Your words portray how the mother is distraught after the loss of her son. The fact that she can see him
and that he can say I love you for the last time filled her heart with joy.
Now she knows sje has her Angel watching over her always!
Hi James,
Yobear pointed this poetry out to me and told me it was a masterpiece.
I agree with her. Very touching and emotional.
Yes a mother should never have to experience the loss of a child. It's too traumatic!
I loved reading this story. It was emotional and very romantic, almost the kind you only see in films but would love to happen for real.
The way you described Mattie was so detailed that I could almost picture him.
A spoilt girl who falls in love with the servant.
It sounds like a fairytale but with skill you turned it to a real life drama.
I could feel and imagine the characters , especially the father ,daughter and Mattie .
Sad that only after the father's death brought happiness ever after!
I really enjoyed this poem.
Your words portrayed the emotions of a person who is
reliable and will always be there in good times or
bad times.
I particularly liked the stanza where you say,
''I have my umbrella ready etc''.
By the way I noticed you haven't written anything in your bio block.
You should do as this communicates a little more about you to the people reading your work.
Well done. A good try!
Well written with good rhyming and display.
Your words portrayed that dreams are the best illusions in life , to sweep away the bad times and
start again with the new.
Well done!
I found this piece in LExi's romance/love NL.
Good use of the film titles, well written with flow
and rhyming , welll displayed.
Your words portray emotion and passion.
Well done, the five senses are portrayed perfectly here. I liked reading this poem, it was full of emotion and passion.
Your words expressed the true love we all search for.
I think it's a great initiative and will encourage people to review more.
Thank you for all the work you do on the site,it's
appreciated immensely!
Take care and well done,
AuntyNelly
Well done , this poem was well written with good rhyming and display.
It expresses emotion and nostalgia for old friends
and hope for the new friends to be made in life.
You used the prompt for the competition with skill.
Well written with good rhyming a layout.
Well done, you expressed emotion and courage in this
very descriptive piece.
You portrayed sadness and despair for a forced farewell. One day they will meet again in Heaven.
Beautiful! Congratulations on winning first prize.
Very original, well written and good rhyming.
I'm sure you'll be able to send an email to Heaven
shortly! The way things are going it won't be long now.
I'm sure your dad hears you even if he doesn't receive
your email.
Take care and I hope your song has succcess.
AuntyNelly
Beautiful! Well written with emotion and good rhyming,
good display too.
I can understand that you are inspired in difficult
moments, I am the same.
Your words portray nostalgia for the presence and understanding from a person who has drifted away and
that you miss.
Very sweet. I liked this special tribute to mums.
Well written with good rhyming.
It portrays what a difficult job it is being a mum.
I guess it has alot of other pleasant feelings too.
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