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Review of As I Found Love  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear nuruinabilahh,
I have reviewed this before but only gave it a 4.5 stars. I feel in having read it again it deserved the 5.0 for the same piece. I just finished reading your piece of AS I FOUND LOVE. It was a good read. Love is the universarl language as far as I am concerned though people say it is music. Love makes the world go around. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!{image;1644262}.
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello GoldenPen14,
I just finished reading your piece of LIFE ON THE TRIGGER. it was a very good read. It is about your life and the pain you go through each and every day. The piece is well written It flowed well. Keep on writing. You're good at it. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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Review of earth  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hello gonzowriter,
I liked your piece. It was a good read. I just finished reading your piece of EARTH. There are many modern things in this world that makes it complicated at times. Where is the simple life that everyone needs to share? You hit the nail on the head with this piece. It was a good read.l I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!!{image;1644262}.
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Review of She  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Ashley,
The song was perfect! I just finished reading the piece of SHE. You had all the things done well. There was the first verse and the chorus and the bridge. Right on through it was a good song. I hope that you will do many more of these. Its your forte. I hope this finds you well And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of ???  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Vacifier,
I just finished reading your piece of ??? I don't know of a good title for it. It was a good read. The structure was solid. It flowed well. I looked for some mistakes but couldn't find any there. You are a good writer. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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Review of Without You  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hello Caty,
I just finished reading your piece of WITHOUT YOU. It was a romantic piece and one well done. The structure was solid. I didn't find a rhyming scheme though you may have had one. It was beautifully done. I liked to think that someone thought of me like this. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Carved  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hello Rahm-Sahriv,
I just finished reading your piece of CARVED. It was a great read. So, this is a contest entry for the Writer's Cramp contest. Good going. I hope you will do well. You included everything that was a prompt. I don't know how you did but you did. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of I MISS YOU MOM  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello skymac,
I just read your tribute to your mother.. I just finished reading your piece of I MISS YOU MOM. It was a tear jerker for sure enough. The pain that is there within you was brought out within the piece. The thought of her being in Heaven is a great thought. I think you did an excellent job with this piece. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Jessiebear,
I just finished reading your piece of LIFE, LOVE, AND DESTINY. It was a good read. I didn't find any mistakes in the whole piece. you have done an excellent job. The idea of growing old together is a great feeling. It is true love at that rate. You have done well in writing this piece. I hope you are proud of it for you should be. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!![image:1644262}.
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Bieberlove,
How true this is! I just finished reading your piece of THE WORST KIND OF HEARTACHE. You hit the nail on the head with this one. i have to agree. There are somethings I would love to have and taking my hands off it is a very hard thing to do. You did a good job with this piece. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ..
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Kenzie,
I would or could not agree more with this message. I just finished reading WHOSE WORK ARE YOU STEALING? It is a black day when someone takes something that doesnt' belong to him or her and uses it for their own self edification. There are the copyright laws that we have in the US. They must be abided. You did a good thing bringing this to surface. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!!{image;1644262}.
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Review of Time  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Thomas,
I just finished reading your piece of TIME. It was a good read but a long one. It was all good so don't misunderstand. It is longer than some poems I have read today is all. Time runs us all. it is not enough time to do the things we want to do and not enough time to do the things you and I should be doing. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello cunnybunny,
I just finished reading your piece of THE MISSION STATEMENT. You are not the great I Am. How could you say such a thing to begin. I wont' say it was a good read for it wasn't not to me. it was blasphemy in the worst way with words you used. No one is higher than God. And you according to what I read made yourself out to be like Him. Wrong for sure enough. I do hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. In your made up world. I sign this cubby
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Review of Do You?  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Emy,
I just finished reading your piece of DO YOU? it was a good read. There were alot of questions in this one. But it added to the piece. You did a good job with this one. One must think very clearly before they have a child in this day and time. I don't see where the child has a chance in this world. I really don't I think you have done a great job with this piece. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ..
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello R.J.,
I just finished reading your song. It was a good one. Yes you can put the lyrics to a song even if it doesnt' rhyme on here. Your work is appreciated here no doubt about that. It was a good piece. You are in love with this person and you have treated her wrong and you are hoping she is with another man who is giving her more. This is what I got from the piece I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of The Awakening  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello iniquityred,
I just finished reading your piece of THE AWAKENING. It was a gruesome tale. To think that he was a ghost was something else for sure. The many times he advanced to the door and tried to open it was some thing else again. You made this believeable. I like it when a person does this. It is a good way of writing. You have a good way of writing. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Suburban Nausea  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Keith,
I just finished reading your piece of SUBURBAN NAUSEA. It was a good read and one that i will not forget the rest of the day. i don't know why you used the terms you did but it added to the story I guess. He was a lonely sort of fellow. Anyway it was a good read as I said before. i hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Jeff,
I just finished reading your piece of THE WRINKLES OF THE OCEAN. It was very short and to the point. It's as I like them short and sweet. Do you feel the words you wrote? I think you meant to say Where have i been. not Were have i been. Anyway it didn't take away from the reading. There was a picture of the ocean that i saw though it was the ocean of what if's. It was a good read. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ..
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Review of To Corrupt Man  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Donny,
This was a fantastic story! I just finished reading your piece of TO CORRUPT MAN. it was a gruesome tale. It was hard to keep up with the I's in the story but i managed. The I's meaning Satan or his demon. Imagine shooting himself after shooting the lonely man in the woods. But when you're under demon power you have no other choice. You made this believeable. I beleived your story and was convinced it was this way. you are a good writer to make me believe this. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Oly,
I just finished reading your piece of WHAT WILL IT TAKE TO INSPIRE. It was a good read. You did everything so perfectly but with one exception in the line with the word like you typed a t in front of the word like. That was the only thing wrong with the piece. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Playing with Fire  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Cassie00
Don't sell yourself short on this it is a good beginning. I just finished reading your piece of PLAYING WITIH FIRE. It was awesome in the beginning for you to be kept by this man of whom you didnt' want to be in your life as he wanted to. You did the right thing of course. I am glad it was only a dream and not the real thing. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Jacob,
True to my word i found this piece and have to say it was a good one. I just finished reading your piece of UNTITLED. It was beautiful and serene. you described Penn Station very well. I was in New York some years ago and it was as you said it was. But the love you have for this young girl is something beautiful. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Lily,
I just finished reading your piece of MOTHER-CHAPTER 1. It was a good but long read. I enjoyed the part where you threw your drugs away and got away from alcohol. That was the good part. It is sad that you dont' know what happened to your mother though. i wish you would let me know how she died. I take it there will be a chapter 2 for this story. I will look forward to reading it. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Big Things  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Eva,
I just finished reading your piece of BIG THINGS. Imagine a snake that was that big. What a perdiciment you were in at the time!!!!
There were alot of things big in this story. No wonder you wished you were bigger too. i can see that and understand. it was a good read. You did well. I hope this finds you well. and all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!!{image;1644262}.
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Runnergirl,
I just finished your piece of THE UNEXPECTED HERO. It was a sad tale. There was elation that you got out safely. But the sorrowful part was that Ruby gave her life for you. Your character or you were in such a state of euphoria that you had got out of the building. I was cheering you on. I hope this is fiction and not a real story. I hate to think that a dog like Ruby was killed. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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