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Oh, I loved reading this, I could imagine you and your sister sun bathing out the window.
Have you ever been to Poland?
You were very lucky your mam smelled that cigarette when she did, it's mad what you will do out of panic haha.
This was a lovely story about your life thank you very much
ps I'm sorry what happened to your doll.
Well what a lovely use of the letter W
Would not have put it better myself
Would more than likely messed it up
Well I really enjoyed this
Wdc is a great place.
Wishing you and yours a Merry Christmas
ps Wondering if you noticed I reviewed starting with all w at the start, haha enjoy.
Great stuff you really showed exactly the way it can be when there is a teen group chat, also if they all vent to you maybe you should vent as well, most teenagers are selfish and don't even mean to be there just trying so hard to fit in and go to school and be in with the latest fashion and on top of that HORMONES everything can be a bit much for them, but I'm really looking forward to the next part.
This is a really good poem, I really like it because as a child I was forever in trouble, and always did the wrong thing, but this brought back a memory anytime my mam took me shopping I always got lost on purpose just so I could go up to the desk and have my name called over the intercom.
One day my mam and her sister took me and my cousin shopping and my auntie got in a panic and said that we were lost and my mam was real calm and said "any minute now" as the woman said "I have two little girls who are lost in the store, my aunty said to my mam how did you know? and she said because Gillian does this everytime.
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Hi Audrey
This poem made me feel so sad, I myself have a 5-year-old boy who is Autistic and I feel like sometimes I'm the only one who understands him, and I also worry so much about stuff like when he's in school, and most of all when I die, but to think that people were so mean to you that it led you to drink heavy, I'm so glad you finally know that you are the most important person in your life and I'm glad you found that doctor, I hope you are happy every day. Thanks for such an honest poem it was lovely written.
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Heya, what a lovely story. Will we hear more about Dylan and Lila?
I don't want to be too hard on you because you are so young but I would just say for every time they are sending texts you could maybe use inverted commas rather than saying his text said or her text said, but other than that I loved it, if you write like this at 14 I can't wait until you are older to read more well done keep up the amazing work.
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Oh My god, I loved this, I never read a story like this before as if you were just speaking to me about how creative, and well-done keep writing, haha also I love what you did at the start about the covid well-done keep writing I can't wait to read more.
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Yes, I agree with you 100% on this.
I would say I have low self-esteem and do often wonder how people who say they have low also but they like to be the center of attention.
Well done keep writing.
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Very Good, it kind of reminded me of the Vampire diaries because of the doppelgangers and another tv show I saw before, but you put your own special twist on it, id love to read more like this I really enjoyed it.
I loved your poem
it's great that you have a place to go and chill out.
So sorry to hear you have Cancer.
Wish you all the best
take care.
ps. I'm sorry this review is short I'm not an expert but I liked your poem and I like it because of your honesty about having bad thoughts which I'm sure most people do.
keep writing.
wow what a beautiful poem, your husband is very lucky to have you. it sounds like you want your husband to let you in to open up more and speak to you, brilliant well written
I love a good poem
hope things get better for him you should get him to write about prison
wow what a good poem
1st of all your not taking up space and your not a burden, life does go on but I'm sure if your kids lost you there lives would go on in a f***ed up way, going down the roads they might not have taken if you were still alive, I know this because my dad passed and it f***ed me up, if you don't know all ready grief is a f***ed up thing, I do feel that way my self somedays I wish I could take my own advice that id is just given to you because I myself feel like whats the fukin point sometimes, n I'm just here because of my kids but a while back I was listening to someone talking a podcast or something I don't really remember and the girl said so many people today think that there suicidal and they don't wanna live or be here any better if they were dropped in the deep ocean I bet you any money they would fight for there lives, and I agree with what she said, I'm sorry if I read the poem wrong and your not even thinking that way,,, hope your okay
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