Greetings Zeke. I enjoyed reading your humorous poetic-piece, well done. You expressed what you saw very well, and I can envisage your wanderings. You told a story in verse. Blessings to you.
Greetings Zeke. A well-written poetic-piece that I enjoyed reading, Well done. A nice meter with good rhymes. Trees are awesome, and I'm sorry this one passed. But it still survives in appearance! Blessings to you. Thanks for sharing and keep writing, you are a good poet. Love love, Andrew.
Greetings Zeke. I enjoyed reading your poetic-piece, well done. A well written poem with nice structure. It can be hard to help when the trouble is inside, but prevail with prayer and I'm sure God will lend a care! Blessings to you. Love love, Andrew.
Greetings. I enjoyed reading your poetic-piece expressing who you are. We can be a multitude of characteristics with our emotions and feelings. You expressed yourself very creatively. The piece flowed with an acceptable meter. Well done. Blessings to you.
Greetings Anthony. I enjoyed reading your poetic-piece. Well done. You expressed yourself very creatively. A good meter with nice rhymes along the way to please. We all regrettably age, a sad fact of reality. Your mother gave you some sound advice. It's good to be humble, and to not grumble too much. We all suffer on occasion, resorting into some praying. Life is a gift. Blessings to you.
Greetings Anthony. A heart-felt piece denoting our soldiers fighting battles so others can experience peace. Soldiers have it hard these days, as they are under such scrutiny it can jeopardize their safety. I used to be a Sargent in the Marine Cadets, and enjoyed my time there. You expressed some of their grief in many aspects very creatively. Well done. I'll pop back again to read some more of your pieces. Blessings to you. Thanks for sharing and keep writing. You are a good poet and I'm glad I've found you.
Greetings Anthony. A concise poetic-piece that I enjoyed reading. Glad you have a pet to keep you company - I have a Jack Russell called 'Sadie'. What breed of dog do you have? You expressed yourself very creatively within a few lines. Well done. Blessings to you.
Greetings Anthony. Another poetic-piece that I enjoyed reading. I'm like you, searching for a likeable Lady to be my loving partner. You sound like you're a loving person, and express this within your pieces. Love is great isn't it? I hope you find her sooner rather than later. I liked your perspective take with this piece - well done. I enjoyed the rhymes along the way. A well written piece. Blessings to you.
Greetings Anthony. I enjoyed reading this poetic-piece expressing your fondness for a Lady. Some females are 'Angels', and can make your life heavenly! Sorry she doesn't seem to be reciprocal - I'm going through a similar but different situation. Sorry for any suffering you may have experienced. I'm glad she has a good heart, a nice start to a possible romance if she takes the chance? I hope everything works out for you. Some Ladies can be a muse for verse and rhyme, and this Lady is certainly your muse. A well written piece that flowed and had good rhymes along the way to please. Blessings to you.
Greetings Anthony. Another poetic-piece that I enjoyed reading expressing your fondness for a Lady. You expressed your desire very creatively. Sorry she got away not to stray your way to brighten up your day. You are a good poet. The piece flowed and I liked the rhymes along the way. You described the Lady very passionately. Blessings to you.
Greetings. I enjoyed reading your poetic-piece expressing a desire for a loved one. You expressed yourself very lovingly. The meter could be addressed. I enjoyed the rhymes along the way. Overall well done. Blessings to you.
Thank you. Love love, Andrew. Bye.
I'll be back to read more. I'm going to add you to my favourites.
Greetings. I enjoyed reading your poetic-piece. I think when your expressed 'all' in line six you should have expressed 'my' or 'our'. Just my opinion. Nevertheless, well done for effort. The piece flowed and had a nice expression. Blessings to you.
Greetings. I enjoyed reading your poetic-piece denoting a lusting over an actor. You expressed your desire very creatively. The meter could be addressed (the length of the lines being similar). I enjoyed the rhymes. Overall well done. Blessings to you.
Greetings. I enjoyed reading your poetic-piece expressing a love for a partner. Well done. An acceptable meter with good rhymes along the way to please. Blessings to you.
Greetings. I enjoyed reading your poetic-piece. Well done. Spring and Summer can't come too soon. You expressed the warmer climate very creatively. Blessings to you. Love love, Andrew. Bye.
Greetings. I enjoyed reading your poetic-piece expressing 'perception'. You expressed yourself very creatively. Sometimes we can be blind to the usual everyday experiences. I try to be as observant as possible. Well done. Blessings to you. Keep writing and thanks for sharing.
Greetings. I enjoyed reading your poetic-piece expressing God and our Lord's LOVE for all of us, if we call upon him to give it, and receive it with faith and trust and so much more. A nice flow and acceptable meter. I would have liked the odd rhyme along the way, but that's just my preference. God bless you and your creativity expressing Him.
Greetings. I enjoyed reading your heart-felt poem. Well done. I think lots of us can struggle with our identity at times, and can drift from a loving partner. A good meter with nice rhymes along the way to please. Blessings to you. Keep writing and thanks for sharing.
Greetings. I enjoyed reading your poetic-piece denoting a love for your partner, and their love back. God does indeed have a plan for all of us. You expressed yourself very creatively. Well done. Blessings to you.
Greetings. I enjoyed reading your poetic-piece denoting your time on this wonderful creative writing website. Glad you enjoy writing your poems. I think most of us start off writing poems as if they have little worth! Glad you've improved over the years - as we do with experience. An acceptable meter with good rhymes. Well done. Blessings to you.
Greetings. I enjoyed reading your poetic-piece denoting comparing a boy to the constellations. The stars are beautiful and vast, a nice comparison. The meter could be addressed. I enjoyed the rhyme 'stars' with 'years'. Well done. Blessings to you.
Greetings. I enjoyed reading your poetic-piece denoting your fondness for the ocean you visit. I take walks past a river and canal, so know how you can appreciate the water and it alluring attributes. A pleasing piece with pleasant rhymes. Well done. Blessings to you.
Greetings. I enjoyed reading your heart-felt poetic-piece denoting your love for your children. Sometimes some of us wish time to stand still, for to enjoy your children for much longer - but sadly they grow up into adults. It's a journey to both share with loving care. Blessings to you. Enjoy being a mother.
Thank you. Love love, Andrew. Bye.
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