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Review of Stars  
Review by Cheri Annemos
In affiliation with The Iron Bank of Braavos  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
House Florent Image for G.o.T. "Game of Thrones" 

Hi, Jamie:

Title: I was browsing through the romance genre and stopped at this entry. The title always gets the stop and the teaser got the read and review. Stars and a dreamer marry nicely in a romantic story.

I'm Cheri and I'm one of the sly foxes of House Florent.

What I liked: Your writing is exceptional. I learned something about point of view in this story. I got to see this person through one person's eyes and instantly liked that character with all the perceived quirks and weirdness. The first line has to be solid to get me to keep reading. Yours made me stop and re-read it. It was very cleverly done.

What needs work: I'm not sure this reads as an E rating. Might want to bump it up to ASR. I am not a fan of other as a genre choice. Emotional and relationship dovetail nicely with romance and get you a wider audience. All the other technicalities like grammar, punctuation and presentation were well done.

Overall Impression: Your writer's voice is quite unique. You know how to arc the story. It paced in accordance with the message that you wanted to convey. It ended strong. Overall, a very strong piece.

My favorite phrase was ?shredding the box to pieces". That alone made me like this person very much.

Thank you for letting me read your work!

Cheri

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Review of The Field Trip  
Review by Cheri Annemos
In affiliation with The Iron Bank of Braavos  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
House Florent Image for G.o.T. "Game of Thrones" 

Hi:

Title and draw: I was rolling through the Sci Fi genre and found this little gem. The real draw to get me to was the awardicon and the fact that I like just about everything that comes out of your pen.

I'm Cheri and I'm one of the sly foxes of House Florent.

What I liked: I did not know where you were going with this story and was pleasantly surprised with the little twist at the end. This is a nice polished piece. You told a complete story and it naturally arced in the right spot.

What needs work: I am not a fan of other as a genre. I seriously think this would fit in the comedy genre. Plus I think fantasy and sci fi are flip sides of the same coin, so fantasy would work as a third genre in this instance.
Grammar and punctuation were fine.

Overall Impression: Kind of sad/funny/poetic that the one thing that lasts the test of time is our slanted language skills and gestures. I think the toughest contests are the no dialogue ones and the all dialogue ones. Good job on doing a fantastic job with this entry.

The best part of this story for me is where you inserted the 24th century technology without making it obvious or awkward.

Thank you for letting me read your work!

Cheri

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Review by Cheri Annemos
In affiliation with The Iron Bank of Braavos  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
House Florent Image for G.o.T. "Game of Thrones" 

Hi, Winnie:

Title: I was browsing the Friendship genre and ran across this award winning story. I am drawn to stories with an award attached to it. I like your title and the teaser -- Just enough of an entice to get the reader into the door.

I'm Cheri and I'm one of the sly foxes of House Florent.

What I liked: In comedies the writing has to be tight or it can easily go sideways. I like downright funny animal tales. My favorite comedy stories fall within the genre and ratings you have selected.

What needs work: I see you did some edits today. You must have fixed any boo boos or oopsies. I hope you are enjoying the love from the Game of Thrones. You have a fabulous story, the award is deserved.

Overall Impression: This story had a sound story arc. The length was sufficient to tell a complete story and leave the reader wanting more. Although this story is strong enough on its own, you hinted that you had other adventures from the Jean and Winnie show, and that would make a nice collection of short stories. These two are a hoot.

My favorite lines are the one that describes Sammie the mutt. We had a dog like that. His name was Zippy, but it should have been Casanova.

Thank you for letting me read your work!

Cheri

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Review of A New Journey  
Review by Cheri Annemos
In affiliation with The Iron Bank of Braavos  
Rated: E | (4.0)
House Florent Image for G.o.T. "Game of Thrones" 

Hi, Angel:

Title: I was browsing through the freindship genre and stopped at your story. I chose to read and review because the teaser had that special draw for me.

I'm Cheri and I'm one of the sly foxes of House Florent.

What I liked: I like that this friendship survived the years of going through changes in age and divergent choices. It seems that the one constant in the quiet one was this friendship. She could so easily have been lost with nothing to show she existed. People matter, make an impact, even if it is only on one other person.

What needs work: Usually this kind of story would benefit from dialogue if for nothing else, to give the reader a little insight into who the two woman are in the story and to each other. There are lots of articles on the internet to describe the speach patterns of someone losing consciousness and blood. There are tricks like speaking to yourself or humming or reading a letter out loud, dialogue would strengthen this story.

Overall Impression: You have a very touching story here, there are just a few things that would bump it up a bit. These are just my suggestions to do with what you will. Good luck,

Thank you for letting me read your work!

Cheri

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Review by Cheri Annemos
In affiliation with The Iron Bank of Braavos  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
House Florent Image for G.o.T. "Game of Thrones" 

Hello again, and welcome to another review for the Game of Thrones! I'm Cheri and I'm one of the sly foxes of House Florent.

Title: Usually the title is the thing that draws me to a poem. In your case, it's the awardicon and I know your work.

What I liked: I like that your poem took a specific moment in time, and paid homage by painting a word picture of the lights and events of a famous October day. Your gift is that you do not overthink anything. I usually don't pay attention to technicalities, but this is one of the rare cases where the words, rhyme, and structure coalesced to this award winner. I may not always know the reasons why I like something, I just know good work when I see it.

What needs work: I did not see anything that needed work, editing or fixing. It was beautifully penned.

Overall Impression: I expected great things from you and you delivered. I can't pick out a favorite line because they all seem to work together. I am not a fan of Halloween, but this poem presented the holiday in a new and fun light.

Thank you for letting me read your work!

Cheri

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Review of Wiccan Queen  
Review by Cheri Annemos
In affiliation with The Iron Bank of Braavos  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi:

TITLE: The title is a critical as it immediately draws me in. The awardicon tells me that this poem is exceptional.

I'm Cheri and I'm one of the sly foxes of House Florent.

What I liked: The imagery and rhyme scheme were quite well done. You painted crisp pictures for my mind to explore. Putting this in poetic verse allowed a lot of latitude and freedom in how you presented your thoughts. The first line has to be a tease and evoke an emotion in order for me to read on. Your first line is way cool, or should I say quite goth.

What needs work: I read twice: Once for fun and once for polish. I did not see anything that could be or should be changed. You have a unique author's voice that remains clear no matter what genre or subject matter you choose to tackle.

Overall Impression: You controlled the tone and tempo of the piece quite well. It is not an easy topic to conquer. You did an admirable job of doing that. I have tripped through your port a lot because your work is diverse and I always find something I like.

Thank you for letting me read your work!

Cheri

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Review by Cheri Annemos
In affiliation with The Iron Bank of Braavos  
Rated: E | (4.0)
House Florent Image for G.o.T. "Game of Thrones" 

Hi:

Title: I was meandering through the military genre and happened on What Could Go Wrong. I support our military heroes, active and vets, and had to see the invasion of Normandy through your story.

I'm Cheri and I'm one of the sly foxes of House Florent.

What I liked: I like that you captured the monotony of war. By that I mean the constant preparing so that you are ready when needed and then something goes wrong to screw it all up.

What needs work: It's short and not sweet. If you wanted to expand it, there is lots of room for it. If you are satisfied with the length, it does drill home that life is short and not to waste even one second on stupid stuff. I did not see any grammar or punctuation mistakes.

Overall Impression: I was touched deeply by your work even though it is quite short. It was the length that parallels the shortness of the soldier's life and then his unanswerable question was finally answered.

It sounds funny to say that there is a favorite line in such a serious and dark piece, but I really did like that there was a constant question of What could go wrong and then ending with Something went wrong.

Thank you for letting me read your work!

Cheri

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Review by Cheri Annemos
In affiliation with The Iron Bank of Braavos  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
House Florent Image for G.o.T. "Game of Thrones" 

Hi, Rhyssa:

Title: I was meandering through the medical genre and ran up on this piece. I read your teaser and just had to continue. My sister has the bid D and I wanted to kinda sorta understand what she is going through.

I'm Cheri and I'm one of the sly foxes of House Florent.

What I liked: I liked that you did not pull any punches. This was an unapologetic rant to get it through people's head just what was happening. This is the second time this weekend that it was drilled into me that Diabetes slowly kills a person one organ at a time. I feel for you. I really get it.

What needs work: Not a thing needs to be changed or toned down. The message needs to get out and whatever forum to get it out has value.

Overall Impression: Thank you for taking on this topic and leaving all your emotions on the page. It is only through spill your guts work like this that it will get through to everyone just how serious this is. You go where most people fear to go. It is needed.

My favorite lines are basically all of them. Every time you said "I want to forget..." I got a picture of my sister trying to hold it together when she wants to scream in frustration at all of the things you outline in your poem. She has to inject into her stomach and it really is so scary for her when her blood won't clot and she has to take a change of clothes everywhere. My heart goes out to you.

Thank you for letting me read your work!

Cheri

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Review of Room at the End  
Review by Cheri Annemos
In affiliation with The Iron Bank of Braavos  
Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
House Florent Image for G.o.T. "Game of Thrones" 

Hello, again...

Title: I was tripping through the medical genre and saw your name and had to stop and check it out. I choose pieces that have titles that tease a little bit as yours do. The award gave a good hint that it would be beautiful.

I'm Cheri and I'm one of the sly foxes of House Florent.

What I liked: You are one of my favorite authors. You have never let me down. I am always blessed with extraordinary writing when I visit your port. You seem to have no difficulty in putting your ideas down in a way that extracts an emotion, in this case, deep love for someone who is caught in bygone memories, unable to stay in the present.

What needs work: I could not see anything. Everything flowed flawlessly and the images were created in seamless fluidity.

Overall Impression: I have never heard of Sestina format until I read this poetic rendering. I understand that you have to repeat six words six times and wrap it up with three more lines. You took on a challenging topic and used your gift of rhythm, cadence and author's voice to really put together a beautiful piece of artistry.

If you had made this a rated piece, I would have given it five stars. It is that good. Yet, I know and understand why you would not want this emotion to be rated.

Thank you for letting me read your work!

Cheri

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Review by Cheri Annemos
In affiliation with The Iron Bank of Braavos  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
House Florent Image for G.o.T. "Game of Thrones" 

Hi, Winnie:

Title: I was tripping through the medical genre category and came upon this piece and just had to top and see what it was all about.

I'm Cheri and I'm one of the sly foxes of House Florent.

What I liked: This story is so well done, I got such a clear picture of what these two were doing> I got snapshots in my head with each description of the characters actions. You had me right to the end. I loved the final twist, I was absolutely clueless until the final line!

What needs work: Nothing! It is perfect.

Overall Impression: I love your work. If all your work is this good, you have a new fan! I love your sense of humor and your ability to present it in measured doses to make the reader go "oh, for the love of...." when the punch line is delivered. I don't give out many five stars, but this one earned every one of them.

Thank you for letting me read your work!

Cheri

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Review of A DIET OF NEGLECT  
Review by Cheri Annemos
In affiliation with The Iron Bank of Braavos  
Rated: E | (4.0)
House Florent Image for G.o.T. "Game of Thrones" 

Hi, Dr.:

Title: As I am dancing through the medical genre, your piece caught my immediate attention. It had a definite tug to see what you did with such an interesting title.

I'm Cheri and I'm one of the sly foxes of House Florent.

What I liked: I appreciate that you had medical advice to give and had this gifted way to convey the message. It is not easy to put this type of material into poetic format, it is a good job to make everything flow and to also be complete in your thoughts and message.

What needs work: You stuck to the measure and cadence, and made the passages fit within the poetic styling you were using. I don't know how you did it, but It was great.

Overall Impression: It's a subject that affects us all. Most of the information is already known and we either choose to follow the doctor's advice or not to follow it. With a unique way of presenting the information, you have a better chance of hitting the mark with someone who needs to hear it.

Thank you for letting me read your work!

Cheri

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Review by Cheri Annemos
In affiliation with The Iron Bank of Braavos  
Rated: E | (5.0)
House Florent Image for G.o.T. "Game of Thrones" 

Hi: Simply Positive

Title: Simply Positive Review Forum

I'm Cheri and I'm one of the sly foxes of House Florent.

What I liked: This group does a lot of crediting on WDC. I was surprised to see how many names are connected with Simply Positive. I didn't realize Sheri Gibson had passed away. I didn't realize our Lady Lyn is a leader in Simply Positive. She is a very busy lady. I noticed two other leaders name but I'm tired and can't think of them.

The expectations are clearly laid out and easy to follow. Forty reviews a month seems like a lot but everyone that does the reviewing is ready for the games.he posting schedule I noticed is in the middle of the week unlike other groups that run Sunday to Saturday.

What needs work: I didn't see anything obtrusive. The colors are not overwhelming. I think the rainbows are cute.

Overall Impression: Good organization and good response rates from the reviewers tells me that the group works very well in WDC. Is this the oldest reviewing group?

Thank you for letting me read your work! It's good to see positive feedback encouraged for all writers regardless of their skill level.

Cheri

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Review of Game of Thrones  
Review by Cheri Annemos
In affiliation with The Iron Bank of Braavos  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
House Florent Image for G.o.T. "Game of Thrones" 

Hi: Gaby ~ Quiet contemplation

Title: Game of Thrones

I'm Cheri and I'm one of the sly foxes of House Florent doing the tag challenge with CJ Reddick

What I liked: This forum is loaded with so much information it took me several reads to get all the stuff and I'm not sure that I have yet. It seems like there were more teams last year but the activities have increased. Initially reading everything I admit was intimidating but my team has been very helpful and I'm feeling more comfortable/

What needs work: I can't think of a thing that needs changing, you've done an excellent job of compiling all the information in an organized fashion.

Overall Impression: There are lots of opportunities for different people to work together to win the ultimate prize of victory. I like the foot note linking so the page is less cluttered because it makes it easier for a reader to find the information.

I don't know how you and Charlie keep up with all the posts I was surprised how quickly the page changes with all the questions and entries and cheers.

Thank you for letting me read your work!

Cheri

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Review by Cheri Annemos
In affiliation with The Iron Bank of Braavos  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi: CJ Reddick and Lyn's a Witchy Woman

Title: Blogging Circle of Friends Prompt Forum

I'm Cheri and I'm one of the sly foxes of House Florent.

What I liked: The appearance of the forum is very attractive and laid out in an organized manner so a newcomer has all the necessary information in one location without having to scroll through numerous forums or the group page to understand what happens.

What needs work: I didn't see anything that I felt needed correction. The font size is ideal and easy to read. I was surprised to see eighty-one bloggers in your group> Have you ever had them all blog at once. I checked out the rest of the group's parts, you've kept track of every blog entry made in a book. What is your intent with the books because I haven't seen any other group do that?

Overall Impression: I noticed that Lyn and Neva take turns posting prompts six days in a week. Is there a reason no prompt is posted on Sunday. I did see people post on the forum anyway. I suppose it helps to maintain a consistent routine.
I'll return after the games over and maybe toss a blog entry or two up.

Thank you for letting me read your work!

Cheri

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Review by Cheri Annemos
In affiliation with The Iron Bank of Braavos  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi: Fivesixer

My name is Cheri, I'm one of the sly foxes of House Florent

Title: 30 DAY Blogging Challenge

What I liked: Wow, the longest blogging group on WDC, that's cool! This group has an interesting format with one month geared to encouraging bloggers to write 30 consecutive days with recognition upon completion but then the off month offers different adventures. I noticed in August, the group has camped in Maine and Yellowstone, backpacked across Europe and this year it seems South America is the place to be.
It's a great way to learn about different areas of the world while being safe at home. I'm looking forward to reading some of the entries about South America because my curiosity is peaked.
I like that the forum changes every other month and that all the bloggers are listed when participating.


What needs your attention: I didn't note any grammar or punctuation issues on the forum. I do have one question whatever happened to the monkey, Andre I believe? I haven't seen any posts from him recently.


Thank you for letting me read your work!

Cheri

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Review by Cheri Annemos
In affiliation with The Iron Bank of Braavos  
Rated: E | (4.0)
"The Iron Bank of Braavos" House Florent Image for G.o.T. "Game of Thrones" 
My name is Cheri, I am one of the sly foxes. You have been chosen as part of the Game of Thrones reviewing challenge.

Draws: I remember this prompt from last year. I know what I did with it and wanted to see what other players came up with. I did not have time then, so am making time now.
First Impression: You put an interesting twist on something well known.
What needs your attention: I did not see anything way off the mark, errant grammar or missed punctuation or any other irritating things. It seems pretty complete.

What part I liked best: You did a pretty good job of taking on the story of the beginning of the tale of the Loch Ness Monster. This legend has captured my fancy for many years. You did a pretty good job of tying up the ends.


Overall impression: This assignment was pretty hard as I remember it. You an admirable job in coming up with a theme and running with it.
Favorite Line: I thought it was cute the way Ben called Sam’s bluff. That was brilliant

Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.


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Review by Cheri Annemos
In affiliation with The Iron Bank of Braavos  
Rated: E | (5.0)
"The Iron Bank of Braavos" House Florent Image for G.o.T. "Game of Thrones" 
My name is Cheri, I am one of the sly foxes. You have been chosen as part of the Game of Thrones reviewing challenge.

Draws: To be honest, it was the awardicon that drew the attention first. I did not see how poetry could also be action/adventure, but you did a delightful job of fusing the two.

First Impression: You had me at the first stanza. I loved it and could not stop or even pause.

What needs your attention: I don’t like the stanza that has the castle bell in it. But I can’t come up with anything better either.

What part I liked best: I think it’s is amazing the way you make most of your stories with a bull as the center of attention. It takes a special talent. My favorite thing is that you planted this poetic verse in Ireland and then kept to that vibe and rhythm throughout.


Overall impression: I love your turn of phrase and the way you weave ideas together. Very well done.

Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.


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Review of The Sun Also Sets  
Review by Cheri Annemos
In affiliation with The Iron Bank of Braavos  
Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
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My name is Cheri, I am one of the sly foxes. You have been chosen as part of the Game of Thrones reviewing challenge.

Draws: The title drew me in. It screamed Ernest Hemingway and I wanted to see what you would do to fuse comedy with action/adventure.
First Impression: You took on a legend and put a twist on it that could have gone sideways quite quickly. You stuck to the story line and did nice little teases throughout.

What needs your attention: I did not see anything that made me go “what?”. All the grammar and punctuation seemed to be in place.

What part I liked best: You kept the bull the center of the story with all of the worries and noble bearing in the face of a possible death sentence. That was quite well done.


Overall impression: It seemed you slipped into the mannerisms and the attitudes of the different time periods effortlessly. I don’t know how the time travel is possible, if you can stick steam as the means to power the device, whoa, you could add steampunk to the genre choices.
Favorite Line: She who must be listened to….my first thought was to laugh out loud because I know people like that! There might even be people who think that of me. ***shhh don’t tell 

Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.


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Review by Cheri Annemos
In affiliation with Blog City ~ Every Blogger'...  
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
"Game of Thrones"
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Hi

My name is Cheri, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title and Draw: Hi, Chris, I am tripping through your port as a mini run to see if the links work and all is well with our team. I chose this because you said it won an award. Yea, you.

First Impression: I thought I would get a funny story about some misfortune that happened. You wrote about your hardships and your accomplishments in a straight forward way that I appreciate. It is well written in that I stayed with it the whole way through. Good job on presenting a story in a way that forces the reader to empathy and knowing smiles.

What needs your attention:
I haven't done inn years [typo: in years]
there are a few clerical errors like “i” instead of “I” that could use a loving eye to go over them again.
Min vacation [ I think you meant mini vacation.]

What part I liked best: My favorite line is “I'm always glad to see the old year go out.” Me, too! The years seem to start out harsh, and end with something good, and I am always happy that something fresh is there to give life to the new year…until something happens to bring the harsh out again. That line caught the essence of the story perfectly.

Overall impression:

Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.


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Review of The Gift.  
Review by Cheri Annemos
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello,
thought I'd wonder through your port to see how you turn a phrase.
This one touched my heart in a special way. I can't define why I like it, I just know good work when I see it.
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Review by Cheri Annemos
Rated: E | (5.0)
Looks like a fun little bitty you have going on here. My entry for the cause....
Once upon a time there was a man with a mission. Everyday, he picked up a magazine from a store, a doctor’s office, an old friend’s house, a neighbor – it mattered not. He saw it, had to have it, and left with it. But only one. No more. One day, he “acquired” one from the local drug store. We are assured it was quite by accident. Must have been an accident. Because of that, he was arrested. Telling the story to the judge was a tortuous descent into humility. Thankfully, judges took recesses before sentencing and the man could sit, chewing on his fingernails, waiting for the judge to return. Bathrooms were wonderful places to sit and mull things over. He preferred the cold tiles and the soft scents of body odor that were assaulting his sense to facing the judge again. But you can only hide so long before the lawyer finds you and demands your return to the courtroom for sentencing. He barely listened to the judge drone on an on, sending his thoughts to the outer rings of Saturn and contemplations of space dust dancing all around him as he floated in a vast vacuum of space. Until finally, the gavel hit the block bringing him back to reality. Watching the lawyers gather papers and the judge beat a hasty retreat to chambers, he still had no idea what just happened or what his fate would be.
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Review of The Pickup  
Review by Cheri Annemos
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Congratulations on the nod in the Romance newsletter. I love the way you put this story together with these prompts. I hope you won whatever contest it was in. I can't see anything that needs a buff or polish.
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Review by Cheri Annemos
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Love this story. You need to do a screenplay of the Adventures of Drew With No Clue. This would be a good entry in the no dialogue contest for sure. You would win. I didn't see any missings or boo boos. This is quite well done and had me shaking my head with repeated "oh, nos" when I figured out where this was going.

That being said,if you want to enhance it at some point, there are plenty of places to punch it up with dialogue.
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Review of Blue Coma  
Review by Cheri Annemos
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Myles.
Welcome to the WdC Power Reviews Raid.
I was thinking space abduction! Too funny.
I don't usually review mysteries because, as you can see, I am ever so good at them. So the only thing I would add is that the punctuation can be a little cleaner and tighter.
The genres and rating selected are fine.
The character development was sufficiently vague to keep the surprise at the end.
The scene development turned out to be quite good.
Off to a good start on this site.
Looking forward to more of your work.

Cheri
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Review by Cheri Annemos
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Another fabulous story about my absolute favorite character, well maybe not totally about him, but close enough.

You really hit all the core competencies in this story. One little booboo that you can fix post haste.
would see all those around hm age [typo]

Still love it madly. Five stars just because it's that good.
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