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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello and Good evening!

I am not a professional reviewer but I can offer feedback on what I feel needs correcting and how your poem made me feel.

Your poem was very descriptive. It was relatable to my experiences in life. The feeling of not being accepted by others because someone is different is terrible. I'm happy that you've come out of your shell. I am proud of the fact that you were able to share this with someone else.

Your poem was interesting to read. I encourage you to keep writing. Perhaps one day you can put your writings into a book.

I didn't see any spelling errors in your poem.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of Echoes  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and Good Evening!

I am not a professional reviewer but I can offer my feedback on what may be a mistake and how your story has affected me.

This was a short poem; The words were strong: I felt as though you were talking to me. It looked like you gave a lot of thought to this poem when you wrote it.

I enjoyed reading this short but powerful poem. I encourage you to keep writing. I think that your poem was interesting enough to write more about.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of Theirs  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and Good afternoon!

I am not a professional reviewer but can offer my feedback on mistakes that I may find and how your poem affected me.

You wrote a beautiful poem. I did not find any A's in it. It was well written. I encourage you to keep writing: I'm positive that others will find it interesting too.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of The Sunglasses  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and Good afternoon!

I am not a professional reviewer but I can offer my input on how your story affected me and offer any corrections that the story may need in the best way I can.

I saw places where a semi-colon or a colon could be used but not exactly sure where to put them.

I enjoyed reading your story "The Sunglasses". It goes to show that the reason the Wild Hair Lady wore sunglasses was the fact that she had no eyes because they never developed.

It only takes a moment for someone to look down before something happens; in this case, it was because of an accident: The driver looked down at a text message from his girlfriend; It only takes a split second for something bad to happen.

I encourage you to keep writing. I look forward to what happens next. Was the Wild Hair Lady dead or did she survive?


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello and Good evening!

I am not a professional reviewer, but I can give you my input on how the story affected me and point out any corrections that need to be made.

I was touched by the romance between Oliver and Isabella. Oliver was captivated by Isabella's radiant smile. Isabella was charmed by the gentle kindness in Oliver's eyes. Oliver began the conversation with her by saying "Your flowers are the most beautiful I've ever seen. Isabella blushed, her cheeks turning the same shade as the roses she tended. "Thank you," she replied, her heart fluttering. I've heard about your delicious tomatoes. Would you like to trade some for a bouquet of my flowers?

And so, a simple barter sparked a connection between them. Over the weeks that followed, Oliver and Isabella's friendship blossomed. They spent hours talking by the river, sharing stories of their lives, dreams, and aspirations.

Oliver learned about Isabella's love for art and her dream of creating a garden that would be a work of living art.

Isabella discovered Oliver's passion for cooking and his desire to open a small restaurant someday.

Their love grew like the most beautiful of flowers, slowly and steadily. Each day they found new reasons to smile in each other's company. Their hearts became entwined, just like the vines that adorned Isabell's garden.

One crisp autumn evening, as the leaves turned to shades of amber and gold, Oliver gathered the courage to ask Isabella a question that had been weighing on his heart. "Isabella," he began, his voice steady, "I've come to cherish our time together, and I can't imagine my life without you. Will you be the sun to my garden, the melody to my song, and the love of my life?

Tears of joy welled up in Isabella's eyes as she nodded, her heart overflowing with love. "Yes, Oliver, a thousand times yes".

Underneath the starlit sky, surrounded by the beauty of nature, they sealed their love with a kiss, and their journey together began. They worked side by side, nurturing both their dreams and their love, creating a life filled with the simple joys of tending to their farm and creating a garden of love that would forever bloom in their hearts.

And, so, in that quaint little town, Oliver and Isabella's love story became a testament to the enduring power of love, nurtured as tenderly as the flowers in Isabella's garden, and as timeless as the river that flowed through their lives.

I didn't see any spelling errors. You have a beautiful love story between Oliver and Isabella.

I encourage you to keep writing. You've done a great job! Keep on writing. I'm positive that others will be touched by your story as well.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and Good morning!

I am not a professional reviewer; however, I can offer some corrections if I see any to be made, and give you input on how your story made me feel.

I enjoyed your story very much; it inspired me to keep writing. I didn't see any spelling errors except for under Benefit #6, you forgot the letter r in You. Also, I noticed an ampersand in place of the word and. I don't know what the rules are regarding that, but wanted to point that out.

I want to encourage you to keep writing; I feel that other writers could get inspired more to write after reading your story. You have done an excellent job! Keep it up!

Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good morning!

I am not a professional reviewer; however, I can offer you input on any mistakes I might see, and how I felt when I read it. I am happy that I chose your writing entitled "Blank Pages of the Past". I did not see any spelling errors. I enjoyed reading your story; it gave me some food for thought. Re-writing history would be great for one reason that I'm thinking of; changing the worst people of the past into good ones for the future would end up with a happier ending.

I encourage you to keep writing; you have the potential to be a good writer. Keep up the excellent work.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of MISTAKE  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello! Good evening!

I am not a professional reviewer, but I can offer you feedback on how I felt after reading your story on "Mistake".

It's hard being a teenager. Even though I am a senior now, I still remember my struggles as a teenager. Your story was well written. You used excellent detail in describing what you may have been going through. I want you to know that there's always hope. When feeling down, look up to God and Jesus Christ, our Lord and Savior. He always listens to us and never judges us when we ask for help in any situation. Remember to ask him for forgiveness. It's amazing how quickly someone can be lifted out of despair into a happier state of mind.

I felt sad reading your story because I've been there and I'm happy that you dared to reach out through your writing. I encourage you to keep writing. This helps to get over the pain and to help others through their pain.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, AmyJo!

I found all of the words that you put out for us to find. I like to do word searches; it keeps my mind active.

This word game was fun. I want to encourage you to do more. I am glad that you are part of our team.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I got five correct on this history quiz. My mind went blank on the others. It was fun to take this quiz.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, my name is Anna Marie Carlson, and I will review your story, "The Rise of Robots: Shaping Our Future". Although I'm not a professional reviewer, I can offer you feedback on places I see that need improvement and how your story made me feel.

I enjoyed reading your story. Robots will be entering our world to make things better for us. This sounds exciting and a bit scary at the same time. Our lives will be less dangerous when we have robots that can do everything we can, without putting ourselves in harm's way. They can do operations on us without getting tired and be more accurate in the process. You mentioned that the recovery time will be much quicker when robots perform surgeries. They can be our companions when we are lonely. Just being there to talk to you will remedy this situation. I have already used AI with some questions I had about different subjects. They give encouragement where it's needed.

I encourage you to continue with your writing. I found it to be interesting. You express yourself well. Robots give us hope for the future. Soon they will be in cars for safer driving.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Good evening Etelan!

I am not a professional reviewer, yet, I can give you feedback to let you know what I saw and how your story, "2 Slavers and Worse".

You have a nice way of showing how Oribio felt amongst 2 men, 6 women, and 60 children. The goblins weren't nice to them. Oribio's skin was covered in grime, sweat, and scratches, like his sad companions. The adults were restrained by fetters of iron, and the kids by exhaustion and the menacing sight of the Wargs.

It didn't sound like there was any way out for the ones being treated by the Wargs. At the end of the story, it sounded like they were being surrounded by even more goblins.

Even though I'm not much of a fan of scary stories, I felt that you did a tremendous job of explaining what Oribio went through. I would encourage you to keep writing; the more you write, the better you get.

I hope this was helpful to you. Have a nice day today and more days to come in the future.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of the perfect me  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good morning, BINX!

I am not a professional reviewer, but I can give you feedback on what your story meant to me.

It's amazing how much your story is exactly how I feel; it's nice to know that there's someone else who feels the way I do; it sounds like we have a lot in common.

I can relate to your story when you say that perfection is forced on us sometimes to be the perfect image of who they would like us to be. What's wrong with just being ourselves? I've had a lot of people who were mad at me because they thought that I thought of myself as being perfect, which can be no further from the truth. I have never claimed that I was perfect; I have flaws just like anybody else. I don't know why they think the way they do.

Many times, I wish that they could accept me as just being me. They have high expectations of me that I cannot fulfill.

Thank You for sharing your story. This took a lot of courage for you to do that. I encourage you to continue onward with your writing. You have expressed yourself well.

Have a nice day filled with tons of smiles.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good evening, BINX!

I am not a professional reviewer, but I can give you feedback on how your story made me feel.

I can relate entirely to your poem. I remember what it was like as a teenager to be in love. The one you loved was on your mind every second of every day. When your favorite song came on you couldn't get the music out of your head. You were hoping that he/she would've noticed you, but then he/she didn't. This was something that would break a heart.

I enjoyed reading your story. For myself, I would hear the song, "Seasons in the Sun" by Terry Jax (I hope that I got the singer's name correct). This song always made me cry because the one I loved drowned. We were just friends but I hoped that he would've been my husband in the future. It pained me to know that whenever someone asked me on a date that they wouldn't show up. I felt this way a lot of times. The tears came flowing down. I thought that I had done something wrong.

Continue to write. I can feel the emotion that you have felt.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Good evening

I am doing a review of "How Photograph Speaks". I am not a professional reviewer but I will give you feedback on what I thought.

I love how you started with the quote by Ansel Adams. This quote seems to be talking directly to me. That is how I feel.

I loved reading your story. It made a lot of sense. Like you, I love to share my music with others on social media; I share my stories as well. It took a lot of courage for me to share my personal story with others since I have a mental disability. I am working on getting my work published. I am excited about this. There's a lot of work involved and am not sure when I will get it out there, but this is my goal. I believe that it can help other people.

I encourage you to continue with your writing. You have a good way with words and expressing yourself with pictures. You don't care how many likes or dislikes you get; you would rather just express yourself.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
I got 7 out of 15 correct. I did better than I thought I would. It was something new I learned about. I love to learn new things. I enjoyed taking this quiz. Keep up the good work and do more quizzes.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of Do you ever ?  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, Shams!

I took your quiz entitled, "Do You Ever?" and scored 100.00 percent. I am surprised! I had fun taking your quiz.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I got 1 correct out of 10. This goes to show that I don't know much about wine since I don't drink alcohol. I don't know much about grapes either. I still had fun taking your quiz.

Keep on doing quizzes. I believe that you're off to a good start.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi!

I forgot to include the word count with for my anagrams, however, I did number them. The word count for Abbreviation is 70 words and for Quizzicality is 34 words.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Review of Spilled Milk  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Good morning, Sara!

I am doing a review of "Spilled Milk". Although I am not a professional reviewer, I can relate to your story about when an agreement was reached to pay ten talons, only to receive five instead. After being yelled at for failing to give him what was agreed upon, he only received half the amount. When he mentioned that the agreement was to receive ten talons, he did give him the ten talons. After receiving the ten talons, the man started down the road.

It sounded like the man was going to die without getting the correct number of talons that was owed him.

I want to encourage you to keep writing. This was a valuable lesson being learned.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of Confession  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good morning to you, Elengamon!

I am not a professional reviewer. I can offer my input on how your story affected me.

I am doing a review on, "Confession". It's truly amazing that God is able to forgive us of our sins when we confess them to him. I have a friend that I have known since the fourth grade. I continue to phone her to find out how she is doing. She hardly ever answers her phone or returns my phone calls. I feel that I may have upset her in some way. I have no idea what I may have done. There are times when I feel like giving up on trying to contact her, but I don't, hoping that she will answer her phone. This is very sad. I keep praying for her. I pray that she will forgive me for whatever it was that I did. This must be tearing her apart inside.

I felt good after reading your story about how important it is to confess our sins to God, and also to the person that we have harmed by not apologizing to them.

We can lift a huge burden from our shoulders by asking God for forgiveness. When we're not able to forgive, it's like having a bitter root that continues to eat away at us. When we can't, for some reason, go to the source of the one we have hurt, we must take that before God.

I encourage you to keep writing. I am certain that others can be helped after reading this story. Thanks for sharing your story. It takes a lot of courage to do that.

Feel free to review any of my work at any time and write me a review about it. I look forward to getting reviews.
I can improve how I write by getting feedback to learn what people like about my writing. My goal is to write in a manner that is easily understood.

I'm hoping that you had a nice day today and in the future days ahead.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Jane, and good morning!

I am not a professional reviewer, but I can give you feedback on how your story made me feel.

I am doing a review of, "Diary of Aphrodite's daughter". This is a cute story about the goddess of love, daughter Lea. It's tough to live up to an image of how you should be. I also have blond hair and blue eyes. I just turned 66 years old and it's kind of hard to tell what color my hair is. Interestingly, Zeus has a son named Zachary who is the same age as her, and whom she will someday marry.

Keep writing. This story will give some girls hope for the future.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, Jacklyn, and good morning to you!

I am not a professional reviewer, but I would like you to know how much I enjoyed reading your short story entitled, "A Plate for the Poor". Accepting food with a grateful heart does wonders when you are having to get by without food. The generosity that was given to this child, simply by saying, "Eat up my child", gave this child an opportunity to have a nice healthy meal. Passing an offer like this on to others shows that there are still caring people in this world.

I encourage you to keep writing. This short story made my day brighter. I'm sure that others will enjoy your story as well.

I hope that you a having a good day now and in the future.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I am not a professional reviewer but I will give you my input on how the story made me feel.

I reviewed your story entitled, "The Cold Shower Experience". I enjoyed getting this information about cold showers and all the benefits you get through discipline. Getting through the hard part gets easier once you practice doing it. Cold showers give me chills just thinking about it. Once a plan is made up, sticking with it gets easier; it's just a matter of making up your mind to do it. I will have to give this a try, and then I won't have to think about the chilling effect, just how refreshing it will feel when I make up my mind to just do it.

I encourage you to keep writing. I'm sure that other people will enjoy reading this story.

Have a nice day today and more of them in the future.

Anna Marie Carlson
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