*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile.php/reviews/ragtimes/sort_by/r.review_creation_time DESC/page/10
Review Requests: OFF
2,164 Public Reviews Given
2,166 Total Reviews Given
Public Reviews
Previous ... 6 7 8 9 -10- 11 12 13 14 15 ... Next
226
226
Review of Cadence  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Melody,
I just finished reading your piece of CADENCE. It was a good read. i liked what you said in the piece. Like for example "My heart beats to your drum, tempo so fast it's merely a hum." Now that is music. There are other pictures you drew within your words too. I loved the whole piece. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
227
227
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello JL squeaks,
I just finished reading your piece of CAN I STILL SAVE YOU? It was a heartwrenching piece. You wanted to save someone very close to you. you would do anything for them that you could. It shows brilliantly in this piece. I hope that the person let you save them. I know it would have made your heart light if they did. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
228
228
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Jacob,
I just finished reading your piece of SONNET FOR A SLEEPLESS SWEDE. It was a good read. The structure was solid. There was romance in the piece. It is about you missing someone very dear to you. And i hope i am right about that. You love this person so much that you can't stand to be without them. There is suffering from being apart from this person. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
229
229
Review of Lazy  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Babo,
I just finished reading your piece of LAZY. It was such a short read that I don't think I can give you a good review on it but will try. The picture wass there of the clock and the rain on the glass. One could see these things well. One could hear the clock ticking loudly. I don't blame you for wanting to kill the clock. That was the fun part of the piece. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
230
230
Review of Ever Fear  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Thomas0,
What a piece this was! I just finished reading your piece of EVER FEAR. It was a good read. I learned a new word from your piece which is Void. I know what void is when it comes to a certain subject or a check that was cancelled. However your Void was something else again. It boggles the mind to comprehend. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
231
231
Review of The Dreamer  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Dr.Jim,
We meet again. I just finished reading your piece of THE DREAMER It was a good read and one that I really enjoyed. There are many things that a child dreams about in their life. There are a few things that an older person would like to do on their own if they could. You brought this out in your piece and it was a very good read. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
232
232
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Thomaso,
I just finished reading your piece of A MIRROR'S REFLECTION. it was a true piece and one that everyone should be made to read. You put the nail on the board so to speak in a hurry. It was a good piece and one that I got much out of. I thank you for that. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
233
233
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello LittleAM,
I just finished reading your piece of DIRTY LITTLE SECRET (NAME) PROLOGUE. This was some story. Your imagination is a good one. I could see everything you said in this piece. It was a good read. i can imagine the girl crying her eyes out over the boy she loved and looking for the dog food. Everything was clear. You did a good job. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
234
234
Review of Almost Home  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hello Thomas,
I just finished reading your piece of ALMOST HOME. It was a good read and one that was somewhat frightening. You mean the whole town was gone? That your angels lost their lives? It must have a horrowing experience for you to face all of that. I hope this finds youwell. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
235
235
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Dr. Jim,
This was a funny piece. I just finished reading your piece of THE LITTLE BOY AND HIS HORN. Made me think of Little Boy Blue. However there was nothing like that in the piece. It was just a boy. A boy with a horn and a good one from the way the piece read. You did a good job and I have to say again it was a funny piece. Made me chuckle. I hope this finds you well. And all the best toyou. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
236
236
Review of The Mud Puddle  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Dr. Jim,
We meet again and so soon. I just finished reading your piece of THE MUD PUDDLE. It was just like a boy who would do something like that. He couldn't resist. He knew it was wrong to do that but did it anyway. His mother could have much more cruel to him but didn't. That is good for it would have been sad had it been. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
237
237
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Dr. Jim,
We meet again. I liked what you said in this piece. I just finished reading your pieceof THE WAY THINGS USED TO BE. It is so true that the simple things like speaking to a neighbor or someone we didnt' even know is gone forever. We used to do this and that for one another and that is gone too. You made a valid point with this piece and it shows well. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
238
238
Review of Why??  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Dr.Jim,
I just finished reading your piece of WHY?? it was a good piece and one that needs to be answered. It is a piece but picturesto be seen throught the words you have written. The structure was solid. It was a good read. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ..
239
239
Review of Night Out  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello paperlessarmy,
I just finished reading your piece of NIGHT OUT. It was a very good piece. You were speaking to someone in the piece weren't you? Then you got to the part where you said that you wear the banner and wear the crown. Makes me think you were on parade or something.. Just wondered is all. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ,.
240
240
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello S.L.,
I know where you are coming from. I just finished reading your piece of EVERY YEAR AT THIS TIME. It's about the passing of your dad. I can understand and do understand where you are coming from. It is a sad time in your life. You can't stop thinking about your dad. It is something with your mind all the time. Then on the anniversary of his death you think about it more than ever. I know all of that for I feel the same about my own dad. I'm sorry for your loss. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
241
241
Review of Write No More  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Thomas,
I saw some pictures within the words you've written. I just finished reading your piece of WRITE NO MORE. It was a beautiful piece. You could hear the sound of the water I was wondering though who is She. That you spoke about in your piece. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
242
242
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello vampirecries,
I just finished reading your piece of MEMORABLE CHAPTER 2. It was well worth the reading. I enjoyed it very much. There seemed to be a vampire in this story. Was there? It was really something with the fight going on and Alexandra was running away from it all. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
243
243
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello nurulnabilahh,
I just finished your piece of SPIRAL OF BLACK AND WHITE. It was a complicated piece to begin. However there were no mistakes found in the whole piece You were the narrator it seemed to me. That you were talking about two people in their life. Then the rose came into the piece. could imagine the rose losing its petals. That was a good picture there that you painted with your words. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
244
244
Review of FTM  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello ieatpokemon,
I just finished reading your piece of FTM. I still don't know what an FTM is. However the piece was a good read. It is sad that you feel alone. There is nothing in the world any worse than that. I know there is death and all that but it isn't any worse than being alone. i wish for you happiness in your life. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
245
245
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Ly Ella,
I just finished reading your piece of ME AND YOU TOGETHER FOREVER. It was a good piece. There was so much to this piece. The main thing was the love that you have for this person. It is crystal clear that you love the person of whom you speak. it shows throughout the piece. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
246
246
Review of Illusion  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Melody,
I just finished reading your piece of ILLUSION. it was a good piece but one that was somewhat complicated to read. There no beginnings to the sentences that you wrote but the first one and the last one. The rest seemed to run together and didnt' stop. I had a hard time reading the piece. it would be best to redo the piece and watch where you sentences start and end. i think it will be a good piece to review again. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
247
247
Review of The War  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello JabViking,
I just finished reading your piece of THE WAR. It was a heartwrenching story. The poor man, Tom, was in such a state of delirium in thinking there had been a war. That these many people had died was another thing that was out of place as to the number. it was a great imagination that wrote this piece. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
248
248
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Olla,
This was a heartwarming story. I just finished reading your piece of MOMMY'S MIXED BAG OF FEELINGS. The love just flows from this piece to touch a nobody that you dont' even know. It is a beautiful piece for sure enough. it was mistake free and a good write. the love just immanates from you to touch someone else your little girl. What a beautiful story this was. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
249
249
Review of Into the Sky  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Emy Taylor,
I just now finished reading your piece of INTO THE SKY. It was a good piece but a sad one. Ican appreciate you're having lost the balloon. I would have too no doubt of that. I would have held it in my hands instead of tying it around my wrist. So i would have been just like you. I am glad that you grew up and felt the way you do about things and people. That is so smart and the adult way of being. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ,
250
250
Review of Mother's approval  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello unsure,
I just finished reading your piece of MOTHER'S APPROVAL. It was a good read. The things you went through was something else. It was your mother's approval all the way through. You needed it and was looking for it to happen to you. I think you did an excellent job on this piece You made a believer out of me. That isn't an easy thing to do but you did. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
1,095 Reviews · *Magnify*
Page of 44 · 25 per page   < >
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile.php/reviews/ragtimes/sort_by/r.review_creation_time DESC/page/10