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Review of Touched by Snow  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (4.5)
*Note*Overall Impressions:
I love the snow. I just don't like driving in it. *Pthb*

*Note* Emotional Impact:
This reminded me of my own carefree moments as a child. I used to play on the ice all of the time. I had fun but always ended up falling on my knees and getting these gigantic bruises on them and wouldn't be able to kneel, lol.

*Note* Imagery:
You gave beautiful imagery and visuals of the little girl spinning and skating on the ice.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Good flow and meter.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Good job! *Smile*

*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Review of Droplets  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
*Note*Overall Impressions:
Once again, you have composed another beautiful poem! *Bigsmile*

*Note* Imagery:
You gave beautiful imagery as you described the rainbows and tears.

*Note* Flow/Form:
This has great flow and form.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None. It's perfect the way it is.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done on another masterpiece! Keep writing! *Delight*

*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
*Note*Overall Impressions:
This looks like a really fun contest! I think that a flash poetry contest is an excellent contest! *Smile*

*Note* Imagery:
Nice colorful fonts and images in this forum.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
I may just have to enter this! *Bigsmile*

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Review of Words With Color  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
*Note*Overall Impressions:
What a beautiful poem! A work of art!" *Wink*

*Note* Imagery:
Great imagery and visuals.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Very nice flow and meter.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical errors, or misspelled words.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done! *Smile*

*Heart* Ciao,
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Review of Sad Reminders  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
*Note*Overall Impressions:
This is very nice. Well written and easy to read through.

*Note* Imagery:
Good job on the imagery and visuals.

*Note* Flow/Form:
This had nice flow and meter.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any punctuation, spelling or grammatical errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Good job, and welcome to Writing.com! I hope you have a great time here!

*Heart* Ciao,
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Review of My entry  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
*Note*Overall Impressions:
This is a well-written poem.

*Note* Imagery:
You gave beautiful imagery and descriptions.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Very nice flow.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
Make sure you put a rating on your poem. I would also suggest that you put in an explanation to what it is you're supposed to do for the contest, perhaps put in a link so other reviewers can see what the contest is about. *Smile*

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this! Keep writing!

*Heart* Ciao,
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Review of What Is Love?  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
*Note*Overall Impressions:
This is a very beautiful piece.

*Note* Imagery:
You did a great job on the imagery with the different colors.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Nice work on the flow and meter.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Originality/Uniqueness:
I love how you highlighted the word "love" in a different color, as well as the other words at the end of the poem.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done! *Bigsmile* Keep writing!

*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (4.5)
*Note*Overall Impressions:
I think most people can relate to this short story. Credit cards can be evil if mis-used.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Good job! *Smile*

*Heart* Ciao,
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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (4.5)
*Note*Overall Impressions:
Well done on a well-written poem!

*Note* Imagery:
You did a good job on the imagery and visuals.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Great flow and meter.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Good job! Keep writing!

*Heart* Ciao,
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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
*Note*Overall Impressions:
A very powerful poem!

*Note* Emotional Impact:
This was so sad. *Frown*

*Note* Imagery:
Good job on the imagery and descriptions.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Excellent flow and form.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Good job. Keep writing!

*Heart* Ciao,
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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
*Note*Overall Impressions:
These two poems are really good. I like how both of them end differently. *Smile* Very unique.

*Note* Imagery:
You did a great job with the imagery and descriptions.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Excellent flow and meter.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done! *Bigsmile*

*Heart* Ciao,
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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (4.5)
*Note*Overall Impressions:
This is a great inspirational piece. I think a lot of people struggle with this particular issue.

*Note* Imagery:
If gave great detail in this piece.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Good job! *Smile*

*Heart* Ciao,
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Review of Seeking  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
*Note*Overall Impressions:
This was so beautiful. I have been in this position before. This was so well-written and easy to read through.

*Note* Imagery:
Great job on the imagery and the visuals in this poem.

*Note* Flow:
This has excellent flow and form.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any punctuation, spelling, or grammatical errors.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done! Keep writing! *Smile*

*Heart* Ciao,
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Review of Rock bottom.  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (4.5)
*Note*Overall Impressions:
This is good advice for those who only look at the bad things in life. If everyone focused on what is right, instead of what's wrong, all of us would be better off.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this. Write on! *Smile*

*Heart* Ciao,
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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
*Note*Overall Impressions:
This was so sad and yet so beautiful. I greatly enjoyed reading this piece.

*Note* Emotional Impact:
I think a lot of people can relate to this. A lot of people wish they could go back in time to relive certain moments and change the things they did.

*Note* Imagery:
You did a great job with the descriptions and visuals.

*Note* Flow:
This has excellent flow and form.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any spelling, grammatical, or punctuation errors.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this! Well done! *Smile*

*Heart* Ciao,
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Review of Hyperbole  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
*Note*Overall Impressions:
This was really fun and funny to read! *Laugh* I never knew what the word hyperbole meant. I had never even heard of the word before, lol.

*Note* Flow:
This has excellent flow and meter.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done! *Bigsmile*

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Review of Memories Fade  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (4.5)
*Note*Overall Impressions:
Friendship and any other relationship can be tough.

*Note* Flow:
This had good flow and rhythm.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any misspelled words, or grammatical errors.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Good job! Keep writing!

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Review of Reflections  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
*Note*Overall Impressions:
This is so beautiful, I loved it! *Delight* True love is one of the best things on earth. You did a wonderful job on this poem.

*Note* Flow:
This had excellent flow and meter.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done! *Smile* Keep writing!

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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
*Note*Overall Impressions:
I enjoyed reading this amusing little short. I have had days like that. I call them "Murphy's Law Days" *Laugh* They suck to say the least.

*Note* Narration/Dialogue:
The narration and dialogue were excellent.

*Note* Character Comments:
The old milkman creeped me out big time. I am so glad that I live on the third floor of my apartment.

*Note* Imagery:
Great job on the descriptions and imagery.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any punctuation, grammatical, or spelling errors.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done! *Smile*

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Review of On Guard  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
*Note* Overall Impressions:
This is a great poem. Easy to read and well-written.

*Note* Imagery:
You did a great job with the description and imagery of this piece.

*Note* Flow:
Excellent job on the flow and rhythm.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Good job, keep writing!

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Review of COME THE MORNING  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
*Note* Overall Impressions:
This is such a beautiful tribute to your friends. *Smile*

*Note* Flow:
This had excellent flow and rhythm.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:-
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done! *Smile*

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Review of The Darkened Path  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
*Note* Overall Impressions:
This was a great piece of poetry. It was well-written and fascinating to read.

*Note* Imagery:
You did an excellent job with the imagery and descriptions.

*Note* Flow:
This had good flow and form.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done! *Smile*

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Review of I Belong  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
*Note* Overall Impressions:
This is a very beautiful poem. I can see why this won an award. *Smile*

*Note* Imagery:
You gave great imagery and descriptions.

*Note* Flow:
This has excellent flow and form.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done! Keep writing!

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Review of Love Me  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
*Note* Overall Impressions:
This was very beautiful and I loved reading it. *Smile*

*Note* Flow:
This has good flow and rhythm.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any spelling, grammatical, or punctuation errors.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done! *Smile*

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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
*Note* Overall Impressions:
You have been very active like you said you were going to be this year. This was really fun to read. I love fantasy stories. *Smile*

*Note* Plot Comments:
You did a great job on the plot.

*Note* Imagery:
Excellent job on the imagery and the descriptions. I also like the pictures for visual stimulation.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for another great read! *Smile*

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