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This story is about a teenage boy who must follow commands only if they say please
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Chapter #2

Out for a week

    by: Chrissy
After a week you slowly start to open your eyes to find both your mother and the doctor standing over what seems to be you in hospital.

"What happened ?" You muttered, "you we're hit by a speeding car, how do you feel" replied the doctor.

"Fine i think, I just got a bit of a headache" you say.

"No problem we're give you some tablets for that, you know your lucky you listen to your mum and wore a helmet while cycling or you could of been killed." Replied the doctor

"I know, what's wrong with me then? when can I leave?” you reply

"We'll you have a bit of brain damage but luckily we managed to clear that up with our new drug, now you need to please listen to what you're mother tells you and get some rest" replies the doctor.

Slowly you drift off to sleep with the words 'listen to your mums please' slowly repeating into your subconscious.

As the words set in when you wake up you obey ______ when they say please.

You have the following choices:

1. Your Mother

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2. The Doctor

3. Other

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