I realy enjoyed this piece of work it made me feel like I was part of the poem/short story well done. have you written more work? I am deaf with English as a second language so I canot comment on the grammar etc.
Well I really enjoyed this seasonal story, and look forward to reading some more of your work, it took me back to my magical youth when everything was inocent and real, well done for that. The story flowed well and naturally, I particulary enjoyed the part where the children were convinced that Nick was actually changing into Sant Clause. I am not sure what it is you want in the way of constructive comments I am deaf with English as a second language, so I could not comment for you on grammar and puctuation ,but I could certainly tell you if I like the work, please let me know?
Everything that you do is thoughly worked out, simply displayed, you encourage and nutrture both new and establihed writers, where do you find the time? do you sleep? or is this a twenty four hour job for you? Very well done I look forward to discovering more of your handy work as I navigate the sites
Oh I really enjoyed this short story, I loved the journey you took us on when you were a small boy, very well written, easy to read story. I look forward to reading more from you in the future. Have you thought of putting other stories like this into a book?
I enjoyed reading this clear simple bit of poetry, I set my mind on a journey of its own. Thinking about all the things I had taken part in to day. All that I should be completeing to morrow and wondering if I would ever catch up with my self enough to sleep.
I am new to writing.com I found the information easy to read and very informative, thank you very much for this. Do you produce other pieces of information about other sites within the writing.com web site? could the be passed on to me? thank you once again for all your hard work in placeing this together.
Thank you for your comments and the article, I enjoy the things I do and find it very rewarding. So that fact not much in the way of money is earnt, but the tremendous joy you can bring to others far outways everthing else. I have another story almost ready to put out on the net I look forward to seeing more from you.
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