How true you are! but how many of us have the courage to wait til the storm pass without running for shelter.You must have a strong courage to face the challenges in life and if you have that attitude in your life half of the problems are already solved for you.
What a nice poem! First of all I must tell you that I am not rating your poem just for G.P's but it tells a nice,pathetic story revealing a mystery at the end of the poem as to who is speaking in it. The poet says that the loneliness it discusses common not only to humans but to animals as well. The broken relationships make people to pay more attention to animals because once they are sure of our love to them their loyalty will never fade away as long as they live!
Is he your boy friend?I couldn't resist the question. It shows your anxiety and frustration. Your emotions are felt by the reader and you must be clever to do so. Good luck for your future work. By the way I am a newbie like you.
A very moving poem . That is nature for us and we have to accommodate them.The destruction it brings is nicely stressed showing that the doer is totally unaware of the chaos it makes in the process. We faced tsunami for the first time in 2006 and it killed nearly 100,000 people in my country mostly due to our ignorance of tidal waves.Your poem recollected all those sad memories in my heart.
A very simple yet very philosophical poem to me.Though I live in a country where I can see snow only on t.v I have seen the colourful changes of weather and I can relate to it easily.
I agree with all my heart cos I too am wearing it day in day out to my school. I am greatly proud of you that you have a very matured ideas about your culture where youngsters nowadays forget who and what they are and they don't give a damn about their own cultures . Good luck to you .
The simplicity of an innocent soul is nicely described. The pleasure of giving where nothing is expected in return. How simple the world will be if we all can think like that!!
I am a newbie like you but Like your poem.It describes the never ending life forms on earth
whether we are alive or not.Avery philosophical point of view on life!
What a handful of memories! You r a very lucky person to be so active when many of us prone to indulge in self-pity in your age.Good luck to you and may your days filled with happiness and strength!!
I am a catholic married to a Buddhist. How enjoyable your poem is.I can visualize how Moses wait impatiently to take the whole lot before any one else.Fantastic. Hope I can write poems like that!!
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