. The imagery is well done - I especially liked the part about the rain fall being a baptism. Great Work!
What I liked
*Very well done - I personally like free form poetry (I think that the author can express his or her feeling more freely in this style). Very haunting -
What I liked
*The fact that you shared something this personal with the WDC community shows (at least to me) what a caring place this is. I am SO happy to hear that your mother and uncle are doing better -
What I liked
*A guestbook is such a great way to get to know others here on WDC - plus it helps to make new friends - great idea (I may have to start my own!)
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