Hi reneaiscool, my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challenge: As English is my second language,I will comment on your writing only. This is a fantastic little poem. It read and flowed well I loved the way it rhymed, it seemd to make it bounce along. Good luck in the contest, and with your woirk in the future.
Hi randomangel, my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challenge: As English is my second language I will comment on your writing only. This is a wonderful poem, I really enjoyed the read. Your work read and flowed well. You have some very good descriptive words. Good luck in the competition and with your work in the future.
Hi leaforte, my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challenge: As English is my second language,I will comment on your writing only. This is a beautiful poem, I was captivated until the end. Your work read and flowed well. it has a certain old world charm about it. I comes across well. Good luck in the contest and with your work in the future.
Hi Nomadic_Soul, My name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challenge: As English is my second language, I will comment on your writing only.
This is the best piece of work I think you have produced so far. Your work reads and flows well. I like the feel of your poem, it speaks out to me about our doubts. good luck in the contest and with your writing in the future.
Hi Jodie N, my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challenge: As English is my second language, I will comment on your writing only. This is a very interesting story, I cannot wait to read the next installment. Your work read and flowed well. Your characters were strong and believable. I think this will make a very good openong chapter to your book. Good luck in the contest and with your work in the future
Hi writeartista, my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for the weekly newbie challenge: As English is my second language, I will comment on your writing only. This is a very beautiful and emotional piece of work, I really enjoyed the read. Your work read and flowed well. Your main character is stong and believable. I think it will make a good opening chapter for your book. Will be an auto biography, or fiction based on fact?
{e: good luck in the contest and with your work in the future.
Hi leaforte, my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challange: As English id my second language, I will comment on yuor writng only. This is a wonderful poem I enjoyed the read very much. Your work read and flowed well. Good luck in the contest and with your writing.
Hi slash, my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers forthe Weekly Newbie Challange: As English is my second language, I will comment on yur writing only. This is a fantastic piece of work I reall enjoyed the read. It read and flowed well. I was dissapointed when it finished, I could have read it as a novel in no time. Your characters, were strong and believable, you have a good plot going there. Good luck in the contest and with your work in the furure.
Hi my name is Raffikie, I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challange: As English is my second language I will comment on your writing only. this is a very interesting poem. I like the way it rhymed, your work read and flowed well. good luck with your work in the future.
Hi my name is Raffikie, I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challange: As English is my second language I will comment on your writing only. This is a very interesting story about comuptor dating, I enjoyed the read. Your work flowed well,and was easy to read. Thank you for sharing it with us good luck with your work in the future.
Hi Walt, my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Contest: As English is my second language I will comment on your writing only. This is a wonderful poem about street life, I feel as though it has been written from personal experience. Carer/Social worker? Your poem read and flowed well, I enjoyed the read. I could visulise these poor people making there way to no where. I am not sure about the spelling of the words Checks, as I am from England and we spell differently here. welll done with this poem, good luck with your work in the future.
Hi m3lay, my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challange: As English is my second language I will comment on your writing only.
{e;smile} This is a very good short story, I really enjoyed the read. I liked the characters and thought they were believable. I think it would make a good opening chapter to a short novel, developing the characters more. good luck with your work in the future.
Hi Wren Howard, my name is Raffikie, I am one of the reviewers of the Weekly Newbie Challange: As English is my second language, I will comment on your writing only. This was very good I enjoyed the humour, and couldpicture the ring bearer walking down the Isle growliing like a bear. These are just like the sort of things that happen at Weddings. Good luck with your work in the future.
Hi meg3450, my name is Raffikie, as English is my second language I will comment on your writing only. This is devolping into an interesting read. I have enjoyed the taster above and look forward to more. I hope Thomaskeeps the friendship with the unicorn, and finds another to help his sister. Thank you so much for sharing this, looking forward to more of your work.
Hi Meg3450, my name is Raffikie, as English is my second language, I will comment on your writing only, This is a goos piece of work I enjoyed the read. I found one typing error in paragraph 8 the rest of the word Thomas has dropped to the next line. Your wrk read and flowed well. the characters were strong and believable, I look forward to the next chapter.
(e:star} Good luck with your book.
Hi Candy Bullet, my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie challange: As English is my second language, I will comment on your writing only. This is an interesting piece of prose, I kiled the way you described the precious life cycle of the flower, thank you for sharing it with us. Good luck with your work in the future.
Hi Tuesday, my name is Raffikie, I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challange: As English is my second language I will comment on your wwritng only. This is a remarkable account of your family history, It must have been a truly exciting expience meeting up with your great aunts and sharing thier experienc of life. Good luck with your work in the future.
Hi Musings, my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challange: As English is my second language I will comment on your writing only. This is a beautiful poem about nature, you seem to have summerised very well the essence of trees in the summertime. Good luck with your work in the future.
Hi darkblue, my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challange: As English is my second language I will comment on your writng only. This is a very powerful and emotional piece of prose. I found it read and flowed well, you write as though you have been to that dark place and are returning. Wishing you all the best with your work in the future.
Hi Cass my name is Raffikie I am one of the Reviewers in this contest, I really enjoyed reading your account of how WDC changed your life, good luck in the competition.
Hi Vicki, my name is Raffikie I am one ofthe reviewers for this contest, I really enjoyed reading your work, thank you for sharing it with us, good luck in the competition.
Hi Kiya ,my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for this contest: As English is my second language I will comment on your story only. this has made a refreshing change to read that like you have stated, your here to read and write for the love of it. well done, wishing you all the best in the contest.
Hi Lisa, my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for this contest: I realy loved your letter about WDC and your decorations well done, maybe we should all write one home. good luck in the contest.
Hi Wren Howard, my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for this contest, thank you so much for sharing your reasons with us here I found them very enjoyable to read, and found my self relating to some of them. good luck in the contest.
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This is a fantastic little poem.