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Review of Spunky Old Broads  
Review by Puja
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi Rose Praying for Peace ! After reading "Spunky Old Broads" , I offer you these comments:

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Your poem about, The elder ladies of the 21st century is lovely. I like your lines that flow well and are to the point.
You beautifully break the stereotype thoughts about old ladies. Yes, they do think smarter and trendier than some youngsters!
Thanks for Sharing.

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I have no suggestion. Your poem is inspirational!



Thankyou,*Smile*
Puja.

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Review of My Son Died  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Artemis The Spy ! After reading "My Son Died" , I offer you these comments:

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Your writing about a mother talking to her son's grave is emotional. Your words are very powerful and bring out the person's state-of-mind
very clearly. It surely is traumatizing to lose someone. Your words brought tears in my eyes. Thanks for Sharing.

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I have no suggestions. Your descriptive words are very intense.



Thankyou,*Smile*
Puja.

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Review of Chains Of Life  
Review by Puja
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi 💙 Carly ! After reading "Chains Of Life" , I offer you these comments:

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Your dark poem about evil is nice. The title is apt and the lines flow well. My favorite lines are;
"Challenging upheaval
Pursuing all in vain."
These lines have deep dark thoughts. I like your word choices. Thanks for Sharing.

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I have no suggestion. The form is written well. Your words are emotional!


Thankyou,*Smile*
Puja.

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Review of YOU  
Review by Puja
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi razia ! After reading "YOU" , I offer you these comments:

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Your poem about someone special is good. The title is apt and you convey so much in simple words.
A special person means the world to one when the whole world seems null. Thanks for Sharing.

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I have no suggestion. Your poem is inspirational.

These are just my views, even without the changes your poem is good.

Thankyou,*Smile*
Puja.

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Review of On Grief  
Review by Puja
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Sarah N. ! After reading "On Grief" , I offer you these comments:

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Your short poem about grief is emotional. The title is apt and the lines flow well. My favorite part is your comparison
with the melon scoop. Such deep thoughts! Thanks for Sharing.

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I have no suggestion. Your words are philosophical.



Thankyou,*Smile*
Puja.

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Review of Inspire  
Review by Puja
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi black07angel ! After reading "Inspire" , I offer you these comments:

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Your inspiring message about love is lovely! Spreading love will double one's inner-peace. My favorite line is;
"Love is what is saving the world."
This is so true. Thanks for Sharing.

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I have no suggestion. Your words are strong and emotional!



Thankyou,*Smile*
Puja.

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Review of i am a woman  
Review by Puja
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi ~LadyBee~ }! After reading "i am a woman" , I offer you these comments:

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Your poem about woman is beautiful. The title is apt and the lines flow well. My favorite lines are;
"i am human
i fail
i am a woman"
This is so true, I love the point here! Thanks for Sharing.

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I have no suggestion. I think your poem describes a woman completely. A lovely read!



Thankyou,*Smile*
Puja.

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Review of Flight Risk  
Review by Puja
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Deck the Halls ! After reading "Flight Risk" , I offer you these comments:

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Your thoughts on "Regrets" and "Risks" are very true. I like your comparison of regrets with sand.
Yes, sometimes regrets do pull you down to your knees. Risks help one achieve impossible dreams.
Thanks for Sharing.

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I have no suggestion. Your words are inspirational!


Thankyou,*Smile*
Puja.

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Review of Silent Valentine  
Review by Puja
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Rick H ! After reading "Silent Valentine" , I offer you these comments:

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Your Valentine's poem is very touching. The lines flow very well. My favorite line is;
"Blue scarlet tears and empty fears."
This line shows deep emotion. Thanks for Sharing.

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I have no suggestion. Your words are powerful.


Thankyou,*Smile*
Puja.

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Review of HAPPINESS  
Review by Puja
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi WriterAtHeart ! After reading "HAPPINESS" , I offer you these comments:

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Your article about happiness is nice. Happiness is in enjoying/ living every moment and creating memories for a lifetime. Your thoughts are philosophical.
Thanks for Sharing.

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I have no suggestion. Your words are so true.

These are just my views, even without the changes your work is good.

Thankyou,*Smile*
Puja.

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Review by Puja
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi a Sunflower in Texas ! After reading "Should've Stayed in Bed" , I offer you these comments:

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Your poem is very nice. Some days are such a mess and we wish we hadn't woken up at all. My favorite lines are;
"I return to find she's painted
White paws all over the floor."
These lines simply bring out the intense emotion with simple words! Thanks for Sharing.

*GiftB**BalloonY*Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar/Suggestions:*BalloonY**GiftB*
I have no suggestion. Your poem is good.



Thankyou,*Smile*
Puja.

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Review of Dinosaurus  
Review by Puja
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi fyn ! After reading "Dinosaurus" , I offer you these comments:

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The poem about ship's hulk is very nice. The title is apt and the lines flow well. My favorite lines are;
"Even scorpions die in
poisoned shade."
These lines are beautiful and powerful. Your words paint a picture in mind. Thanks for Sharing.

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I have no suggestion. Your poem is lovely!



Thankyou,*Smile*
Puja.

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Review of From My Hands  
Review by Puja
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi b_boonstra! After reading "From My Hands" , I offer you these comments:

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Your poem about a mother is nice. The title is apt and the poem flows well.A mother is indeed all-rounder;
selfless service she renders. Thanks for Sharing.

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I have no suggestion. Your poem is inspirational!



Thankyou,*Smile*
Puja.

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Review by Puja
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi VicariousGeorge ! After reading "Temptation is a Rose" , I offer you these comments:

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Your poem about "Temptation" is nice. The title is apt and the poem flows well. My favorite line is;
"A promise of passion,"
This line has deep meaning. Thanks for Sharing.

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I have no suggestion. Your poem is inspirational!


Thankyou,*Smile*
Puja.

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Review of Time  
Review by Puja
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Jolineann13 ! After reading "Time" , I offer you these comments:

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Your writing about "Time" is good. Time is indeed un-barred. We can not capture it, but can control effective usage of time.
Your thoughts are philosophical and true! Thanks for Sharing.

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I have no suggestion. I wanted to read more. Maybe, you could expand it.😉

These are just my views, even without the changes your poem is good.

Thankyou,*Smile*
Puja.

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Review by Puja
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Mari McKee ! After reading "What Cats Do At Night" , I offer you these comments:

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Your Children's poem about Cats is very cute. Your poem shares the secret about what cats do at night.
My favorite lines are;
"They are enjoying scones and jam,
as well as tiny sandwiches of cucumbers and ham!"
These lines flow well. Children would definitely love this poem. Thanks for Sharing.

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I have one suggestion. I think there are a couple of lines where the rhyme is not quite right;
1. Lines 1 &2, Stanza 3
2. Lines 1 &2, Stanza 7
Otherwise, the poem is good!

These are just my views, even without the changes your poem is good.

Thankyou,*Smile*
Puja.

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Review of Writer's Block  
Review by Puja
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi anneconrad ! After reading "Writer's Block" , I offer you these comments:

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Your poem about Life coming between writing is good. The title is apt and the poem flows well.
My favorite lines are;
"Earn, buy, consume
Waste time to waste money"
These lines are philosophical!Thanks for Sharing.

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I have no suggestion. Your poem is inspirational!

These are just my views, even without the changes your poem is good.

Thankyou,*Smile*
Puja.

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Review of Things to come  
Review by Puja
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi kris ! After reading "Things to come" , I offer you these comments:

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Your poem about "Fake People" is good. The title is apt and the lines flow well. My favorite line is;
"Once the bell rings, everyone is too their feet"
This line shares a sense of spirituality. But, did you mean "to"?
Thanks for Sharing.

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I have no suggestion, your poem is inspirational!

These are just my views, even without the changes your poem is good.

Thankyou,*Smile*
Puja.

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Review of A Single Strand  
Review by Puja
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi katwoman45 ! After reading "A Single Strand" , I offer you these comments:

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Your poem about a hair strand finding new meaning is great! The title is apt and the lines flow well. My favorite line is;
"A loose jewel from the crown"
I like the beautiful imagery in this line! Thanks for Sharing.

*GiftB**BalloonY*Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar/Suggestions:*BalloonY**GiftB*
I have no suggestion. Your poem is philosophical and inspirational!


Thankyou,*Smile*
Puja.

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Review by Puja
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Vix ! After reading "The Meaningless Nature of Words" , I offer you these comments:

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Your poem about a writer's frustration is emotional. It is truly very difficult to exactly put your feelings into words. And it
is uncertain that the same intensity of emotions would reach the reader! My favorite words are;
"Think.
Imagine.
Dream.

How do I define..."

These words very aptly show the state-of-mind. Thanks for Sharing.

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I have no suggestion. Your poem is good.



Thankyou,*Smile*
Puja.

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Review of One Little Toad  
Review by Puja
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Merry Mumsy ! After reading "One Little Toad" , I offer you these comments:

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Your picture book verse is nice. Teaching ten numbers using animals is fun! The title is apt. My favorite line is;
"Eight little llamas, looking for their mamas"
I like the rhyme, it really flows well. Thanks for Sharing.

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I have one suggestion;
You have mostly used animals, except for "seeds". I think, you could change it to some animal.

These are just my views, even without the change your work is good.


Thankyou,*Smile*
Puja.

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Review of CONFUSED  
Review by Puja
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Kali ! After reading "CONFUSED" , I offer you these comments:

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Your Acrostic poem on "Confused" is good. I see that you have put the mixed feelings very aptly in words.
Thanks for Sharing.

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I have a couple of suggestions;
1. You could make the first letters of each line bold making "CONFUSED" prominent, or you could mention in the
description that the poem is in Acrostic form.
2. I think, "to" from the first line should be "too";
"Caring to much when others don't"

These are just my views, even without the changes your poem is good.


Thankyou,*Smile*
Puja.

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Review by Puja
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hi kindredkitty ! After reading "My Redheaded Demon" , I offer you these comments:

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Your poem about your valentine is nice. My favorite lines are;
"Mold me as you wish
I will follow your demands"
These lines are strong and they show your love. Your poem is emotional. Thanks for Sharing.


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I have only one suggestion;
You could remove the word "Worth" from the line, "Worth pursuing my once withered dreams" for a better flow and to avoid repetition of
the word.

These are just my views, even without the changes your poem is good.


Thankyou,*Smile*
Puja.

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Review of Darkened Sky  
Review by Puja
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi ! After reading "Darkened Sky" , I offer you these comments:

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Your poem about Nature is nice. The title is apt and the words flow well. My favorite lines are;
"The pink sunset
Kisses the sky."
Beautiful imagery! Nature brings out lots of questions, it also encapsules all the answers in it! It is up to us to
find answers, a journey of self realization! Thanks for Sharing.

*GiftB**BalloonY*Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar/Suggestions:*BalloonY**GiftB*
I have no suggestion. Your poem is inspirational.


Thankyou,*Smile*
Puja.

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Review of Always Moving  
Review by Puja
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Alex ! After reading "Always Moving" , I offer you these comments:

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Your poem about Nature is beautiful. I like the fluid words and the title which is apt. My favorite lines are;
"Stars in the sky.
An everlasting light show."
These lines are so true and vivid! Thanks for Sharing.

*GiftB**BalloonY*Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar/Suggestions:*BalloonY**GiftB*
I have no suggestion. Your poem is good!



Thankyou,*Smile*
Puja.

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