Hello JTown,
I just finished reading your piece of GHOST TRAIN. It was a great read. You took the character's life and began when he was a child and continued on through until he was old. You did a great job with this piece. i would be afraid of something like this if I heard it. I wouldnt' know what to do. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Jack,
I just finished reading your piece of STAINS. It was a good read,. It sounds like you were on the war path within this piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You have done an excellent job. Bloody stains is something too hard to remove. I hope this was only fiction and not the real thing. I hate to think of two people feuding against the other. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello English Creator,
I just finished reading your piece of LOVE POEM FOR MY LOVE. It was a good read. There were all the signs of love within this piece. You did a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. it is love for sure when you feel the way you feel. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
Hello Suu,
I just finished reading your piece of I GAVE YOU AWAY. It was a tear jerker for sure enough. It was sad. i liked how you did this though. You went from a young girl to an older woman in a nursing home. You captured all the things that a mother would feel within this piece. You did a good thing by writing this piece. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Montanazen,
I just finished reading your piece of THE EMPTY HEART. It was a good read. One that was touching. The monk had the answers for the abbot and that was something that I didn't think was going to happen. You did a good job with this piece. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you.Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello 2 stars is below average,
I just finished reading your piece of WHAT IS LOVE, DADDY? It is a great piece and one that won in the contest and should have won first place. I hope it did. It touches the heart of one who isn't a parent like myself. I can imagine what it does for a parent to read this piece especially a dad. i hope this finds you well And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Maria,
I just finished reading your piece of LOVE IS . It was a beautiful piece of work. It was a good read. Love is the thing that brings people together for sure. it is found in these things you mentioned. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. It was as said before, a good read. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Lapsis,
I just finished reading your piece of MY ONLY FRIEND. It was a great tribute to the friend. You made a good piece here. There is so much to this friend of yours I wish I had more friends like the best friend I have. He is good to me. It seems that your friend is good to you. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Sele,
I just finished reading your piece of MY MOM. it was a good piece and a great read. You put your heart into this piee and it shows. Mothers are the best friends anyone could ever have young or old. It makes no difference how old you may get but your mother will be the one who will be cheering you on. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello sele,
I just finished reading your piece of HOME. It would have been a good read had it not been so repetitious. You could have said that a few times and then said the rest of your piece. It would have been a terrific piece had it not been for that repetition. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
Hello Shygirl,
I just finished reading your piece of death Row house. It was a scary story. However, the things I noticed about it there were no punctuation to the piece. Very few periods and a few commas were there,. It was hard to read. So, I ask you to edit the piece again and put the punctuation in the story. It was a gruesome story and one that was horrifying. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Than Pence,
I just finished reading your piece of THE GUY. It was a sad read as well as a good one. It seems that you are hung up on this guy and he doesn't want you at all. That is an awful way to be. I hope that this will be working out for you and better yet i hope this is fiction. If so then I am glad to say that you have done a good piece here of making believe. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello imaginative,
I just finished reading your piece of MY ROOM. it was a very good read. It was without mistakes of any kind and it was a good flowing piece. You have done an excellent job. I like to go to my room too and be in here for a long time. I get so much out of life by being to myself. You hit the nail on the head with this piece. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
Hello Laura,
I just finished reading your piece of CONSCIOUSNESS. It does cause the mind to wonder. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You have done an excellent job with this piece. I wonder if you really feel this way or just wrote this as a way of getting your feelings out? I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Tyler Ridge,
I just finished reading your piece of TYLER RIDGE. it was just as you said the character profiles. I liked the profiles of getting to know you better. I know your name and that you are human of course and the other things in there are the same for your friend. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!!!.
Hello Rob,
i just finished reading your piece of THE TEENAGE LOVE ELEMENT. I loved the story. It was hot to me and the great thing about it was very descriptive. You could almost see the two engaging in love and enjoying themselves. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Riodeplata,
I just finished reading your piece of TRUST. It was a read that was somewhat difficult to understand but I think I got it. There were some mispelled words in the piece that you may wish to edit like the word whole for example would have been correctly spelled hole. Other than that it was a well written piece. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Shay,
I just finished reading your piece of COMPLICATED LIFE. It was a good read. There were some sadness in the piece, though. Your mom being intoxicated at the time when you got home wasn't good at all. Then you driving without a license was something else again. I do hope that things are better for you. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Keeva,
I just finished reading your piece THE FUNERAL. It was a sad piece but a good read. The Great Depression sent so many people to their deaths and what didn't die was lost forever in their inability to pay for things that wanted. It was a horrible time and you captured it so well. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
Hello Christine,
I just finished reading your piece of COMPOSITION. It was a great read. There were musical terms in here that I didnt' understand but it made the piece sound wonderful. you have a knack for doing music for sure enough. I know I could learn from you. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Shawn,
it sounds like her work. You did a good job. I just finished reading your piece of MY PEOPLE. I could Maya Angelo writing this piece. I hope this flatters you for it is meant. I feel for the people you are talking about. They have been pushed around and about by so many that it is unfair to them. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Shawn,
I just finished reading your piece of FAITH. It was a very good read. You must have some kind of faith there to do the unthinkable. I trust that this is just what you feel within yourself and not that you really did something like this. I couldn't stand to see anyone hurt themselves. i hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello adelle,
i just finished reading your piece of REASON. You had a rough life. It seems by the way you spoke in your piece. No wonder why you feel the way you do about things. I would be callous too for sure enough. I don't blame you at all for feeling the way you feel. I hope this finds you well And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello JAY,
I just finished reading your piece and thought it was a good read. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You have done an excellent job. It is nice to do something nice for someone and it shows within the piece. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Williamsuncle ,
I just finished reading your piece of THE SLEEPLESS CHRONICES. It was a good but sad read. I hate of knowing anyone is homeless. The same thing could be said about me if it wasn't for the state helping me out to stay at the place I am. It was a good read as said before. I hope things are better for you now. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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