oh my god! this gave me goose bumps coz you wrote this actually happened. thank god your friend is safe!you've captured the essence of her experience very well in verse. good job.
how very true. i liked the easy pace of this poem. i also liked that you haven't indulged in theatriccs to extract sympathy and told it like it is. good job, keep it up.
this poem has an abundance of nostalgia that isn't overwhelming. you've controlled the pace very well. i liked the way you've used imagery at the start of every stanza and then gone on to explain it in depth. moreover i liked the way you've maintained a distance from a dead relationship. it isn't as if the poet is giving in to emotions and breaking down. these are just passing thoughts and you've handled them very well. well written.
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what a positively wonderful story! its visualisation is powerful and im sure it'll make a good bedtime story for kids. maybe you should come out with an entire set of adventures of Ana and her pixie Belize. really well written.
this is a very funny and enjoyable piece of work. i had a good laugh. all your points are so true. well written, i wish you had added more points, i would've loved it. all the best.
its a very touching piece of work. your observations on the plight of ppl affected by such ailments is perfect. good job. i like the easy language you have used.
interesting piece of work. i felt very uncomfortable reading it because of the dark mood you've set. but then thats to your credit because you acheived what you set out to do as a writer. good job.
its a beautiful nostalgic piece of work. i really enjoyed reading it. mayb you shld follow it up with a letter to your present self so that its like a sequel. im sure itl work out well.
the softness of this verse touches me. i think you should add a few more verses. im sure you have much more to say so dont hold back because you write so well. good job.
this piece of work is so laden with genuine emotions that im moved. your choice of words are very good and strong. the length of the poem is just right as it doesnt drag. good job.
your ability to use powerful imagery always amazes me. i think only a natural poet can do that. im glad you're using this God's gift to spread a very important message. we need love and understanding, not hatred or war.
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