Hello there Debi Wharton. I agree with you this is a cool pan. Oh I do so love brownies but my my blood sugar says whoa! Still imagining that I start at one end of this brownie path and follow it to the end. Darn looks like someone has already started before me. At 1st I saw functional use then looking at it it looks like the delight can be cut into even bars.
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Hello there boleysgirl. Title is attention getting especially when celebrating "Native America [or if you prefer Indigenous Peoples] Heritage Month. Although the first two lines descriptions are generic the rest of the poem was a good read. Last line kind of misleading for it wasn't only the "white men" who were against this type of union.
Hello there again turtlemoon-dohi(peace). Title attention getting and the summary is put to great use as a lead in. Enjoyed what I read as t caught a moment of time and althoughI can not relate I can imagine. Like how you kept details to a minimum not getting into howthe fire looked and such. Thus keeping the focus on the mood. Nice job
Well hello there turtlemoon-dohi(peace). What an appropriate photo for"Native American [or Indigenous Peoples] Month. Although I do not pay homage I can appreciate the artistry displayed. No disrespect intended but this reminds me of an old Hank Williams song "Kaw-Liga" Thanks for posting
Hello there ShelleyA~7 years at WDC, What an appropriate piece of art for "Native American Month" or "Indigenous People" if you prefer. Either way chief is looking majestic on the white steed. Love that the water is clear enough to show a reflection. Thanks for posting
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Hello there Maryann. What a cool chicken indeed. Love the soulful look of head tilted down and the sunglass the epic look of cool. Well if this cool chick can keep strumming she just might save herself yet another day from the soup pot.Thanks for the link goingthere right away to check it out
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Hello there CrazyEagle. Like when authors ask for opinions even if mine is discarded [has happened more than I would like to admit lol] Only three votes I hope you get many more for you consider the path. Well My pick was farts, At the age of 60 rather childish I suppose but I still find them farting. Ever read the picture book "Walter the Farting Dog" not crazy about art but the story had tears rolling out of my eyes. Thanks for posting
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Hello there dogpack:invest in yourself. I looked at the title and said maybe just maybe this could be a crossword puzzle I could actually complete. I mean after all I like animals, right? My high hopes deflated when I read the clues. Still it is nice to know that the subject is actually this deep.
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Hello there T.L.Finch if there were any way to fan you twice I certainly would for I have enjoyed quite a few of your works and this one is no different, I started to read before I read the summary [unusual for me] I wondered if this was about Dylan and sure enough it was. Well written and a fitting tribute to Dylan. A man whos poetic lyrics mad him a legend way before the nobel prize,
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Hello there Mara McBain' Overall I like the art the purple hues in the background the hourglass and everything in it. Please excuse my flippant interpretation. Looks like time is running out on this couple. Soon the will enjoy some of their desires if the sand doesn't suffocate them before on of those things don't knock them out lpl Thanks for posting
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Hello there LinnAnn-Nano 6 &WE GOT THIS. I love haiku. Some are straightforward convey what the mean others might have a double meaning. Yes I have know winter weather like this but while I was suffering depression my mood swings were like this cold warm up a bit then cold again. Either interpretation a great haiku. Thanks for posting
Hello there HuntersMoon yet more prove positive that it was a wise choice to fan you. Title is excellent to draw readers attention and the summary is a great lead in. Rhyme Scheme solid throughout making for an easy read. What made it a fun read were the clever descriptions and humor from beginning to end oh and what an ending
Hello there dogpack:invest in yourself. Title is attention getting summary is befitting. Love the additional clip art. Both versions hold merit so it is hard for me to choice one or the other. Fun cute story Love the part about the colors that fill the room. One thing that perplexes me if home is heaven why is person earthbound. Probably a simple explanation but can't figure it outall the same
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Hello there AWOL Writer.Title caught my attention and the summary is well used. Finally I poetry form I am familiar with but even if I wasn't I would have enjoyed these three anyway. Each one seemed better than the last but perhaps it is just feels that way because I have the experience the last; came out of the blue. Thanks for Posting
Hello there Prosperous Snow. This is prove positive that I made the right to fan you. Very sentimental and flows easy. Descriptive on both physical and emotional levels. Your hurt rings true and many will be able to relate. Sad but perfect last line.
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Hello there Lindsay. Title is attention getting and the well used summary served to whet my anticipation even more. Anticipation rewarded when I read the wonderfully descriptive, although short work, of the live stages symbolized by a rose. Enjoyable read. Thanks for posting.
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Hello there joetrikke. A different title would be more attention getting. The summary is well used as a hook so I read on. Although "color of life" is generic it and the rest of the poem does a nice job of getting your point across. Inventive look at what a poem is. Nice job
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Hello there essence of thought. I can truly say that have never heard of "Archimedes' Pi" form. But can also truly say that I have never read such an exquisite descriptions of the changing colors of the sunset. Memories stirred as I was words transported me back to such a time. Great job!
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Hello there Choconut - Goooo Team Purple!. Title attention getting as far as listing the contest in the summary I hope you won are at least the top three. The step in the first to paragraph really helpful and the rest was a fun romp for me to read. Not a big fan of them myself. Thanks for posting
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Hello there dani_ka. Well autumn will be gone why to seen for me so before the annual chill arrives i will celebrate. Wonderful lead into the explanation of how a woman "named" October would look. Descriptive and nice flow or reading and clever reference to November. Nice job. Only suggestions I have 1]capitalize and 2] separate individual ideas Both will help in the flow of reading
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Hello there again JSS1585. After enjoying you short story about the Peanut Butter Troll immensely I decided to visit your port. Six word stories, the concept is interesting. What I see here are not stories but if done correctly you have a list of good story starters.
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Hello there JSS!585. Where you aware this is "PEANUT BUTTER MONTH'? So on that alone the title caught my attention. This is a fantastic start to what could be a very entertaining story.Flow is great you keep it interesting throughout and did an excellent job hiding the twist to theend. Thanks for posting
Hello there Michael. Title caught my attention right away summary a reinstatement Still this rather generic sentiment, short statement of a work just blew me away. I totally agree then shook my head slowly and wondered how many times is love broken and scorned or not exhibited at all.
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From time to time titobalangue I find reading what others find inspirational run and even enlightening. That is why your title caught my attention. Then all there is is this one line title. Not giving up I went to your port to see if perhaps you posted them there. Sadly this is the only thing.
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Hello there Jalan. Since it is my birthday I am doing a birthday related item raid today. Wow two historic figures born on the same day and year. Wonder how many figures can say the same. But you want to know the most notable birthday in my time? No not mine but rather my daughters. The best birthday Christmas gift I have ever gotten
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