Greetings. I enjoyed reading your poetic-piece. Well structured with some consistent meter. Some good rhymes to appease and please the reader. You expressed yourself with creativity well. We all stray at times, but God's love is always about forgiveness. Blessings to you. Thank you for sharing and keep writing.
Greetings. I enjoyed reading your poetic-piece. Well done. You told a story in verse well. Rage can eat you inside, so why hide when you should abide by expressing the outgoing tide! The structure and meter were acceptable, and the piece had good rhymes. Blessings to you.
Greetings. I enjoyed reading your poetic-piece. Well done. Well structured with good rhymes. A poignant piece on our neglect of the earth we live in. Blessings to you.
Greetings. A poignant poetic-piece. Very dark. You expressed yourself very well. Very creative. The structure is adequate. I liked the rhymes in the piece. Well done. Blessings to you.
Greetings. I enjoyed reading your concise, poetic-piece. Well done. You expressed your love for your partner very passionately with creativity. Blessings to you.
Greetings. A humorous limerick that made me smile - well done. You told a story in verse well. Thank you for sharing and keep writing. Blessings to you. Love love, Andrew. Bye.
Greetings. I enjoyed reading your poetic-piece. Well done. Well written with good rhymes. You expressed 'lost souls' in a creative way. I like rambling. Blessings to you and good luck.
Greetings. I enjoyed reading your poetic-piece. Well done. Very expressive of your emotions. A well written poignant piece. I sometimes struggle with my emotions with having bipolar! Blessings to you.
The meter is a bit sporadic, which can seem unappealing. I would have liked the odd rhyme along the way, more so than what you wrote, but that's just my preference!
Greetings. I enjoyed reading your poetic-piece. Well done. A poem denoting the absence of a ruler God. You expressed yourself well. Very creative and well written.
The first two verses have an almost consistent meter, which is appealing. I would have liked the odd rhyme along the way, but that's just my preference. The repeated words work well in this piece.
Greetings. A concise piece. I hope it doesn't relate to you, and if it does I'm sorry for any suffering you may have experienced! Blessings to you. Keep writing.
Greetings. A dark, poignant poetic-piece. Sorry for your suffering. I used to suffer from depression with having bipolar, but I've been well for a long spell now with the right medication.
The meter isn't consistent, but this didn't affect the flow of the piece. Well written. Well done. Blessings to you.
Greetings. I enjoyed reading your poetic-piece. Well done. You described, and expressed yourself very well.
The meter is a bit sporadic, which can be unappealing! I would have liked the odd rhyme along the way, but that's just my preference! I appreciate it's a free-verse poem.
Greetings. I enjoyed reading your poetic-piece. Well done. I like the line 'A vapour lost in the mist' in the first quatrain. 'Will I vanish into the void' is a good line also. A poem denoting finding oneself! I liked the turn at the end 'Is the dreamer still asleep'. Some more work on the metre would be more appealing! A nice poem with good rhymes. Good luck. Blessings to you.
Greetings. I enjoyed reading your poetic-piece. All except one word was expressed in the first verse, so well done for that. Life can be a struggle at the best of times, especially for the poor within the world. You expressed yourself well, very creative. Blessings to you.
Greetings. I enjoyed reading your poetic-piece. Well done. The future can be foretold in so many obvious ways, with tears and fears, and also with happiness and gladness. We can create our own destiny in the way we live. I liked and enjoyed the rhymes within the piece. Blessings to you.
Greetings. A heart-felt, poignant poetic-piece. Sorry for any suffering you may have experienced! Glad you lived to tell the tale. You expressed yourself well within this creative piece. Well done. I hope to never experience a collision within a vehicle! Blessings to you.
Greetings. I enjoyed reading your heart-felt poetic-piece. Beauty can be judged for how you are inside, so don't hide, reside in confidence and perseverance to your existence! I think we all judge everyone, as for instance creating a first impression, we can't escape it, it's just our thought process - we think, and sometimes to the brink, which can cause a stink with others! Blessings to you.
The meter is inconsistent throughout! I would have liked the odd rhyme, to appease and please along the way - but that's just my preference! Blessings to you.
Greetings. I enjoyed reading your quote. Indigenous people should not lose touch with their identity in this life. We all have variants and differences in how we live and survive, that is nice as such! Blessings to you.
Greetings. I've just reviewed one of your poetic-pieces. I enjoyed reading this piece, well done. Lot's of us have a wondering nature within us, exampled in holidaying! I used to travel a lot in a three-birth caravan.
A pleasant piece about roaming. I liked the first verse the best. The stars are amazing aren't they? The meter was consistent throughout with the occasional rhyme along the way to please the reader. Blessings to you.
Greetings. I enjoyed reading your poetic-piece. Well done. We've had a lot of rain here in the UK. Sorry for any suffering you've experienced. It's not nice being alone, as I've personally experienced in the past! We all create our own 'kingdoms', most are our humble abodes!
A concise piece denoting being lonely. There is a consistent meter within the piece, which is appeasing and pleasing. Some good rhymes, which aren't consistent! Blessings to you.
Greetings. I've just reviewed your other poem you posted. I enjoyed reading this poetic-piece, well done. A heart-felt poem on expectancy, and with the hopes and dreams of upcoming mothers for their offspring! You expressed yourself very well.
The meter was almost consistent throughout, which was pleasing. The piece flowed with some good rhymes.
Good luck to you and your future with your expected child. Blessings to you.
Greetings. I like the infant name 'Mushy Pea'. I enjoyed reading your poetic-piece. Congratulations on your upcoming, new member of your family! It must be a joy indeed to feel a life growing inside of you! I've got plenty of respect for a mother going through childbirth.
I would have enjoyed a few rhymes along the way, but that just what I like, and my opinion. The meter could be addressed so as to appease and please more. Sorry to sound negative. Blessings to you.
Greetings. I enjoyed reading your poetic-piece. You did well considering it's conformities. A New Year is a time to cheer for new life along the way, soon to come with Mother Nature's wisdom, as life needs to rest from being blessed or stressed. Spring is indeed a time of birth for vegetation and life. I long for Spring again, which is a pleasant season before summer. I love my ex for being a great mother to my two children!
A well written piece with a consistent meter throughout. Blessings to you.
Greetings. I like poems about Mother Nature, so enjoyed reading this poetic-piece. Winter is indeed bleak when creatures seek for something to eat! I liked your analogy of winter and its feasting on blanketing with snowing! Some of the metre could be addressed so as to appease and please more! Sorry to be negative. Blessings to you.
Greetings. I enjoyed reading your poetic-piece and like what you've done with its structure! The stars are always there if you look and stare beyond the cloud that's being a shroud! A poignant piece expressing grief, with the belief that to take away like a thief can lead to you laying a wreath of a love lost! Blessings to you.
Thank you. Love love, Andrew. Bye.
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