A great initiative and am very proud to be around to see how it goes. Your ideas are very original and I like the way you've thought about creating two groups,
one male and one female.
Congratulations and hope it goes off with a bang.
Take care and speak soon,
Will be checking out the participants.
I really enjoyed reading this short story.
It was well written and I didn't find any grammatical errors or typos. Well done.
Your words portrayed emotion and sadness and described the last moments of two people in love having to break away from their loved one.
When Robert saw his body on the hospital bed, it reminded me about some pre-death stories I read. Most of them spoke of a dark tunnel with a light at the end
with the lord beckoning to them to go home.
I found this poem illustrated in your interview with Mavis Moog.
I must say I enjoyed it very much and hearing about your traditions, studies and personal experience inspired me very much.
Perhaps also because shortly in November I will be going on a trip to India , in Rahajistan and I was
curious to receive some notions on the country, which I've never visited before.
I enjoyed reading your poem. It was well written with good rhyming and display. Your tribute to your mother was very emotional and sweet. I'm sorry about your loss even if it was quite a few years now.
Well I must say this poem is very emotional and passionate, at times very strong.
This tribute to your best friend who is also the person you're in love with sounds as if the other person is unaware of your feelings for him. Is that so?
On the whole it was written well in the free style but I came across quite a few typos.
I suggest you reread your piece and check it carefully.
Well , it started off well but unfortunately you being sick didn't help very much lol.
Well written and very descriptive.
I saw this piece in Red Riding Hood's NL.
Hi Sarah,
I saw this piece in Laurencia's NL.
It touched me deeply. This piece was full of emotion.
Distress for the loss of a mother through the eyes of
a child of only thirteen years old.
Too young to accept such a loss.
I loved this poem and I agree with you that true love is only one direction. For me at least. Others can be luckier.
Well written with good rhyming and display.
Your words portrayed emotion and disappointment in this one way passion. Does it only exist in films and
fairy tales? That's a good question.
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