I love this! What a fantastic child and an excellent teacher.
I say they both have good imaginations to make it all
work out the way they did. Carolina has a terrific attitude.
I feel she knows there's something..shes searching..
reaching deep inside and out for some recognition.
Love and memories never go away..they may fade but
she knows something is there..she doesn't want to let it go.
Sometimes it takes a little light, love and warmth to bring it to
the surface..peace
Yes..laugh at anything you want :) a thought will come to my
head and I laugh. I think at times there are angels or spirits
whispering things to me. My doggie makes me laugh..he stares
at me..probably wondering why Im laughing.
I hope you find a smile today..better yet a laugh.
I'm giving you a smile :)
I like your poem but I feel a sadness. You expressed
yourself well. Never give up the search..
feel your lips there you should find a smile waiting :)
I'm a dragon hawk queen on a hill :) the woods are my castle..
many windows..not easily seen though..have to gain sight.
If you have many knights hanging around I suggest not marrying.
I think I have gypsy in me..no curse though..I don't give em either..
not yet anyways :) I like your ride..awesome broom :)
How does one lose a true friendship. Isn't friendship a solid relationship?
Im talking a close friendship..something like a marriage but no prenuptial :)
They dont need one..a friend is someone who is there no matter what.
There's no expectations..just hanging tight because they are meant to
be.
I have actually done this before..going through spaces and finding something
I had tucked away..mine are flowers between pages of thought.
I like you paper..its a sweet piece. I give to you a smile :)
You piece is now going back into cyber world :) joining the rest of the fold :)
This is beautiful. I totally believe what you say.
I love the end so much where you say
"She come and fed me herself," Your mother
fed you love, shes sounds wonderful..so caring.
She showed you another way to communicate...through
the spirit. I love that. You know that you will always
be connected no matter where you are..
Im thinking all this happened with a season. I say this because
we normally have 3 full moons in a season with the occasional
4th moon..but then the 3rd would be the blue moon. So if he crashed
into the second moon hes flown halfway into a season. :) Anyways..
there is no such thing as time..so I guess one can say the moon
is always here..everyday in full view :) Do I make sense :)
AND Ive read where earth at one time had two moons..SO
maybe this guy went back into the past looking for the second
moon..I guess he found it. :) This is where you story landed me :)
I found it interesting.
Getting hurt by someone leaves trust wounded. The best thing
is to learn from it all and keep faith in self. You walk on knowing you
did your best. On this path you will find your happiness..use your
inner strength to keep your head high..you are a special person.
We all tend to ask ourselves questions..looking for reason on the
whys..why did this happen..why do I care. It did happen..find comfort
in knowing you found truth. Now you can move on.
At least you know how some people are looking at your poems.
We each read poems differently. I look at content. All reviews are
helpful in someway. We learn
Does not voodoo get into negative spirits..evils.
Hexing..curses..dolls etc.. I'm not against anyone
or anything..but evil..I am not a fan.
You sound like you both were made for each other..
watch out for the pricks..(pins) :)
Wow..the unicorn turned turned out to be the scapegoat. What's he doing in
that group anyways..he's more of a mystical creature. Leave it to the
lion and his pride to do what he does. Of course the odd ball
gets thrown out..the fall guy. The unicorn of course liked man because
he gets the virgin..isnt that the way it goes. Yes..only a gentle maiden
has the power to tame a unicorn..that's what the Fresco reveals.:)
Someones gonna lose their head. Unicorn gone..unhappy maiden..
I see the butterfly effect here..devastation..and that's how it all begins.
War. Not so simple
Im hungry for carrots..I want the whole thing:) I'll take
it all..I need my beta carotene :)I'll take that lettuce head
too :)
A different type of poem...I enjoyed it
Did you know one can find messages in clouds.
The eye of God is there..Angels watch over us.
Clouds are part of the fish bowl earth..its moisture.
Water is sacred.
I think your poem is cute. It reads simplicity..I like that
Im thinking 100 bottle of beers. Theres your song..its not ten but we're
talking beer. There's always more than 10 :)
This is no accident..its to consistent..someones doing some pushing.
You mentioned a pebble..maybe a bunch of hoodlums are throwing
stones. This would be people living on the edge..someone's going to fall.
Interesting story.
"Steals your innocence like a secret lover in the night"
If this person is a lover..nothing is being stolen..its
given. Unless..we are talking of incest..that could be
a secret..lover..no.
The poem could be talking of someone that somebody
wants to meet..to be with..they get the courage to
approach but then back off..like lighting the flame
of desire only to burn in regrets for this individual
stepped back..didn't go through with it.
I would say this is more to do with addiction. I see it
clearly. Wanting to say no but the craving is eating at you.
You say you are weak and vulnerable..only if you think you are.
Try not putting yourself in that position. Stay away from the places,
the people, the things that draw you in. I agree..it can take one's
innocence... and common sense.
I was thinking for a moment Embry had your body in the attic...whew!
I felt that shot of surprise. Then I read on and find you are a bulletproof
vest. I'm thinking you could still be a person because you saved Embry's
life so much that you are his bulletproof cover..always there taking a bullet.
I guess if you want to be a hit..that's one way :)
I agree with you :) Its a time I can bring out my broom like a Jaguar that's been
in the garage all winter. A time to fly :) I can be square in my circle :)The scary
thing about Halloween is how can one know when it isn't made up. I mean..
someone could knock someone's teeth out and who would know..right? OR
a person could be dead on their porch and who's gonna question it.. OR hanging from
the ceiling..the party goes on..
What a beautiful story. I found delight it this. I could be the emotions
you expressed. I watched the horses with you..I admired all the beauty
A sensation piece! I love it.
I would get the hell out of there :) Is this anywhere
near Hell's kitchen :) Actually this place sounds
like a gentleman's club...well..man's club..
Maybe Sodom and Gomorrah too.
I love candles. I love this piece. It's so caring..so giving.
Giving of your heart soul and mind. You are a nice
person. I hear if you burn and orange candle for 10
days it will help changes come along .If changes are
needed. I need to get a bigger candle. My little orange
candle wont change much..but it smells real nice..
I do know that every little bit helps..so Im hoping :)
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