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Rated: E | (5.0)
I really like this poem. We all like to hide sometimes. It takes special people to bring it out in us. I am glad you started writing as I like to read what you write.
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Review of Whose Magic?  
Rated: E | (4.0)
I just cleared the rating I last gave this story. You added more, and it is a good story. I enjoyed it very much. I love magic and magicians. Spacing between paragraphs will make it easier to read. Be sure to check your punctuation. I am bad about that! I use Grammarly to help with editing.

Good luck, and Keep writing,
Dianne
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Love this story. Written very well, I see no need for improvement.

Dianne
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Good story. I like the 'take me to your leader' part. Though I'm not sure we have one.
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Review of Pure White  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this poem. I think you wrote it well.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a great story. I really enjoyed it and am so glad it ended the way it did!

Glad you won the contest.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of The Gift  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A good story. I don't know that I would want that ability. Well written.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of Princess  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a well-written poem. I don't write much poetry, but I do like to read it. If this is real life, I am so sorry. You will be ok.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of Pieces of Me  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I admire those who can write poetry so well. I felt the pain all thru the poem.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of Whose Magic?  
Rated: E | (3.0)
I enjoyed this, but it doesn't feel finished. It needs to be proofread and correct the spelling and spacing errors. I would like to read it completed, sounds like it could be a really good story.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I think you wrote this well. I understand the self-doubt, I think it will always be there, but we can't let it be first. We have to believe in ourselves, believe that we are good and our writing is good.

Good luck, and keep writing
Dianne
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A good poem, but don't trust the devil. He lies.
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Review of Higher Ground  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
What a good story! I enjoyed it. So glad Beth decided to help Jaylynn and Lucy. Good thing the driver stopped to help her.
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Review of Captive Audience  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is a great poem! I hope you win.

Dianne
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Oh, I loved this story! I am going to try my hand at it too. Not sure what yet, though.

Good Luck,
Keep Writing
Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this story. I am going to try but have not yet. I think you wrote it well, and I like him finally getting the point.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Drake,

Glad you decided to join us. I've been here for some time, and I really like it.
You will get out of it what you decide to invest in it. Wish you well and good luck.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of Mabel And The Mob  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I like this story. I'm glad Mable won.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of Memoirs  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good story. I never thought about writing from a fish point of view. I think you did a good job with the dialogue too.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of Free at Last  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like your poem. I used to dream of floating and flying. I loved the feeling.

Keep writing
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Review of My Father  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A sweet memory of your father. Kindness is so eady to do and so under rated. Be kind.
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Review of Hourglass sands  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A good poem. Sometimes i feel like that. Getting oldisnt for bn the faint hearted! lol
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Review of SKINNY DIPPIN'  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed this story! I think you wrote it well. I would like to read more of your childhood memories.
Keep writing
Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Love this story!
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Very good story! It is a bit sad but vampire or human the end is coming and it will be fiery.
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