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53 Public Reviews Given
55 Total Reviews Given
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Review of The Lesson  
Review by Jim Payne
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice.
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Review of Emergency!  
Review by Jim Payne
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nicely done.
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Review of Innocence Lost  
Review by Jim Payne
Rated: E | (5.0)
Amen!!!

Please, if you change this, let me know. As it is, I find no fault.
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Review by Jim Payne
Rated: E | (5.0)
Amen!!!
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Review of Iva Bout Hadditt  
Review by Jim Payne
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice.
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Review of Rolling In Candy  
Review by Jim Payne
Rated: E | (4.5)
I read your bio. So, you want reviews instead of GP's. Too bad, I am going to give you some GP's for an entertaining story anyway.

As for a review - just watch your spelling. I am sure others will be more critical, however, I read either to learn, or to be entertained. I like your story.

Now for the terrible GP's.
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Review by Jim Payne
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very interesting, I am a Civil war buff.
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Review of Touchdown  
Review by Jim Payne
Rated: E | (4.5)
Nice.
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Review of The Virus  
Review by Jim Payne
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Interesting, add more to it.
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Review of The Choice  
Review by Jim Payne
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Interesting.
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Review by Jim Payne
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Interesting.
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Review of Smoke  
Review by Jim Payne
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Nice, I enjoyed this.
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Review of I love you.  
Review by Jim Payne
Rated: E | (4.0)
Interesting, I hope that you got a good grade on this.
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Review by Jim Payne
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Nice, I enjoyed this.
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Review of "Vanishing"  
Review by Jim Payne
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good, it kept me interested all the way through. Titles catch my attention more than anything. You gave this story a good title. Bait and hook.
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Review of A Day of Horror  
Review by Jim Payne
Rated: E | (4.5)
Nicely done.
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Review of Alone  
Review by Jim Payne
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice, I liked it.
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