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Review of Novel  
Review by Puja
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Blue ! After reading "Novel, I offer you these comments:

*Heart**FlowerV*First Impression/My Favorite:*FlowerV**Heart*
The Acrostic poem on "Novel" is good. I like the short and strong words. My favorite line is the last line;
"Love in written spirit..."
This line is so true. Thanks for Sharing.

*GiftB**BalloonY*Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar/Suggestions:*BalloonY**GiftB*
I have no suggestion. Your poem is emotional and beautiful!


Thankyou,

Puja.

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Review by Puja
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hi AliciaWithAY ! After reading "Eating creme brulee at the poetry slam, I offer you these comments:

*Heart**FlowerV*First Impression/My Favorite:*FlowerV**Heart*
The poem about dessert while listening to poetry is good. The title is apt and the poem flows well. I like the descriptive words that paint a picture in mind.
My favorite line is;
"peeling open a layer of richness, delicious,
I could almost taste the dessert! Thanks for sharing.

*GiftB**BalloonY*Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar/Suggestions:*BalloonY**GiftB*
I have no suggestion. Your poem is a delicious treat!

These are just my views, so please make changes only if necessary.
Even without the changes your work is good.*Smile*

Thankyou,

Puja.

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Review of Who Knows  
Review by Puja
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi B-Squared ! After reading "Who Knows, I offer you these comments:

*Flower1**Leaf1*First Impression/My Favorite:*Heart*
Your poem is nice. The lines flow well and the title is apt. I like the questions in the poem, they really bring out the intensity of
your emotions. Life is truly uncertain. "What if" questions are fantasies that make life interesting. Thanks for sharing.


*Leaf1**Flower1*Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar/Suggestions:*Wink*
I have no suggestions. Your poem is emotional and inspirational.


These are just my views, so please make changes only if necessary.
Even without the changes your work is good.

*Smile*
Thankyou,

Puja.

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Review of Oh Life!  
Review by Puja
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi ernest dempsey ! After reading "Oh Life!, I offer you these comments:

*Flower1**Leaf1*First Impression/My Favorite:*Heart*
Your poem about life is very nice. The title is apt and the lines flow well. My favorite line is;
"The end of me the start of you"
This line is a very good closing line. Life is so unpredictable and still we keep our smile-masks on as we travel.
Thanks for sharing.

*Leaf1**Flower1*Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar/Suggestions:*Wink*
I have no suggestion for improvement. I wanted to read more. Your words are inspirational.


These are just my views, so please make changes only if necessary.
Even without the changes your work is good.

*Smile*
Thankyou,

Puja.

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Review of My Family  
Review by Puja
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Helena Garcia ! After reading "My Family, I offer you these comments:

*Flower1**Leaf1*First Impression/My Favorite:*Heart*
Your Children's story about mixed family is good. It could be a great picture book. The subject would be very useful for
Children going through the similar family changes. I like the word choices. Thanks for sharing.

*Leaf1**Flower1*Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar/Suggestions:*Wink*
I have no suggestions. Maybe, you could expand the story with some more details.
Your story is nicely written!


These are just my views, so please make changes only if necessary.
Even without the changes your work is good.

*Smile*
Thankyou,

Puja.

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Review of Hope  
Review by Puja
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Erika ! After reading "Hope, I offer you these comments:

*Flower1**Leaf1*First Impression/My Favorite:*Heart*
Your poem about Hope is very inspirational. There is always a ray of hope that keeps us going through tough times.
Thanks for sharing.

*Leaf1**Flower1*Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar/Suggestions:*Wink*
I have no suggestion for improvement. Just one thing; I think you could capitalize the letter "g" in "god".
Your poem is nice!


These are just my views, so please make changes only if necessary.
Even without the changes your work is good.

*Smile*
Thankyou,

Puja.

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Review of Fear  
Review by Puja
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi Wenston ! After reading "Fear, I offer you these comments:

*Flower1**Leaf1*First Impression/My Favorite:*Heart*
Your poem about fear is really nice. The form is very interesting to read. My favorite lines are;
"Paranoia fills my head
I wish the pounding noise was dead
dead unto my aching ears"

These lines are emotional and perfectly capture the state of mind. Thanks for sharing.

*Leaf1**Flower1*Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar/Suggestions:*Wink*
I have no suggestion. Your poem is good,


These are just my views, so please make changes only if necessary.
Even without the changes your work is good.

*Smile*
Thankyou,

Puja.

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Review by Puja
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Nomadic_Soul ! After reading "Another Day...The Gift, I offer you these comments:

*Flower1**Leaf1*First Impression/My Favorite:*Heart*
A very nice poem. Reminded me of my dad who passed away in 2015. My favorite lines are;
"Don't worry about tomorrow
the sun shines today."

Thanks for sharing.

*Leaf1**Flower1*Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar/Suggestions:*Wink*
I have no suggestions. A beautiful poem.

These are just my views, so please make changes only if necessary.
Even without the changes your work is good.

*Smile*
Thankyou,

Puja.

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Review of " The Ceiling "  
Review by Puja
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi T.L.Finch ! After reading "" The Ceiling ", I offer you these comments:

*Flower1**Leaf1*First Impression/My Favorite:*Heart*
Your poem, "The Ceiling", is beautiful. I like your choice of words that give deep meaning with a touch of philosophy. The title is apt for the poem.
The lines flow well and they paint a picture in mind. My favorite lines are the last lines;
"or simple things that lie beneath;
the ceiling of the world"

Finding joy in simple things is what leads to self realization. Thanks for sharing.

*Leaf1**Flower1*Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar/Suggestions:*Wink*
I have no suggestion. Your poem is inspiring.


These are just my views, so please make changes only if necessary.
Even without the changes your work is good.

*Smile*
Thankyou,

Puja.

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Review of And I Did It.  
Review by Puja
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi The Sun SmilesOn Small Valley ! After reading "And I Did It., I offer you these comments:

*Flower1**Leaf1*First Impression/My Favorite:*Heart*
This 55-word story is good. The title is very interesting and apt. Actually, the title dragged me in to read.
I can picture the sense of achievement when you catch a disturbing mosquito. Great description!

*Leaf1**Flower1*Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar/Suggestions:*Wink*
I have no suggestions. Your story is good.

These are just my views, so please make changes only if necessary.
Even without the changes your work is good.

*Smile*
Thankyou,

Puja.

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Review by Puja
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Jeff ! After reading "Among the Branches, I offer you these comments:

*Flower1**Leaf1*First Impression/My Favorite:*Heart*
Your cinquain is very cute. The title is very apt. I like your descriptive words. The poem goes very well with the eye-catching picture.
Thanks for sharing.

*Leaf1**Flower1*Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar/Suggestions:*Wink*
I have no suggestions. The poem is inspirational.


These are just my views, so please make changes only if necessary.
Even without the changes your work is good.

*Smile*
Thankyou,

Puja.

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Review by Puja
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi Barefoot Bob ! After reading "An Atheist and a Child I offer you these comments:

*Flower1**Leaf1*First Impression/My Favorite:*Heart*
Your poem is very nice with a great message. The title is apt for the poem. My favorite line is;
"Forever stilled, forever gone."

This line is so raw and deep at the same time. I like the internal rhyme.
It is really difficult to explain death to a child without hurting him/ her, if we chose to explain in a non-religious way.
Such a sensitive subject! Thanks for sharing.

*Leaf1**Flower1*Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar/Suggestions:*Wink*
I have no suggestion. Your poem is emotional and inspiring.


These are just my views, so please make changes only if necessary.
Even without the changes your work is good.

*Smile*
Thankyou,

Puja.

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Review by Puja
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

Your poem, " My Grandfather Drank Coffee" is very nice.
As I read, I could see a picture in mind. The words flow well and the tittle is very apt for the poem.
I do not have any suggestion. I truly enjoyed reading your poem.
Thanks for sharing.

Puja.
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Review by Puja
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi,

Your poem, "A Rambling Mindfulness", is very nice. The poem flows well and the title suits the poem.
Often at work, most of us tend to be diplomatic and extra-sweet. This does not mean that we are weak, it might mean that we want to be out of controversies.
I like your descriptive words. I have no suggestions. A well-written poem that most readers can relate to! Thanks for sharing.

Puja.
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Review of Poetic Canvas  
Review by Puja
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi,

Your poem, "The Poetic Canvas" is good. It captures the relationship between a writer and words. I can see a picture in my mind that your descriptive words paint.
Sometimes, a writer's mind can have endless thoughts that go round and round. I think, every writer can relate to your poem. I have no suggestions. I wanted to know/read more, maybe you could think about extending the poem!
Thanks for sharing.

Puja.
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Review of My everything  
Review by Puja
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi,

Your poem, "My Everything" is well written. The words show your love for your daughter. Your words cover all the aspects of life. I see you as her; loving parent, friend, guide, a well-wisher, inspiration and a protector.

I think, you could add the line, "Forever and always" before your first, second and third stanza as well. These are just my thoughts, even otherwise your poem is great. Thanks for sharing.

Thank you,
Puja.
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Review of Review Template  
Review by Puja
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello Cath the Purple Unicorn ,

I am pleased to offer you this review on your {item:} as a judge for the {item:}. Please know these are just my thoughts and observations on your piece, and you may take what you find useful and disregard the rest.

*Pencil* Followed the contests rules and/or prompts given:
The review template starts with greetings, then talks about the meaning and emotion of the writing followed by character/plot and sentence structure. The review tool template ends with final opinion and closing lines. Good job!

*Pencil* What I liked:
I liked that you have given importance to the reader's feelings. After all, writing is incomplete without the end-reader.

*Pencil* Punctuation/Spelling:
1. "Templet" should be "Template"
2. "I am Cath and I just read {item:********} and now I am going to be review it." could be re-phrased something like;
"I am Cath and here is my review after reading {item:********}."
3. "Thes are only my opinion and suggestions and, that is all they are. Thank you for letting me enjoy your writing."
could be;
These are only my views. Thank you for letting me enjoy your writing!


*Pencil* Comments/Suggestions:
1. You could give more precise headings.
2. You could use some colors, different fonts and emoticons to make the review tool better.


Thank you for sharing your writing with me, and good luck in the contest ~ *Bigsmile*


I expect to pass through life but once. If therefore, there be any kindness I can show, or any good thing I can do to any fellow being, let me do it now, and not defer or neglect it, as I shall not pass this way again. ~William Penn



Puja

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Review of Simple Pleasures  
Review by Puja
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Obleo ! After reading "Simple Pleasures, I offer you these comments:

*Flower1**Leaf1*First Impression/My Favorite:*Heart*
The title is apt and inviting. The poem is about simples pleasures. The words flow well and paint a picture in mind. Thanks for sharing.

*Leaf1**Flower1*Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar/Suggestions:*Wink*
There are no suggestions. Your poem is lovely!


These are just my views, so please make changes only if necessary.
Even without the changes your work is good.

*Smile*
Thankyou,

Puja.

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Review of Love Lost  
Review by Puja
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi *Moni ! After reading "Love Lost, I offer you these comments:

*Flower1**Leaf1*First Impression/My Favorite:*Heart*
The title is apt. The poem is about internet love. Your words are very descriptive and emotional. Thanks for sharing.

*Leaf1**Flower1*Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar/Suggestions:*Wink*
There are no suggestions. I agree that there are some emotional gestures that are missing in internet-love.

These are just my views, so please make changes only if necessary.
Even without the changes your work is good.

*Smile*
Thankyou,

Puja.

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Review of Balance  
Review by Puja
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi a Sunflower in Texas ! After reading "Balance, I offer you these comments:

*Flower1**Leaf1*First Impression/My Favorite:*Heart*
The title is apt for the poem. The poem is about "Balance". A very short poem that defines and describes balance. Thanks for sharing.

*Leaf1**Flower1*Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar/Suggestions:*Wink*
There are no suggestions. Your words are very true.


These are just my views, so please make changes only if necessary.
Even without the changes your work is good.

*Smile*
Thankyou,

Puja.

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Review of Time  
Review by Puja
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi ~LadyBee~ ! After reading "Time, I offer you these comments:

*Flower1**Leaf1*First Impression/My Favorite:*Heart*
The title is apt. The poem is about "Time". Your words define and describe time. Thanks for sharing.

*Leaf1**Flower1*Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar/Suggestions:*Wink*
There are no suggetsions. Your poem is beautiful.


These are just my views, so please make changes only if necessary.
Even without the changes your work is good.

*Smile*
Thankyou,

Puja.

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Review of Poetsvision  
Review by Puja
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi fyn ! After reading "Poetsvision, I offer you these comments:

*Flower1**Leaf1*First Impression/My Favorite:*Heart*
The title is apt. The poem is about a poet's writing and muse. I like the flowing words that describe a poet's mind. Thanks for sharing.

*Leaf1**Flower1*Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar/Suggestions:*Wink*
My favorite lines are;
"A poet's ears
hear not just the spoken word
but unsung song
and
silent pain."

Very true!!! There are no suggestions. Lovely words.

These are just my views, so please make changes only if necessary.
Even without the changes your work is good.

*Smile*
Thankyou,

Puja.

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Review of Force of Nature  
Review by Puja
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Davy Kraken ! After reading "Force of Nature, I offer you these comments:

*Flower1**Leaf1*First Impression/My Favorite:*Heart*
The title is apt for the heart breaking poem. The poem is about Nature's anger/calamities. With very few words you capture the destruction and pain. Thanks for sharing.

*Leaf1**Flower1*Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar/Suggestions:*Wink*
There are no suggestions. Your words are very descriptive.


These are just my views, so please make changes only if necessary.
Even without the changes your work is good.

*Smile*
Thankyou,

Puja.

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Review of A Forever Friend  
Review by Puja
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi COUNTRYMOM-JUST REMEMBER ME ! After reading "A Forever Friend, I offer you these comments:

*Flower1**Leaf1*First Impression/My Favorite:*Heart*
The title is interesting and inviting. The poem is written for the prompt, "A Forever Friend". I like your words that touch the reader's heart.

*Leaf1**Flower1*Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar/Suggestions:*Wink*
There are no suggestions. I enjoyed reading your poem.Thanks for sharing.


These are just my views, so please make changes only if necessary.
Even without the changes your work is good.

*Smile*
Thankyou,

Puja.

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Review by Puja
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Grin 'n Bear It! ! After reading "The Writer's Muse at Her Best, I offer you these comments:

*Star*A proud member of Simply Positive, Helping Hearts, Angel Army, Talent Pond, Team India and Infinity Group.
*Star*

*Flower1**Leaf1*First Impression/My Favorite:*Heart*
The title is apt and the In & Out is about the works penned by writers that inspire, entertain, and/or resonate with readers. Very good idea for In & Out. Thanks for sharing.

*Leaf1**Flower1*Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar/Suggestions:*Wink*
There is one suggestion;
You could organize the explanations/descriptions in an attractive way. Otherwise, you did a good job!

These are just my views, so please make changes only if necessary.
Even without the changes your work is good.

*Smile*
Thankyou,
Puja.


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