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Online journal capturing the moment and the memory of moments. A meadow meditation.
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L'aura del campo


'é a lua, é a lua, na quintana dos mortos'
♣ Federico García Lorca ♣


Higgins Street Bridge, April 25th  2009, Missoula, Montana


L'aura del campo. A breeze in the meadow. So it began the last day of Spring, 2005; on the 16th day of the month of Light of the year 162. This is a supplement to my daily journal written to a friend, my muse; notes I do not share. Here I will share what the breeze has whispered to me.

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IN MEMORIUM

VerySara

passed away November 12, 2005

Please visit her port to read her poems and her writings.
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Knees of the trees, a fountain, a rainbow, Muscogee, OK in 2004.
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 Kåre *Leaf5* Enga
~ until everything was rainbow, rainbow, rainbow! And I let the fish go.
~ Elizabeth Bishop,
The Fish
September 25, 2020 at 7:46pm
September 25, 2020 at 7:46pm
#994206
May your memory be a blessing

Soft breezes wend through headstones and weeping willows —
as deceased saints croon susurrous songs of welcome.

© Kåre Enga [177.232] (24.september.2020)

24 syllables: a 12/12 couplet with alliteration. Won. *Ribbonw*

For: "Invalid Item susurrous: (adjective) characterized by soft sounds. (3 syllables, stress on second syllable)
Notes:
1st 'vomit':
The soft breeze wends its way through the headstones. 10 The willows whisper. 15 The Dead add their opinions 22 to the susurrous nip 28 behind your ears 32
2nd 'clean-up':
A Soft breezes wend through headstones as willows whisper. 12
B The Dead add thoughts to susurrous nips behind your ears. 13 = 25
3rd 'rethinking, adjusting and editing':
B The Dead tuck their susurrous thoughts behind your ears. 12
4th 'reedit'and 'does this make any sense', 'is it at all poetic', 'can I do better'.
The Deceased slip susurrous visions within your mind. 13
The Deceased croon susurrous songs to welcome you. 12
as Deceased croon susurrous songs of welcome. 11

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