Hi Victoria, my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for this contest. I really enjoyed reading your story about WDC, and whole heartedly agree that you become addicted to it. good luck in the contest.
Hi Paul, my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challange: As English is my second language, I will comment on your writing only. This is a very beatiful ode to the trees, I love being surrounded by them my self. I also love Tolkien's work Lord of the rings it reminded me so much of home in Cornwall. You have done well with this piece of poetry, good luck with your work in the future.
Hi Aurora, my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challange: As English is my second language, I will comment on your writing only. This is a very heart rendering story, I had to stop and wipe away a few tears before I could type a review for you well done, It is a wonderful ode to a dearly beloved pet, thank you for sharing it with us. Good luck with your work in the future.
Hi, my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challange: As English is my second language, I will comment on your writing only. This is a very interesting account, of your time spent at a Civil War reinactment. Written in the style of a journalist, thank you for sharing this with us,good luck with your work in the future.
Hi mousiebrowniecho, my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challange: As English is my second language, I will comment on your writing only. This is a beautiful piece of work I really enjoyed the read, I think you have summed up here in this poem how a flower would feel very well. Thank you for sharing this with us, good luck with your work in the future.
Hi lauriemariepee, my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewrs for the Weekly Newbie Challange: As English is my second language I will comment on your writing only. This is a good pirce of work I enjoyed the read, almost feeling as I was the young girl. It stired up emotions within me of my friends childhood and thec difficulties she went through with her mother. Thank you for sharing this with us, good luck with your work in the future.
Hi ShyPoet, my name is Raffikie, I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challange: As English is my second language, I will comment on your writing only. This is a wonderful tribute to your mother, I have read many, yours seems to be that one step ahead of the others, as your talk simple but clearly of the spitual side as well as those left behind. Well done, thank you for sharing tis with us all, good luck with your work in the future.
Hi anti_w, my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challange: As English is my second language, I will comment on your writing only. This is an interesting poem, I enjoyed the read but It did not seem to flow for me, I cannot put my finger on what was wrong so please forgive me. Thank you for sharing this with us, good luck with your work in the future, I am sure you will be published soon.
Hi Wren Howard, my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challange: As English is my second language I will comment on your writing only. This is a very nice short piece very powerful in its own way, I enjoyed the use of colour which hightened what was being portrayed. Thank you very much for sharing this with us, good luck in the future with your work.
Hi Ms_Penguin, my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challange: As English is my second language, I will comment on your writing only. This is a very beautiful short story, it readand flowed well. I could almost visulise it as an opening chapter for a book. Good luck with your work in the future.
Hi caseyfish, my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challange: As English is my second language, I will comment on your writing only. this is a very inspirstional poem it read and flowed well, I could visulise it flowing past me, thank you for sharing it with us, god luck with your work in the future.
Hi Musings, my name is Rafikie I am one of the reviewersfor the Weekly Newbie Challange: As English is my second language, I will comment on your poem only. This is a very insipartional piece of work, I found refreshing and as sweet as the words used to tell the tale. Thank you for sharing this with us, good luck with your work in the future.
Hi Samlam, my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challange: As English is my second language, I will comment on your vwriting only. This is a fantasic piece I enjoyed the read, it flowed well and I was disapointed when I readed the end, I could have read much more. Thank you for sharing it with us good luck with your work in the furure.
Hi shylah, my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challange: As English is my second language, I will comment on your writing only. This is a wonderful poem, I enjoyed reading it very much, the way it flowed and rhymed was realy good I colud almost imagine my delf on your holiday, good luck with your work in the future.
Hi Helviblu, my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challange: As English is my second language, I will comment on your writing only. This is a fantasic little poem, I could imagine my self running through the carpet and acrross the florr with the dust Bunnny. Loved the way it rhymed and it flowed so well, you feel your self travelling. well done good luck with your work in the future.
Hi fingerfrenzy, my name is Raffikie I am one of the Reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Chsllange: as English is my second language, I will comment on your writing only. This is a fantastic poem, I felt as though I was one of the animals scurring for saftey, from the forest fire, I love the way the lines rhyme, it seems to add to the speed. your work flowed well and was easy to read. Thank you for sharing this with us. Good luck with your work in the future.
Hi LoriB my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challange: As English is my Second language, I will comment on your writing only. This is a very nice shot story of being humble to each others needs looking at the person for who they are and not be judging them as they are different to us. I found the story flowed well,and was easy to read, thank you for thank good luck with your work in the future.
Hi Shylah, my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challange: As English is my second language I will comment on your writing only. This is a beautiful short story Ifeel very much as though it was written from the heart, Thank you for sharing this with us, good luck with your work in the future.
i Brittany Ann, my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challange: As English is my second language I will comment on your writing only. This is a very beautiful story I felt as though it had been written from the heart, I was in tears my self by the time I had fininsed reading it. good luck with your work in the future
Hi Tana, my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviers for the Weekly Newbie Challange: as English is my second language, I will comment on your writing only. This is a very heart rendering story I do not know how you ever come to terms with something like this. maybe your writing helps. Good luck wioth your work in the future.
Hi Jessie my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers of the Weekly Newbie Challange: As English is my second language, I will comment on your writing only. This is a very beautiful piece of Poetry dedicated to your nephew, not many have your insight into Autisum, and how wonderfully gifted these children can be.
My name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challange: As Englisg is my second language, I will comment on your writing only. This is a very beautiful poem, I could feel myself moving along in time to the beat of the butterflys wings, and smell the grass and flowers, thank you for that journey. Good luck with your writing in the future.
Hi my name is Rafikie I am one of the Reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challange: As English is my second language, I will comment on your writing only. This is a very good poem, I really enjoyed reading it, loved the way it flowed from one part to the next I could almost imagine this man as a bee going from woman to woman draining them of their nectare.
Hi my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challange: As English is my second language, I will comment on your writing only. This is a very beautiful poem, I really enjoyed reading it, I found I could relate to it, also I loved the way in which it rhymed on alternate verses. well done good luch with your work in the future.
My name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challange: As English is my second language I will comment on your writing only. This is a wonderful short story, I had a little laugh to myself at the antics of Sammy the Wanderer, now that you have introduced him are you going to write a book about him and his adventures? Good luck with your work in the future.
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