This is wonderful! A true love felt from the deepest crevices of the heart reaches out to the reader. You've expressed this feeling with great detail and knowledge. The confidence in your love brings you to the truth. This poem is well written and flows smoothly.
A smooth poem with deep meanings, the writer gives the reader the ability to interpret this however they choose. It might be a short poem, but the reader must look deeper within to find the truth. Could be that the flower has found death within the gardner's hand, but then again, maybe it found life. A new life of giving someone a small peek of the sunshine.
Wow! This one is a great poem that speaks levels to the reader of the beauty in our world. Not just a part of nature, but humankind as well. The leaves and their ability to change colors to the windblown waves crashing. The beauty within the ability to create chaos.
The writer sends out a great message to all that read this poem. Violence to our children is not the answer, but understanding and compassion. Give them the love they deserve.
I still had a hard time with the rhythym and rhyme patter on this one, but it's a good poem. I do not understand all the different ways of writing poetry, so I express how I feel about it.
A very good poem. I did find that your rhyme style changed in stanza six, but then went back to the way you first started writing. That threw me off a bit. The rhythym was not steady, but it was easy to read if you enjoy poetry. I do. :) You've given much thought to this poem. I would suggest that you feel the poem as you write it. If it flows from you onto the screen smoothly, then it should be easy to read.
A deep and raw poem that grasps the reader with the talons of heart-wrenching sadness and despair. The writer gives the reader an intense look into a life of someone that has lived the hard road and lost hope. What appears to be a young man stuck in a life of solitude tells his story. Great job!
A beautiful and truly emotional poem that reaches out from the heart of the writer. This poem gives the feelings life with its words and tells the sad story of the life lost. I found one error within this poem. The word silence is spelled as "silance". Otherwise, a very good poem!
A deep and despairing poem, this one reaches out to show that all mothers have a moment of sadness that takes them to a darker, uglier place even when they least expect it. Although it is hard to find the sun, it eventually comes back to give us its warmth. This poem was well written with no errors.
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