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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I wanted to stop by and say hi with a review. As a mother of sons, I love this story. How cute are children, they don't even know how they teach us, as we try to teach them. I like the imagery of the story, the showing was awesome. Great work there.
I would advise some proofreading. There are some spacing issues. And you are missing commas in some places. These are easy fixes that would make this a perfect story. It will also help with the flow. As it is the story flow is great, just the edits points I advised will make it perfect too.
I can't wait till you post more, I will review them once you have.
Write On!!!!

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I wanted to stop by and say hi with a review. This is an interesting poem, the imagery is there and I can see where it is going. I like the poem over all. There is a issue with the spacing of the lines but that is an easy fix. You can edit it and make the spacing double space for an easier read.
I like the thought put into this poem and it is clear that you thought about it before you wrote or posted it. Often I have thought no one knews the real me unless they read my books, I am sure others think they do but I think you are right in this poem. The real me is in my words.
Great job and Write on!!!

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Review of The Invitation  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I wanted to stop by and say hi with a review. WOW, I love this story. Dark but profound. I could see a normal person turning serial killer in this story. Is this how it happens, maybe, maybe not. But the idea of it is there and clear. I like the indepth thought this story took and if you did not research this at all then I tip my hat for touching your dark side (and remind me never to be on your bad side lol) It takes a lot of talent to write a story like this and I can't wait till you post more for me to read. Great work here. Now a little proofreading will find the very few errors I found,(just two misspelled words) but other than that I could not find a fault with this story.
Great Work!!!!

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Review of The Train  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I like the imagery of this piece, the example it leaves open to impression. This could be taken many different ways, from our government to our beliefs, each person that reads this will come away with something else from it. This is what I call an emotional story for all people.
The only place I seen that needs proofreading is the last line: They roll to a bruised and bloody stop just in time to watch the half the passengers trying to strangle the other half as the train plunges into the chasm. one of "thes" needs to be removed or reworded. other wise this is a great read. Way to go.
Happy Anniversary. Write on!!!!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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For a short poem this one is very deep. the sense of loss is felt and seen. the flow was great and of course the showing was there. I like this poem very much, I don't think there is a person alive that another's death has not touched in some way and this is a great way to remember them. Great job.
Happy Anniversary. Write On!!

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Review of Jesus Loves Us  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I wanted to stop by and say hi with a review. I would like to say, I knew God loves me when I held my sons for the first time, then after that I found his love grew with each new soul he gave me to care for, 6 of my own, many many more through those 6. I like the theme of this story and how it relates to the world. I would advise to do some proof reading, there are a couple places that are missing words or have the wrong word, I found them mainly in the pig and chicken passage. Other then that great job. This is a deep and powerful story.
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Review of Contemplations  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I wanted to stop by and say hi with a review. I am not sure if this is one or two poems. I like them both, they are deep and meaning full. The summer rememberance is great and deep. The flow is great and show is the showing. The love lost is deep as well and flow and show is great there too, just not sure if I like them together. But they do work together, I just like them apart myself. Overall great work.
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Review of The Flowers  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I wanted to stop by and say hi with a review. This a neat poem, I love flowers and have a huge flower garden myself. I think the same as you about flowers and am glad to see in writing someone else's feelings for our friend the flower. The flow is great and so is the showing of this poem. I can't wait to read your next item.
Write on!!


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I wanted to stop by and say hi with a review. Way to go, I know myself and many others feel this way, A couple musslims I know also feel this way too. They have just talked to their children's school and told of their beliefs, inculding their fasting times and the schools have worked with them on it. I have to say this is well written and thought out. I did see where some proof reading is needed but not much, a few misspelled words is all. Overall this is a good article.
Write On!!!

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Review of Unlawful Entry  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I wanted to stop by and say hi with a review. The beginning of this article is very eyes catching and reels the reader in, I love to see articles start like that. I have to say that I find this article not only interesting, it is informative. I have to say that I did not know about these new warrants and find I am dismayed by them. I have never done anything wrong and to be faced down like that would find me more than fearful. I thank you for writing this article and other than a few misspelled words it was great. A little proof reading would fix that. Great job.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I wanted to stop by and say hi with a review. Hum an interesting read. The scene was set well, could feel the cold on this warm night. I could see the snow flakes one by one. I loved the feel of this story but was left wondering at the end. Is he a fish or is he not. At one point I thought he might be one of the polar bear people, the ones that try to swim in the freezing cold water. But at the end I think maybe he was a fish. Great job on this story.
Write On!!!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I wanted to stop by and say hi with a review. wow this article is hard hitting itself. There is a passion behind the writing and that is clear in the words. Even though this is an article, it reads like a short story. I am a fan of football and though I am not a Saint's fan, I feel for them after this article. They are not doing anything more wrong than any other team, they just got caught. This was well thought out and delievered well. Great Job.
Write On!!

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Review of dry-erase.  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I wanted to stop by and say hi with a review. This is an interesting poem. I like how you used lower case words for it all. Neat way of doing it and I did not find that is was harder to read that way. The flow was ok and the showing was clear. I enjoyed that very much. I have to admit that I had to reread a few places but I think it was mainly due to the way it was wrote, not bad, just had to reread to make sure I read it right. Over all this is a good poem.
Write On!!!

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Review of Rage and Love  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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This is an interesting story. I like the imagery in it. Thw showing is clear and I find it well written. However spacing is an issue, better spacing would make it a easier read but that is just for the eyes. I found this is a new twist on the fallen love theory. I like it, it is dark without being over done. Great job.
Happy Anniversary. Write On!!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Thank you for posting this on WDC. I enjoyed the read. The contrast beween the life one leads due to others and the one we wish to iead is one that many do not talk about. I was glad to see a story about it. The flow was great ans for the most part it was very showing, only a place or two that was a little telling, but in a short I think that happens.
Overall this is a good read.
Happy Anniversary. Write On!!

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Review of Drifting Rift  
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This is an interesting poem. I like the way you use your words to show the feelings of lost love without being overbearing in the pain. A good mix there. I like the show of the poem. The flow was good and it was an easy read, even though it is a deep poem. Great job.
Happy Anniversary, Write On!!

Have Blessed Nights and Bright Mornings
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Review of Writing is Hell  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I love this poem, you might have wrote it to get over writer's block but it is a great poem. I get writer's block and I ask the question of many: What do you do to get over writer's block? The answer is never the same but all of them are great. So in writing to get over writer's block, you wrote a great poem.
Happy Anniversary. Write On!!

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Review of Before the Winter  
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Hum interesting. Love and the seasons is an interesting thought, one that you worked in well here. I could almost see a boy telling his sweetheart that he was going off to college and that he would be back to get her when the term was over. I like this poem, the flow was good and the showing great. Great job!
Happy Anniversary. Write on!!

Have Blessed Nights and Bright Mornings
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Review of The Wall  
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This is a nice poem that shows the begining of love. I like how you put in the bricks, only to see them fall. The question of putting them back up is one that many of us ask oursevles. First falling in love is awesome and scary both.
I like the flow of this poem and the showing is there. Great job, Write on!!
Happy Anniversary

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Review of The Things Unsaid  
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This is a deep poem. I like it very much. I love how it flows and the showing is great. This makes a person feel, and I think that is great. I like what it is about as well, healing is powerful. Something that we all need to do at one point in our lives or another. Great job, Write on!
Happy Anniversary

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Review of If Not For Moms  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Rarely do I get to say that an article made me cry but this one did. Having a mother and mother in law, and being a mother myself and having a daughter that is a mother, this article is one that I will be sharing. We can not always make sure our children take the advice we give them, nor can we always be there to make sure they take the right road. We can only try and when our children come back, we can rejoice in their sucess.
Thank you for not only writing this article but for sharing it on WDC.
Happy Anniversary! Write On!

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I wanted to stop by and say hi with a review. I like this article, it is well thought out and the flow is easy to read. The information is important and interesting at the same time. It feels like you did your research for sure on this and that is great. I did find one line that I had to reread, still not sure if you meant it to read as it does, I will imput in below for you to see. Other than that I did not find anything that needed fixed. I am not great on grammar but it read well to me. Great job!

If there is a case of fraud, in which the customer is already unlikely to report, the company would typically only pay out around the 50 dollars as mentioned; a very insignificant figure for them. (the part in question is "already unlikey")
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Review of Shadows  
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I wanted to stop by and say hi with a review. I really liked this story. The discriptions are clear and I could see this thing walking in the shadows. It had me thinking, was this not a person at first, then is this a ghost, and the ending brought to light that this was a shawdow. I like how you let the read think before you let them know what it was. That is good in a great read. Overall this is a great read to me and I can't wait to read more of your work. Write on!!

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I wanted to stop by and say hi with a review. Wow this article is powerful, I could write 500 words on the different points that you stated, all vaild and true. You presented this subject will and put in all the areas of arguement, except for your views. That is a good thing for a article that is for a mag like the New York Times, but I would have liked to see your point of view in here, maybe at the end or something. However if you are going for a mag like the New York Times than this is great. I like how you cited your stuff at the bottom but you could make it a single space thing, honestly not to many people read that as indepth as they do your work. I feel you took the time to write this very well and other than the word spacing at the beginning it is presented well. Write On!!

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Hello, I wanted to stop by and say hi with a review. I am not sure if this was meant to be funny but I got a laugh out of it. I am a person that is charitable and think of ways to help those who have less than me but this made me laugh cause I could see some people that would think this is a great idea. Overall this is a good story. There are a couple places that have misspelled words but not many, just a little proof reading would work.
Question are you going to have this published? I think the world (atleast people like me here in the USA) would get a good laugh. Of course there would be those that would think this is real and be trying to find out what channel it would be on. I like how you set the scene and how you delievered the whole article. Write On!!

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