WOW "Mommy why . . . .Mommy why . . ." Damn no offence to the woman but if I felt something wasn't quite right . . . hahahaha I don't think I would have gone about my normal morning routine. But then again . . . when you read then end . . . you kind of realize why.
Wow I have to tell you that I am usually fairly good and figuring out how a story is going to end. But this one really stumpted me! Cudos!!!
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Great Story can't wait to go read more.
Keep writing!!
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OH my goodness . . . its soo sweet and sad at the same time. I feel like weeping for her. No more Christmas? Well bloody hell thats horrid.
But she gets to sit in her chair . . . rocking back and forth . . . back and forth . . . remembering the days where she, like most mothers, grandmothers, did it all.
God Bless you Women of the World
The ones who make holidays so specail for us all little tikes.
Thank you Meg
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WOW I can see that dress. It would really be something to see now a days. A teenager myself . . . LOL I can tell you that I would DIE to wear something like that. OH . . . did I just ruin this review by telling you how old I am . . .OH well.
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I really LOVE that dress . . . I remember one from when I was little . . . 4 or 5 . . . it was the ugliest thing . . . but I loved it too death. It swished when I moved . . . and belled out when I spun. But alas I grew and now longer to I love the dress no longer does it fit me . . . but I still remember the feeling as I spun . . .
Thanks for the memories.
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Alright I have to state that I truly couldn't understand racing. I don't get the point of driving WAAY to fast in a car that is no more made to take an impact at 20mph let alone 120. But I can understand NOW.
Thanks for the WONDERFUL read. I just wish this review could do it justice.
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LOL I love this . . . the picture of the witches, goblins and gouls. . . its wonderful.
You can feel the fear in the piece, the tiniest part of your mind telling to stop reading for fear of what waits when YOU sleep. But still that longing, that taste on your tongue to know . . .KNOW what happens in the end.
Oh this was probably the most adorable thing I've read in a long time. I can sympathize . . . my brother is the kind to leave notes for himself everywhere. Sadly he too looses them sometimes. Actually its because he hides them so no one knows he needs them . . . than he forgets where he hid them.
LOL I love this . . . it reminds me that we're all human. I LOVE IT.
Keep writing stuff like this . . . I ADORE it.
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This was just superb. I loved them all, wonderfully written and the flow it was all just perfect. You have a wonderful gift for rhyme. I love reading your poetry it always puts a smile on my face. I can't wait to go read more . . . so I hope you'll exuse me.
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You are truly a fortunate woman. You have a great many friends on this site and that is only possible if you, youself are a true friend. I think that this site is truly blessed to have people like you and your port is only proving me right.
Thank you for some AWESOM reads.
Now if you exuse me . . . I MUST CONTINUE!!!!
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Alright . . . I sound slightly insane . . . but whatever . . . I just love animals and your poem is just so wonderful. I'm glad you and the Pew's get along so well.
Its horrid to have neighbors that you can't stand. Don't ya think?
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LOL I will admit I have never left my wonderful Country America. Though I truly hope too one day, I hope to see Australia, England, France, and soo many other places that I can't spell and wouldn't disrespect by trying. But I will tell you that I know what your talking about. Here in upstate New York, we have a place like that. A place that no matter what time of year could be snowing, sunny, thundering, or raining leaves. Marathon just gotta love your home land.
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That is just too precious for words. I love it . . . and I must admit something that I have yet to tell anyone on this site. I am named for my mother's mother. Sylvia, I have always loved my name, never knowning my grandmother I think it brings us closer together. On this site I am known to all as Susan, not because I don't want anyone to know my real name, I am proud to share a name with someone who touched so many. NO I rather be called Susan simply because my Nanna's nickname was Sue and I can't STAND SUE. So Susan will just have to do. LOL
I love this poem, and CONGRATS ON THE BEAUTIFUL LITTLE BOY!!!!
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LOL thats was just as delicious as what it was about. I loved it. Wonderfully thought out and written. You have a wonderful gift for pulling people in with your poerty.
I have to admit sadly that I haven't had a good bit of vegemite since I was a wee thing. My mother used to love the Bloody stuff.
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But you make me want to run out right quick and get some. LOL
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I'm actually in tears. I know that friend, that person that you found to tell ANYTHING and EVERYTHING too. She is my sister in spirit and I truly don't know what I would do without her.
I'm sorry to hear that you lost your husband, even more sorry to hear that you lost your sister. But you are right, she is watching over you from above. She will always be there for you to talk too, and she sometimes answers, you just have to listen carefully.
I hope that you ALWAYS hear her answers.
Bless
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That is exactly how EVERYONE should see it. God didn't really do anything special to us . . . just colored our skin with something different, something to make us all special.
I'm going to tell you something that I don't really think most people would agree with . . . but what the hey.
I think that when meeting a person for the first time, you should go temporally blind. Close your eyes and don't open them. PRETEND that you can't see, and learn about the person, don't judge them based on how they look, but on WHO they are.
I think this poem, is a wonderful way of telling people not to ONLY see with their eyes.
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Very well written this one. The story that you tell, the picture you paint. I like it. I can't say I could live in a place where my eyes would burn by simplely going outside. But hey . . . I'm sure most people couldn't stand to live in a place where it can reach -20 . . . hey thats your choice. LOL
I love this poem you did a wonderful job of painting a picture for me.
Thank you
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