Greetings. I enjoyed reading your poetic-piece. Well done. You expressed your partner very creatively. A good meter throughout with pleasing rhymes along the way. Blessings to you.
Greetings. I enjoyed reading your poetic-piece. Glad you have your soul-mate. You expressed your desire and lust over your partner very creatively, with some nice expression. Well done. Blessings to you.
Greetings. A poignant poetic-piece denoting suffering. As I've suffered myself with having bipolar I can personally relate to your suffering. Glad you have Jesus in your life, He can be a Light in the darkness, alleviating some stress. The meter could be addressed. I like the rhymes along the way. Blessings to you.
Greetings. I enjoyed reading your unconventional Haikus. Well done. I think plenty of us suffer writer's block on occasion. 'Death on display' is very poignant. Not all display a hint at a season! Blessings to you.
Greetings. I enjoyed reading this heat-felt piece on losing a loved one, and their essence still in existence inside ones-self. Love can be heart-breaking when a separation occurs. I liked the metaphors and rhymes. A well written piece with an acceptable meter. Well done. Blessings to you.
Greetings. I enjoyed reading your poetic-piece denoting Gods love for us. You expressed your faith very creatively. Well done. A good meter throughout with nice rhymes along the way to please the reader. Blessings to you.
Greetings. I enjoyed reading your poetic-piece. We can all define 'normal' quite differently, which you creatively expressed. A good meter with pleasing rhymes. Well done. Blessings to you.
Greetings. I enjoyed reading your poetic-piece. The sound of silence can be deafening, strong words expressing the thought process! We can all think to the brink, causing a stink. I have my pet dog, Sadie, to share my company, so I'm often thinking about her in my times of silence. Well done. Blessings to you.
Greetings. I enjoyed reading your poetic-piece. You did well considering the restrictions. I enjoyed the rhymes. The meter was acceptable. Blessings to you.
Greetings. A heart-felt poetic-piece. A concise poem denoting your friendship. I true friend is a blessing, they're not many of them! Beautiful, not beautiful! Blessings to you.
Greetings. A poignant poetic-piece denoting the state of you hair. Sorry you dad passed away. A well written piece. I liked the odd rhyme along the way. A nice meter. Glad you got your hair done eventually. It's not seeing loved ones deteriorating. Blessings to you.
Greetings. A heart-felt piece that I enjoyed reading. You expressed waiting for a date very well. I like Ladies to wear dresses! The meter could be addressed and I would have liked the odd rhyme along the way, but that's just my preference. Blessings to you. Well done.
Greetings. I enjoyed reading your poignant, poetic-piece. Sorry you have experienced the darker side of being disabled! My mother is disabled, and 'it is' terrible when persons who aren't disabled take advantage of your advantages! The meter could be addressed, and I would have liked the odd rhyme along the way, but that's just my preference. Blessings to you.
Greetings. A poignant poetic-piece denoting an affair. It's sad when people cheat on their partners. I'm sorry for any suffering you may have experienced with being a temptress mistress! The meter was acceptable, and the piece flowed. I would have liked the odd rhyme along the way, but that's just my preference! Blessings to you.
Greetings. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poetic-piece depicting fairies. You expressed yourself very creatively within two quatrains. The meter was acceptable and the rhymes were good and pleasing. The piece flowed and had some good imagery. Well done. Blessings to you.
Greetings. A heart-felt poetic-piece depicting your grandpa. He sounded like a prominent member of the community - hard working. He had a good innings living until his 90s. Blessings to you. Sorry for your loss.
Greetings. An interesting poetic-piece. Are willows everlasting? The species hopefully will be! I enjoyed reading. The piece flowed. The structure could be addressed. Well done. Blessings to you.
Greetings. I enjoyed reading your poetic-piece. You did well considering the restrictions. You expressed yourself very creatively. Good imagery within the piece. Well done. Blessings to you.
Greetings again. I enjoyed reading your poetic-piece on moving home. You expressed it very creatively in verse. It is a hardship that is tedious, but nevertheless, you do your best to want to rest after you are blessed with it being packed and stacked! The meter was acceptable, and I enjoyed the good rhymes. Well done. Blessings to you.
Thank you. Love love, Andrew. Bye.
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