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Review of Self Motivation  
Review by Dragonfly
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like the subject matter, definitely. These are great questions and thoughts.

I read this as though it were an inner conversation with the "self". As though a thought is presented and may be challenged by the "self", is that what you were trying to achieve or relay? I see a question is asked and then responded to in the next sentence.

Example: A person having significant wisdom always gets respect from various corners of the world.
Response: You would find so many examples against that.

Example: So, if you don't uphold your appetite to study, how it would be possible for you to become an intellectual personality, and so on.
Response: Don't you want to be?

Maybe if the whole one paragraph were broken up into questions/comments and then replies, like the examples, it might read easier? Then you'd be able to expand on certain replies and probably end up with even more questions or observances thereby helping you answer the main question of: How do I feel motivated to study and to stop procasting when it comes to following study schedule?
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