Hello
Cath the Purple Unicorn ,
I am pleased to offer you this review on your {item:} as a judge for the {item:}. Please know these are just my thoughts and observations on your piece, and you may take what you find useful and disregard the rest.
Followed the contests rules and/or prompts given:
The review template starts with greetings, then talks about the meaning and emotion of the writing followed by character/plot and sentence structure. The review tool template ends with final opinion and closing lines. Good job!
What I liked:
I liked that you have given importance to the reader's feelings. After all, writing is incomplete without the end-reader.
Punctuation/Spelling:
1. "Templet" should be "Template"
2. "I am Cath and I just read {item:********} and now I am going to be review it." could be re-phrased something like;
"I am Cath and here is my review after reading {item:********}."
3. "Thes are only my opinion and suggestions and, that is all they are. Thank you for letting me enjoy your writing."
could be;
These are only my views. Thank you for letting me enjoy your writing!
Comments/Suggestions:
1. You could give more precise headings.
2. You could use some colors, different fonts and emoticons to make the review tool better.
Thank you for sharing your writing with me, and good luck in the contest ~
I expect to pass through life but once. If therefore, there be any kindness I can show, or any good thing I can do to any fellow being, let me do it now, and not defer or neglect it, as I shall not pass this way again. ~William Penn